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Title: Chapter 12: The Ruined Cottage
| 05 Sep 2012
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Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed)
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Lovely interplay between Harry and Tim. And I know well the pain and worry of letting your semi-adult children make their own decisions... even when you know they're wrong. Great job. Love this whole series.
Title: Chapter 13: The White Tomb And The Black
| 25 Sep 2012
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Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed)
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I was so excited to see a new update! Lovely chapter, as always.
Title: Chapter 15: Kind
| 03 Dec 2012
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Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed)
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Another lovely chapter. Perhaps we might have another one before Christmas?
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
| 03 Jan 2013
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Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed)
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I guess Severus hasn't considered the possibility of reincarnation. Is Poppy still around for Phoebe to ask her about what potion she gave Severus?
Title: Chapter 19: Dreams and memories
| 19 Jun 2013
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Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed)
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Yay! You finally updated this wonderful story! Lovely chapter. More please?
Title: Chapter 28: Lent Day Twenty Seven
| 27 Mar 2012
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Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed)
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Although I'm enjoying this story I'd like to offer a constructive critcism. You use "was" a lot when simply using the past tense of the verb would be better. Ex:"as Ron was spending a lot of time with Dean and Seamus" could be changed to "Ron spent a lot of time..." Never underestimate the value of a meaty verb. *grin*
Title: Chapter 6: The Truth
| 29 Feb 2012
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Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed)
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Surely by the end of the day, Severus will have more than enough proof that Harry is being abused by his relatives? Great chapter!
After helping Draco Malfoy escape the custody of Sirius Black, Harry endures the wrath of his Godfather. When Snape comes looking for Draco, Harry tells him that Draco has run away, and that he won’t tell him where Draco is unless Snape takes Harry with him. **Note** I'm aware that some of you don't like bad!Sirius stories. Don't worry, Sirius isn't actually in the story much, however there is redemption in the end. It's not so much that he's just bad, more that he's fallen. This story is about how people fall, and how they can make it back out in the end, getting a second chance. It is NOT a character bashing story.
Takes Place: 6th summer, 6th Year
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Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Mean, Snape is Stern
Tags: Addicted!Harry, Animagus!Harry, Azkaban Character, Hospitalization, Injured!Harry, Physical Impairment, Runaway
Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Title: Chapter 4: Souvenirs
| 05 Mar 2012
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Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed)
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I can understand Snape rationalizing Harry's abuse, even in the face of his injuries, but I can't imagine why he seems equally dismissive of Draco's injuries. Shouldn't he be frothing at the bit to get back at Sirius for the damage done to his godson? Even if he does blame Harry, he knows Sirius is the one who caused the physical damage.
Author's Response: He is very angry, but at this point he's still taking things out on Harry in the form of denying him the attention he needs. I also don't believe in revenge, I dont' like reading stories or writing stories with revenge, so there will be none of that. It hasn't been written in yet, but Severus knows that Dumbledore will want this swept under the table. They still need Sirius for Order things. Severus knows this from personal experience already because he has openly shown his dislike for Sirius in the past and Dumbledore has told him to keep a lid on it so to speak. Hope this helps! Thanks for reviewing. I will try to get more of Severu's thoughts about Sirius into the story. There will be ample opportunity for it!
Title: Chapter 5: Made To Be Broken
| 20 Mar 2012
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Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed)
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Took Severus long enough. Nice chapter.
Title: Chapter 9: Rattling Their Cages
| 02 Apr 2012
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Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed)
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Kudos to Ron for taking the news in a mature way and standing by his friend! Now... I wonder what's in those letters from Remus, and will he come to the castle to talk to Harry in person if Harry continues to ignore those letters?
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