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hi there ...

some of you already do know me, either from my way of writing on ff or from my way of answering to your reviews ... for those however who do not know me yet and might wonder what kind of person stands behind those stories ...

I am not a pleasant person to begin with and I can be right out nasty and even a bastard sometimes ... ask my children, they all can tell you, they actually curse me quite often ... I am evil, dark, sarcastic and I do not care what others might think of me ... just consider how I let people suffer in my stories, not to mention children then you know how evil I can be ...

I always say, darker than my shirt is only my soul, and believe me, I only wear black shirts, I think I do not even own other clothing than black ones ... and even coffee has to be as my soul is ... black, hot and strong ...

what leads us to the conclution that I really might be cruel and heartless ... yet let me assure you, I am really good in this ...

Questions in reviews and feedbacks:

as I do not wish to answer the reviews at the beginning or at the end of the new chapters as some other authors do, I will answer them at the end of each week, just before I place a new chapter here, in the reviews, what means you can have a look there for answers, if you so wish ...

I guess, that will be the easiest way. Thank you for reading, and thank you for your feedback ... I am really, really happy that there is interest and that you are pleased with my work. I will of course do my best furthermore ... thanks to all my readers ...

Concerning some mistakes in the stories:

I do know that there are some grammar and spelling mistakes in my stories, but nevertheless they are mine, and mine alone - thus, no, I won't take a beta ... I am responsible for those mistakes and I will have to answer to them or to correct them afterwards ... but those stories are mine, including the good stuff, including the bad stuff and including all my mistakes ...

I will do my best of course to keep them at a minimum, but you cannot make an omelette without breaking eggs my grandmother always said, and as I do not write chapters containing only 500 words but chapters containing 5.000 to 10.000 words, there of course are some mistakes creeping into the stories ... if you feel that those mistakes disturb your reading, then feel free to simply close the tab ...

concerning my sentences being awkward, have you ever read Shakespear? Some might think that this man never got a single sentence written in a straight way ... but honestly, this simply has been his way of writing ... as has every author ... I do know that my way of writing is - let me say - strange, but first, my way of writing in german is just as strange as it is in english as I love such strange ways - to write in a normal way, everyone can do this, after all - and second, it just is my way of writing and you simply will have to bear with it ... or you simply close the tab if you are not ready to deal with this ...

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I have worked long and hard on this picture, more so if you consider that I am not a Master when it comes to working with photos in the first place, and so I really would appreciate it if you asked before simply copying it ... I do not mind you copying the picture for your private collection, but I would not like it being used by you openly as yours ... a word of acknowledgement as to who created it, if you copy it for a not privat use - would be very nice of you ... thank you ...

Twenty-one days

in progress - abuse - imprisonment - angst/hurt/comfort - severitus - fourth year - Gryffindor - rating M - AU

This story is - even if it is only a side story - one of my favourites. I am nearly done with this one - and I have already a sequel planning which will be called ... A few days more ... this story is about the fourth year's Slytherins and Gryffindors being locked up in the potions classroom for twenty-one days due to an accident and how or if they will survive with the help of the Potions Master, Severus Snape. The sequel however will be about the aftermath and what has become of those who - maybe - had survived ...

 

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I'm unsure as to now about posting any other of my stories here on P&S and so I simply will make it dependent on your reaction ...
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Twenty-one Days by evil minded starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 149]
AU / Death Eaters besiege Hogwarts. A spell from Dumbledore is going astray. A cauldron explodes during potions class. And the old castle enfolds its own magic. Can some students survive the next twenty-one days?

Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 15 - Completed: No - Updated: 20 Dec 2011 / 03 Jun 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 6: Day three - Wednesday, fourth of September - part two 08 Aug 2011
Reviewer: evil minded (Signed)
    to all: once again I say thank you to all of you for reading and reviewing this story ...
    to cara-tanaka: :-) I'm sure you do, you've read it already *lol* ... but thanks for reading and reviewing it again :-) ...
    to Nightshade sydneylover150: I do thank you for your words of praise in your review ... I'll try to do my best in future as well ...
    to LegolasAnimeLuver: I'm glad you're liking it, thanks for reviewing ...
    to Pandora: I do thank you for your review and I'm glad that you like my version of our dear Potions Master ... the next chapter is about to come ...
    to DestinedMommy: well, if I had you nearly in tears, then I guess I have done a somewhat decent job :-) ... thanks for reviewing ...
    to b.nolea: jap, it sounds as if they both have ... you'll see in later chapters ... however, thanks for reading and reviewing ...

Title: Chapter 8: Day four - Thursday, fifth of September - part two 29 Aug 2011
Reviewer: evil minded (Signed)
    to all: I of course again do thank all of you for your reviews ... as few of you as are actually reviewing this story concidering that 4800 people have been reading this ... however, I'm glad that YOU are giving them and I say thank you ...
    to cara-tanaka: I have to disagree with you ... this chapter surely was not awesome, funny maybe, a bit, but that's it ... my favourite chapters are the chapters 27 to 29 ... *lol* ... I however do thank you for your review here neveretheless - again ...
    to SpicyKittins: I'm glad that you still like this story and I of course do thank you for giving your review here on this chapter ...
    to Nightshade sydneylover: yes, you definitely are correct - it is amazing, difficult situations bringing out the best or the worst in someone. but during those situations you will learn to know your true friends. I do thank you for sharing your thoughts in your review on this chapter ...

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter one - prologue - how all of this began 22 Jun 2011
Reviewer: evil minded (Signed)
    to all: I do thank all of you for reviewing this story, chapter, never mind if I address you here personally or not - your reviews are very much appreciated ...
    to cara-tanaka: nice to see you here as well, I've just stumbled over this site recently and I thought - try it ... nice to hear you like the story enough to read it again here ... thanks for reviewing ...
    to misundersnape: I do thank you for your suggestion and for sharing your thoughts in this review, but yes, I have already planned out some thing for the next twenty-one days ... I do thank you for your review on this ...
    to anathi: as to your question: my first language is German, but as I have an uncle that is from the states, and as I do not have trouble learning languages - I guess I manage somehow :-) ... I am glad that you think this story is intriguing and I do thank you for your review here in this chapter ...
    to Lea: I do thank you for your greeting and I am glad that you love my stories ... I have settled well here, even if some functions I still have to figure out ... thanks for reviewing here on this story ...
    to all: thanks for reading and reviewing ...

Title: Chapter 3: Day two - Tuesday, third of September 12 Jul 2011
Reviewer: evil minded (Signed)
    to all: I do thank all of you for your reviews, they are very much appreciated.
    to cara-tanaka: it is amazing that anyone is ready to read this story a second time, as I never considered me being an author like some others, but I am glad that you like it so much ... thanks for giving your review here as well ...
    to Sevie Prince: thanks for reviewing this chapter here, I'm glad that you like it ...
    to dancingkatz: /me claps hands in excitement ... thanks for the box of chocolate frogs, I love them ... and I've been eating them while writing the very last chapter to this story here ... and thanks for reviewing and your encouraging words too ...
    to Fmh: you're quite welcome and I have to thank YOU for reviewing ...
    to Tempest in Blue: I'm glad you love this story and I do thank you for giving your review ...
    to Yvln: :-) ... yes, the idea was a bit silly at first, I think, but it went into a complete story - thanks for reviewing here and I'm glad you like it ...
    to tatis: I'm sorry, but I can't understand your review, I only can hope that it wasn't anything too bad ... :-) ... but thanks for reviewing ...
    to Reha: your review as well, thank you for giving it ... :-) ...

Title: Chapter 4: Day two - Tuesday, third of September - part two 19 Jul 2011
Reviewer: evil minded (Signed)
    to all: I do thank all of you for your reviews here on this chapter, they are very much appreciated and I hope that you will go on reading and reviewing this story ...
    to cara-tanaka: I will, I will - today :-) ... thanks for reviewing here as well ...
    to DareToBeWeird: I'm glad that you like the story and I do thank you for your review ...
    to LegolasAnimeLuver: your suggestion is a good one and makes sense, but you soon will see that it won't be possible giving Harry a stronger does of dreamless sleep. I of course won't tell you the reason, you'll see ... :-) ... I however do thank you for sharing your thoughts in this review on the chapter/story ...
    to Pandora: at first - I do thank you for reviewing all four existent chapters. I am glad that you so far seem to like the story. I however won't tell you how they will get out of there and I fear it will be some time and chapters more until you learn how they get out - or IF they get out ... again, thanks for your reviews ...
    to Anonymous: never mind, you're trying and that's what counts most - my english isn't much better, son don't worry ... I'm glad that you love my little story and I do thank you for your review ...
    to DestinedMommy: I will try of course and the update will be online today ... thanks for reviewing ...
    to Nightshade sydneylover: of course I will, dear Nightshade, and I'm glad that you like the plot ... thanks for your review on this ...
    to Fmh: you're quite welcome, but it is I who has to say thanks - for your reviews ...
    well - on to the next chapter then ...

Title: Chapter 5: Day three - Wednesday, fourth of September 27 Jul 2011
Reviewer: evil minded (Signed)
    to all: sorry for not answering to your reviews sooner, I'll do so right now ... however, I do thank you all of you for giving a review and I apologize now for not getting a new chapter online during August as - well, right now vacation is much more important to me ...
    to cara-tanaka: thanks for reviewing here again, I'm glad that you like the story enough to read it a second time ...
    to Nightshade: jap, I agree with you - Crabbe and Goyle being hungry ends up in stupidity - with Ron it's a different story ... I however won't tell you how they will get out ... thanks for reviewing ...
    to DestinedMommy: I'm glad you liked the chapter, thanks for reviewing ...
    to Delphin: I am glad that you see it that way, because I don't think that I'm so strong in English ... :-) ... thanks for reviewing here anyway ...
    to Fmh: you're quite welcome and I have to thank YOU ...
    to p stotts: well, I think I won't tell you what will happen when all the edible things are run out ... you'll have to wait and see ... *smirk* ... but thanks for your review ...
    to Legolas: I'm glad that you think so ... thanks for reviewing ...
    to SevSnape: I do thank you for greeting me here on this site ... I'm still not used to everything here, you see, I'm a woman and even if I'm not blond - that's too difficult for me somehow ... I always need more time on such things than others ... however, I do thank you for reviewing here ...
    to LJ: /me blushes ... uhm ... actually, I don't think that this is SUCH a good work. I do admit meanwhile that it might be not so bad, but surely nothing that is really amazing ... but I do thank you for reviewing here ...

Title: Chapter 7: Day four - Thursday, fifth of September 18 Aug 2011
Reviewer: evil minded (Signed)
    to all: I'm still on holidays, but I'll update here nevertheless ... I do thank all of you for reading and reviewing the last chapter ...
    to SevSnape: yes, hi there too :-) ... thanks for reviewing ...
    to cara-tanaka: I'm glad to hear this and I do thank you for reading again and reviewing again ...
    to nightshade-sydnylover: I do hope that you won't expect I'd answer any of your questions ... *lol* ... you'll have to read the upcoming chapters ... I however am glad that you seem to like the story and I do thank you for reviewing ...
    to phoenix: I agree with you, Snape does need sleep as well, and he'll get it, just wait ... thanks for sharing your thoughts on your review ...
    to DestinedMommy: thanks for reviewing here and I'm glad you liked it ... I'll update as soon as this site allows ...
    to tabbycat: maybe Ron would be better, maybe not - thatfor this is fic ... you'll wait and see what will happen with Ron in future ... but thanks for reading and reviewing ...
    to Fmh: I'm glad you liked this and I do thank you for reviewing ...

Title: Chapter 9: Day five - Friday, sixth of September 12 Sep 2011
Reviewer: evil minded (Signed)
    to all: I do thank all of you for your reviews here on this chapter ...
    to Nightshade: no - you won't see Merlin ... it's just a well ... as a wizard you say Merlin! as a substitution for people calling out "Oh, my God!" ... *lol* ... you however always have to fear for the students' safety if a story is written by me, my dear Nightshade, I always have them suffering so our dear Potions Master has to patch them up again ... all in all - I do thank you for your review here ...
    to PadyandMoony: I don't know of Portugese, but in German as well as in English, I tend to speaking like my tongue has been grown *lol* even if I came up with this explanation right now ... it might be not the most correct English, but English is like any language - people say things that makes other people staring - I do it in German as well as in English and honestly, I like it ... however, I do thank you for pointing it out and I do thank you for the review ...
    to Cara-Tanaka: again I do thank you for the review you here have given as well ...
    to Severus Draconis: I'm glad to hear - or rather read - that this story is one of your favourites ... and I do thank you for the review ...

Title: Chapter 10: Day five - Friday, sixth of September - part two 21 Sep 2011
Reviewer: evil minded (Signed)
    to all: I do thank all of you for your reviews you have given on this chapter ... and yes, the next chapter is on it's way ...
    to badgerlady: seeing that I already have finished this story - I surely won't give up on it ... for the beta - no, I won't take one and I guess I will place the same reasoning I have on my profile at ff here at P&S also as I don't want to explain myself over and over ... however, I do thank you for the review ...
    to Nightshade: concerning reviews dropping off - I don't think that your reasoning is really the cause as 1) I never expected a novel from anyone and just a few words of like or dislike I would be perfectly satisfied with. do not misunderstand my words, I DO appreciate your lengthy review very much ... 2) there's always a time in the year during which people have to do one thing or another and 3) if you take fifteen minutes to read the chapter, I think people can take one minute to give a few words to something that had taken the author more than just a few hours to work on - it only would be appropriate in my humble opinion - at least that is the what I do. I have grown up like this, aknowledging people's work - what is the reason as to why I always answer to peoples' reviews, to acknowledge the time they take for acknowledging my work.
    however, you really think people here would like "tRoR" ?? I'm not so sure, I have to admit that at the moment ... but well, I at least promise that I will think about posting it here ... "Cartons of milk" it actually came out of "21 days", it was just an idea, but one that worked, as it seemed. Thanks for reading and reviewing ...
    to Cara-Tanaka: do not worry, I definitely WON'T stop posting over at ff, I just considered it here for some time, that's all ... I don't know what to do with my other stories, we'll see ... I to thank you for yet again reading and reviewing ...
    to Tsuby: I'm glad that you seem to like the story, an author is always glad hearing such ... thanks for your review despite the trouble reviewing with your mobile ...
    to DestinedMommy: no, I did not post the past three chapters at once but at a weekly basis and I can't answer you why you have not been notified upon the updates - sometimes such happens - but at least you got to read them now :-) ... however - I do always answer the reviews of my readers, even if I do not send them personal notes but do so here in the review box ... I do thank you for reading and reviewing this ...
    to hawkwench: *lol* ... just wait until I - maybe - will post "cartons of milk" that actually is a story of mine ... thanks for reading and reviewing ...
    to teddybear: I'm glad that you seem to like the story and don't mind, I didn't give up on it as it is already finished ... I just do not wish placing it here all at once ... thanks for the review ...
    to Severus Draconis: ah, I guess you'll learn about Ron's problem during this chapter ... so - don't worry :-) ... thanks for your review ...
    to Slytherensangel: :-) ... just read the title of the story ... :-) ... thanks for your review ...
    to dancingcat: hmm, yes, I guess that a lot of people think that I made Snape a better teacher than what they gave him credit for, but well - that's the way I see him after all ... I have to agree on your comment about Ron ... :-) ... thanks for reviewing ...
    to Pandora: they will have to survive first, before Snape can give Harry a home ... don't forget this :-) ... but I do thank you for your review ...
    to Angel: my daughter always said Ron was cute while being a first or second year, but she neither didn't really like him, understandable in my opinion ... Hermione's right after all, his emotional capacity finds space on a tea spoon ... thanks for your review here ...

Title: Chapter 11: Day six - Saturday, seventh of September 09 Oct 2011
Reviewer: evil minded (Signed)
    to all: I do thank all of you for your reviews, they are very much appreciated, even if I might not address all of you here personally ...
    to Nightshade sydneylover150: yes, I guess I could have him passing out milk, but I won't promise you anything as you simply will have to wait and see ... :-) ... thanks for reviewing ...
    to Vanime: yes, I of course will continue this story here on P&S, as I never would stop in my work and disappoint my readers, but I'm not sure about others - I fear you will have to look at ff for my other stories ... I however do thank you for not only the trouble you went through for being able to review, but for your review to begin with as well ... and more than just one chapter ...
    to jaw: I'm glad that you seem to like this story and well - ah, never mind, thanks for reading and reviewing ...
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