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Reviews by Victoire
Halloween approaches and this year the Veil will be its thinnest, yet, allowing those who did not become ghosts the opportunity to interact with the living. Not all spirits are benign, however – and not all wards are fail-proof.
Takes Place: 4th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Desperate Tags: Alternate Universe, Hospitalization Categories: Fic Fests > #19 Halloween 2015, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Violence
Chapters: 7 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 31 Oct 2015 / 31 Oct 2015 Series: None - Challenges: None
Quite a nice story with an interesting plot, although I do second Professor Snape in thinking that letting ghosts into Hogwarts wasn't really clever on Headmaster's side, especially with one child being dead -- although I expected a bit more reaction about that death as well... It's nice that Harry helped Snape in fighting his demon though... I only hope Severus will help him in that as well. Author's Response: I tried to get most of the explanation in there, but the characters got distracted. :P Also, there was definitely more reaction to Colin's death than I ended up showing. I just wanted to be sure to focus primarily on Snape and Harry, as well as the whole Tobias thing. Thanks for the R&R! Harry wonders what it would be like to visit across the veil. Thanks to a rare potion, he just might find out. Can Snape return Harry's soul to his body before it is too late? - Response to the Halloween Fic Fest
Takes Place: 6th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Stern Tags: Alternate Universe Categories: Fic Fests > #19 Halloween 2015, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 09 Nov 2015 / 09 Nov 2015 Series: None - Challenges: None
One technical thing... There's one moment when Harry refers to Snape as 'Mr. Snape'. Kind of weird, since I think 'Professor' would be more appropriate -- as used by you in other places in this story. |
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