Slytherin!
After mistakenly flooing himself to Snape's home the summer after Sirius' death, Harry realizes that his potions master can take matters into his own hands, literally. Warning: This story does involve the spanking of teenagers. If you have a problem with this, do not read and do not review. Any criticisms about CP will be ignored. But I love any other feedback!
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: Snape is Stern
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by Phoenixa Nymphadora
Rated: T
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Warnings: Alcohol Use, Physical Punishment Spanking
Chapters: 29 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 03 Mar 2007 / 03 Feb 2006
Series: A Time and a Place - Challenges: None
Chapters: 29 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 03 Mar 2007 / 03 Feb 2006
Series: A Time and a Place - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - You're on Fire | 21 May 2011 |
| Reviewer: Phoenixa Nymphadora (Signed) |
- Hi pdantzler. I'm reading your story through again and figured i'd just do some random reviews on the chapters. I think I only did one review last time. Normally if I review a fic, I review at least 3 times lol.
I liked this chapter and the "I'm on fire!" thing. I also liked how Harry protested that he shouldn't be punished because he was only rude while being on fire lol. I completely agree with that mannn! hahaha
The one thing that bothers me now (though it didn't seem to bother me the first time or two i've read this chapter......weird, I think i'm just becoming more emotional...lol) is the way Snape acts. Like omg it bothers me so much. He says that Harry has spent his Summers lounging about, not doing anything. When in reality all his holiday was spent cleaning, not being fed and being miserable. I feel so bad for Harry! And since i've read the story, I know things aren't going to change too quickly... : (
But, like I said, this didn't bother me too much the first time or two i've read this, especially with it turning out so well and everything, I think i'm overly emotional right now.
You're an epic writer and whenever I mention my fav. fan fics to people I always include this one along with the sequel and two or three other fanfics. You make me remember you! god I hope that didn't sound creepy....lol
| Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Cleaning Up | 22 May 2011 |
| Reviewer: Phoenixa Nymphadora (Signed) |
- I like this chapter a lot because it seems like this is the point where Sev starts turning more fatherly and all git of the dungeon-ish. I also like that Harry realizes that already he has some sort of affection for Sev and he feels safe with Sev. I still can't believe he was dumb enough to go in the potion's store. I mean seriously! Sev is a POTIONS MASTER, not some common guardian! The man LIVES for potions, and you go into his potion's store! smh...well, I guess he learned.
Hehehe, that's why I love the sequel to this when Harry is like "His potions store Hermione! It was his potions store!" looool
love this chapter, just love how their relationship is starting to mold. I think Harry's so called "punishment" with Sev for 3 days is really helping them. WEEEEEE!!!! On to the next!
I'm so weird...
| Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Cleaning Up | 22 May 2011 |
| Reviewer: Phoenixa Nymphadora (Signed) |
- Oh yea! I wanted to add one more thing!
The Immobulus thing! That seemed a little...cruel. I mean it wasn't cruel to Immobulus him in the first place, a little impatient maybe, but not cruel. But leaving him Immobulized while you're at a Death Eater is mean. Poor Harry.
I have these little seisures at night that force me to stay Immobulized from anywhere from a minute all the way up until my body slips into a sleep after being exhausted, much like the Immobulus you have in this story.
I guess for most ppl it's cool but for me i'm like *biting nails* *cringe* *cringe* oh noooo! loool Cuz I hate having those seizures. Like especially when houses around my house were being ransacked, I was so scared someone would try to rob our house while I was in the middle of a seizure not able to move anything or talk, but could hear everything.
so yea lol, it seemed cruel in my opinion, but as you see, my opinion is a bit strong because I understand how it feels, but for most ppl it's prob nothing. Especially because most people can't get through Sev's wards around the house and Sev would prob risk his life before letting anyone touch Harry.
Just me being overly analytical again!
Severus Snape discovers a hidden truth about Harry's home life. And decides to take matters into his own hands. Please review!
Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 17 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 07 Mar 2004 / 13 Apr 2003
Series: Somewhere I Belong - Challenges: None
Chapters: 17 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 07 Mar 2004 / 13 Apr 2003
Series: Somewhere I Belong - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 8: Muddy | 25 May 2011 |
| Reviewer: Phoenixa Nymphadora (Signed) |
- I don't exactly understand what "That" look is that Jeb is giving Harry, but I do see that he his a freaggin psycho! I'm glad Harry had the smarts to hide his money bag in his cloak, but i'm wondering if it'll stay hidden for long, or if he'll lose his cloak. I mean, at least if anything happens he has a full Gringotts account....right?
Jeb is so crazy...*cringe*
| Title: Chapter 12: Followed | 25 May 2011 |
| Reviewer: Phoenixa Nymphadora (Signed) |
- OMG Jeb! The arse! I hope Sev can find them and save his Harry!!!
| Title: Chapter 17: Guardian | 25 May 2011 |
| Reviewer: Phoenixa Nymphadora (Signed) |
- What a great story! I've off to read the sequel!
After Severus gets guardianship of Harry, things get strange. Harry's friend's are worried, the staff is confused, and Harry begins to have horrible visions. Snape becomes very defensive of his charge.
Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Violence
Chapters: 25 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 22 Jul 2005 / 16 Mar 2004
Series: Somewhere I Belong - Challenges: None
Chapters: 25 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 22 Jul 2005 / 16 Mar 2004
Series: Somewhere I Belong - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 18: The Grounding Begins | 27 May 2011 |
| Reviewer: Phoenixa Nymphadora (Signed) |
- So far this story has been great, but has had more than a few spelling errors and just a few usage errors. I'm quite intrigued as to what will happen to Harry when he arrives at the MoM. I'm kind of confused about Molly actually being able to see Harry, almost as if Harry, Molly and Voldemort were all connected...
I think a 3 week punishment of being stuck in a dungeon bedroom, only allowed to leave for meals and class is too much and bordering on jail like. I know Severus can be stern, but in this story he barely shows his stern side, so it's odd for him to all of a sudden issue an extensive punishment like that when before he allowed Harry to get away with more than enough cheek, amongst other things.
Great story, you are a good writer, but I think you may want to proof read one more time before submitting because of the grammar issues.
| Title: Chapter 25: Epilouge: Going Home | 27 May 2011 |
| Reviewer: Phoenixa Nymphadora (Signed) |
- Great ending! Ha! Voldy got pwned!I have a bad feeling about Lucius though...
I can't believe Vernon showed up, how insane!
Harry has impeccable magic!
Off to read number three! Weeeeeee!!!!
When Harry Potter comes to Hogwarts, Snape is forced to reexamine his initial impressions.
Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 24 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 07 Sep 2007 / 04 Sep 2007
Series: Equilibrium and Evolution - Challenges: None
Chapters: 24 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 07 Sep 2007 / 04 Sep 2007
Series: Equilibrium and Evolution - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 | 08 Jun 2011 |
| Reviewer: Phoenixa Nymphadora (Signed) |
- Awwww how fuzzy! I love how fuzzy Harry and Sev are together! How cute! XD
When Harry wakes one morning, he discovers a badly injured Snape in his living room, and tries to hide him. But Petunia discovers them and reveals a secret she has kept for thirteen years--one that will change the course of Harry's life forever, and Severus's as well. AU, pre-GOF.
Takes Place: 4th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Kidnapped, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Takes Place: 4th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Kidnapped, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Character Death, Physical Punishment Spanking, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 35 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 19 Aug 2008 / 15 May 2008
Series: Prince Manor - Challenges: None
Chapters: 35 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 19 Aug 2008 / 15 May 2008
Series: Prince Manor - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 22: Smidgen's Solution | 08 Apr 2011 |
| Reviewer: Phoenixa Nymphadora (Signed) |
- Awww, that made me feel all fuzzy inside! I'm a bit sad about the James thing. I hoped that maybe Harry could place both he and Severus in the same light and love them both equally, but I see that is not possible with the memory of when he was 13 months.
This story is so making me want to go Shimmerling hunting until I find one ^_^
It would be too epic to have a Shimmerling take up residence in my home!
I like how Harry once again, initiated contact with Sev and hugged him. Sev needed that. He doesn't know it yet, but it seems that he is doing what Harry was doing to himself. He feels bad about betraying Lily to the Dark Lord, and he won't allow himself to be loved. He thinks he deserves to be treated wrong. Poor Sev. I'm so glad that he, Harry and Draco are becoming such a tight knit family. I was so excited to see Draco and Petunia come up with the other faces of people that loved Harry! I was like yayyyyyy *does a jig*!!!! lol I'm so glad Draco and Harry are getting alone!!! I'm not a Draco lover (or liker, for that matter), but in stories like this, the little brat grows on me! lol XD Great chapter! Can't wait to see the Vernon dementor, he seems worse than ol' moldy Voldy to me!