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Jyllian [Contact] Better be Hufflepuff!
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I'm totally new at writing Severus and Harry fanfiction, so much support is needed! But so far, P&S has been really nice to me, the reviews people have given me are really motivational...Cheers!

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Common Interests by Snapegirl starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 286]
Sequel to Common Ground. After Halloween, Snape and Harry begin to bond even more as they discover some common interests. But will it stand the test of time... and can Sev protect Harry from the evil that stalks him? AU, Sev and Harry mentor/guardian story

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Kidnapped
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect, Profanity
Chapters: 50 - Completed: No - Updated: 27 Apr 2013 / 18 Oct 2010
Series: Something In Common - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 6: Beggar At the Feast 12 Dec 2010
Reviewer: Jyllian (Signed)
    OMG! Romance coming along! *cheers loudly*

    *chants* kiss, kiss, kiss... get married! Have babies.....*cough, cough*

    sorry, got carried away...*grins*

    Love Lena, please keep her around for a long time!

    That raven's bloody awesome!

    Author's Response:

    Ooh, I like your train of thought and I do plan on keeping Lena around for a VERY long time.

    I adore Skull, he's now one of my favorite animal characters.

    Just updated again so please review!


The Bet by Saphire_Rose starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Snape and McGonagall indulge in a friendly wager to be settled on Halloween.

Written for Halloween 2010

Takes Place: 2nd Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Kind
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Fic Fests > #12 Halloween 2010
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Physical Punishment Spanking
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 31 Oct 2010 / 31 Oct 2010
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: The Bet 23 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Jyllian (Signed)
    L.O.L. Siriusly? Seriously scary...

The Naked Truth by chrmisha starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 15]
What happens when Severus Snape comes upon a heavily warded compartment on the Hogwarts Express containing two students--one of whom is naked. One-shot.

Takes Place: 7th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 05 Nov 2010 / 05 Nov 2010
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: The Naked Truth 29 Apr 2012
Reviewer: Jyllian (Signed)
    This is short and sweet. I loved it.

Somnum Aeternum by Whitetail starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 101]
Harry has no idea what is happening to him or why he cannot remember anything from the past year. But Snape knows what is going on, and he can't tell Harry.

Takes Place: 6th Year, 9 - Post Epilogue (middle aged Harry) - Snape flavour: Snape is Secretive
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Character Death
Chapters: 14 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 15 Jan 2011 / 04 Dec 2010
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 7: The Revelation 05 Jul 2011
Reviewer: Jyllian (Signed)
    I know you posted this story a while ago, but I felt I had to say this before I go on the rest of the story I THOUGHT HE DIED!

    I thought Harry was killed by Voldemort, Ginny was crying for him to come back to life and Malfoy, it seems, is dead as well.

    Author's Response: Ohh, that would have been good too! Don't be afraid to review just because any of my stories are complete. I still LOVE getting reviews for them! I am liking your speculations actually ... Thanks Jyllian!

Season of Warmth by Snapegirl starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 250]
Just before Christmas, Harry hears the basilisk again and believes he's going mad. Why else would he hear a voice that no one else can, talking about blood and death? Unable to take the stress, he flees the castle in the middle of a blizzard. Severus Snape follows him and they end up trapped in a cave, along with a very rare creature. Will they survive to see Christmas morning? Will they finally learn to set aside old grudges and impressions and learn the truth about each other? Christmas 2010 fic! Sick!Harry and sick!Severus, AU, mentor/apprentice, COS.

Takes Place: 3rd summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Runaway, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Profanity
Chapters: 18 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 04 Feb 2011 / 07 Dec 2010
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 6: Tale of a Basilisk 16 Dec 2010
Reviewer: Jyllian (Signed)
    Cool, update soon, I like it... I hope it comes down to a fight between Wise and Icefyre... that should be cool

Title: Chapter 9: Snake's Milk and Honey 05 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Jyllian (Signed)
    Woah, pretty intense chapter you got there, finally breathed after finishing the chappie. Well, update soon!

Title: Chapter 11: A Boy's Worth 10 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Jyllian (Signed)
    Ooooh, sounds er...revengeful? lols. I thought your stories were always very creative, but if you don't mind a bit of a criticism, I think the stories could do with a bit more elaboration instead of sounding like a script in which actors just say the lines and act out the actions:D

    Just a thought

    Author's Response: I'm not exactly sure what you mean by that. I try and put lots of emotion and description into my stories and don't know how much more elaborate I could get without becoming boring. I take it you didn't like the way this chapter played out.  I don't know how much more detail you wanted into Petunia's unreasoning resentment/hatred/prejudice of both Lily and Harry, in this story she's like the books, a nasty person who treats her nephew like dirt and favors her own son.  Or maybe you didn't like how Snape, Albus and Harry reacted to her.  Harry didn't go all nuts on her because he was expecting her to say something like that and he was also a bit in shock and Snape and Dumbledore aren't the kind of people who scream at others, Snape's casting of the extra curse and the Silence spell were what I thought of a signs of extreme anger for him.  The hug at the end was awkward because Harry and Severus do not share the same past as they did in some of my other stories and so behave differently. Again, I don't know exactly what you're implying, unless it's that you think I'm not protraying the characters reactons correctly.

Title: Chapter 11: A Boy's Worth 11 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Jyllian (Signed)
    So I just thought I should clarify my stand, I didn't think there was anything wrong with the plot, how the characters reacted and what they did to Petunia.

    I think you would know from the support you have that your stories are awesome. It wasn't much of details I thought the stories lacked, but maybe more of the thing with writing style?

    I not explaining clearly, am I? Well, if you don't think I'm making any sense, just ignore this.

Title: Chapter 12: Slytherin's Voice 13 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Jyllian (Signed)
    Hahaha, totally loved the "Besides, he was hungry."

    Somewhat a comical effect.

Title: Chapter 14: Doubts and Quarrels 20 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Jyllian (Signed)
    oh, I thought this was ending, but it seems things are still happening. What's with Ice and Wise? Are they a couple or something?


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