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Title: Chapter 1: Yes Sir
| 10 May 2011
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Reviewer: Rosa_Sweet (Signed)
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Great Story, I loved all the conflicting emotions and how even at the end they did't come to a perfect and happy understanding. That there was still tension. Great Stuff!
Title: Chapter 12: Scary Interruptions
| 16 Aug 2011
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Reviewer: Rosa_Sweet (Signed)
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What a fantastic story. I absolutely love your writing and find the dialogue and actions of the characters believable. Keep up the great work
Author's Response: Thanks for your feedback! Trying to make the characters believable is very important to me, so I'm glad you think I succeeded...
Title: Chapter 11: Hallowe'en
| 08 Jun 2011
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Reviewer: Rosa_Sweet (Signed)
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This is an amazing story I LOVE LOVE LOVE it
Title: Chapter 8: The Unusual Detention
| 12 Jun 2011
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Reviewer: Rosa_Sweet (Signed)
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Lovely chapter, one question though- why doesn't Ron pronounce his 'h's? In the books he always did
Author's Response: I know this is gonna sound silly, but in the first three movies Rupert (who plays Ron) whenever he'd say Harry's name it would sound like 'Arry to me...so when I' writing that who I picture as Ron and so therefore that's how I write him. I apologize if it bothers you, but...well, does it make too much difference? Does it ruin the story? I don't think so, anyway. Does that explain things better?
Title: Chapter 12: Homework and Hogsmeade
| 22 Jun 2011
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Reviewer: Rosa_Sweet (Signed)
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As always your work is clear and excellent. I'm sorry I've been neglecting to review this story but I do love it. Please keep updating at this intensity, it's excellent!
Title: Chapter 13: Gifts
| 27 Jun 2011
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Reviewer: Rosa_Sweet (Signed)
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Such a cute and sweet chapter. I love it. Great work!
Title: Chapter 14: Out of Bounds
| 29 Jun 2011
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Reviewer: Rosa_Sweet (Signed)
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Yay, Lily's up and about and they're well on their way to becoming a stable, gorgeous family unit. Good job.
But, that Quirrel...
Title: Chapter 15: A Perfect Day
| 04 Jul 2011
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Reviewer: Rosa_Sweet (Signed)
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I think possibly the best chapter yet, will you write about the summer or end this part of the series soon?
great work
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
| 10 Jul 2011
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Reviewer: Rosa_Sweet (Signed)
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I love this story. I love a dishevelled,. young Severus and a sweet, little Harry. I love the reality and the coarseness of the situation. Severus isn't perfect but he's trying to do the right thing.
Awesome work
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review!
One night the Veil turned in on itself and spit out two children. Once it is confirmed that the two children are Severus Snape and Siruis Black...and that both children, for some reason refuse to go with anyone other than Harry Potter... things get interesting. Will these two small boys, with the memories of adults, be able to fit in with the already growing family of Harry and Ginny Potter, or will it turn everything inside out?
Takes Place: 8 - Post Hogwarts (young adult Harry)
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Child fic, Deaging
Categories: Reverse Roles > Parental Harry
Title: Chapter 9: Missing!
| 29 Jul 2011
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Reviewer: Rosa_Sweet (Signed)
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That's quite a great chapter. Excellent work (and good work with the speedy updating. I love how you introduced Malfoy and I'm sure he's going to play a good part in the upcoming chapters. I'd also love to see how the rest of the Weasleys fit in around this story as well. :) Great Work
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