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I'm 29, and I live in the wonderful state of Washington. Books are my sanctuary. I love cats, horses, coffee, sushi, and Benedict Cumberbatch - although not necessarily in that order. [Report This]
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Reviews by Mellow Moon

AU: Harry Potter wasn't quite as undamaged as Albus Dumbledore thought.

Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Misc
Rated: T - Warnings: Character Death, Torture
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 23 Jan 2006 / 23 Jan 2006
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Soulspeaking 30 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Mellow Moon (Signed)
    So so sad, but really beautifully written. Well done.

When Severus Snape finds a certain brat-who-lived out after curfew the year after Voldemort's return, it starts a chain of events that he wouldn't have imagined in his wildest dreams. Or nightmares.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Torture
Chapters: 52 - Completed: No - Updated: 27 Oct 2011 / 29 Dec 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 51: But On My Soul 07 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Mellow Moon (Signed)
    I started to read this on FFN, and for some reason I quit before I was completely caught up on it, and now I have no idea why. It's really, really good. Severus' and Alastor's constant bickering is funny. I love his relationship with Harry too and I find it amusing that he's becoming rather indulgent. The song lyrics you've used for the chapter titles are great too. Falcon In the Dive seems especially appropriate and I think it fits Severus' character really well (although, I might be a little biased about that since it comes from my favorite musical). Well done.

Stuck in a tunnel with an injured Harry Potter was the last thing Snape expected to happen. But when Potter get’s rather loose tongued thanks to a pain reliever, will Snape be forced to re-think his judgments of the boy?

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Fic Fests > #6 Winter > Christmas, Misc > Strictly Canon Universe
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 2 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 27 Dec 2008 / 18 Dec 2008
Series: None - Challenges: Christmas
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 25 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Mellow Moon (Signed)
    Very good. All the insane babbling on Harry's part was really funny. And Snape giving Harry the crup at the end was pretty cute. Harry naming him 'Odie' was very much an 'awww' moment.

Severus is found out as a spy among the Death Eaters and runs for his life. Along the way, he makes some shocking discoveries about Harry Potter.

Takes Place: 4th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Resorting, Slytherin!Harry, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 43 - Completed: No - Updated: 04 Jan 2012 / 23 Jul 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Change 27 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Mellow Moon (Signed)
    I like Mrs. Cadogan. She seems to be kind of the mother hen type and I find it rather amusing when Severus is the one being mothered. As for the movie, I don't know. My first thought was Sense and Sensibility because of the name Severus is using, but that didn't come out til '95.

Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42: Memories and the Crumple-Horned Snorkack 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Mellow Moon (Signed)
    I love Luna and you wrote her character well. The perfect mix of perceptive and dreamy. Good chapter.

A guilt-stricken Harry finds solace with a mysterious black stallion, never dreaming it's the Animagus form of Severus Snape. But Harry has a dark secret, one that could mean his death unless Snape discovers it in time. AU, no slash! Angsty!Harry Mentor! Animagus! Snape, some Draco too! HP/HG

Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Creature!fic, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Neglect, Profanity, Romance/Het, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 44 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 16 Aug 2010 / 19 Feb 2010
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 17: Midnight Allies 06 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Mellow Moon (Signed)
    I've read and love almost all your other stories on FFN and I have no idea why i didn't read this one sooner. It's fabulous. I've always loved horses and Moon Fire reminds me of the Black Stallion, which has been one of my favorite movies since I was a kid.

    Author's Response: Thanks! I have a lot of stories, so it's understandable that you missed one.  I adore the Black and did base Moon Fire off of him quite a bit. 

Title: Chapter 21: Midnight in Sherwood Forest 06 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Mellow Moon (Signed)
    Great chapter. I love legends and mythology so reading about some of Selene's history as well as the Green Man. The paragraph at the end with Robin Hood was awesome since he is one of my favorite legendary characters.

    Author's Response: Mine too! Mythology is a favorite study of mine, in fact I have two mythological stories over on ff . net, one is called Ariadne and the other is called Magician of Asgard.  I also love Robin, he's one of my favorite legends and there is some evidence that he may even have been a real historical figure.

Title: Chapter 27: Midnight Uprising 06 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Mellow Moon (Signed)
    You were very creative with the curse for Bella, Lucius, and Peter. They were very fitting punishments.

    Author's Response: Thanks! I try and make the punishment fit the crime and they really do deserve everything they got.

Title: Chapter 31: Midnight Gifts 06 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Mellow Moon (Signed)
    I loved that Harry is a descendant of Robin Hood; that's definitely different.

    Author's Response: Yeah I wanted him to have some legendary ancestors and be related to both the Green Man and Selene.  It's important for him to have that link, it explains why he's so powerful a sorcerer.

Title: Chapter 39: Midnight Consort 07 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Mellow Moon (Signed)
    Well done with the love scenes. Sexy and romantic without being too explicit.

    Author's Response: Thanks, that's what I was going for.  I see no reason why you can't be tasteful in describing romantic scenes, especially because it's HP and there's really no need to go into explicit detail in a series that was originally meant for children.  Besides, I find it more steamy to imagine my own love scenes.


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