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Reviews by Griffin Raven
What happens when a brain damaged Harry and a transgender Hermione both get sorted into Slytherin? Snape's not sure, but he thinks it's likely to be an interesting term. This story follows various first years through the trials of their first year
Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None Tags: Alternate Universe, Slytherin!Harry Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 25 - Completed: No - Updated: 09 Jul 2017 / 31 Oct 2011 Series: None - Challenges: Minor Canon Character, Barrier to learning
I'd really love to see how annoying little Draco would "try" to justify his unSlytherin/UnMalfoy behaviour to his father, hehe!
any appearances or sending any letters to Harry? I did so enjoy the particular Harry way of dealing with the troll as it was certainly very different from any other story I have read so far which also featured that event!
opinion of Harry's supposeded academic ability & that he might be hindering other students? Because if his biased opinion was only based upon information from his own son Draco, & the children of other death eaters....then he should have at the very least have gathered his "own" evidence with his own eyes rather than upon the testimony of uneducated, jealous children. Especially considering how much young Draco appears to actively dislike Harry, & his own failed attempt to cause him injury or worse which resulted in him making an apology to his house & detentions...wonder how Lucius would feel then? Whilst some might argue that Harry isn't a "sharp, intelligent" child like his peers, but he is, he's just wired & put together a little differently or perhaps his view of everyone & the world is totally unique! Yet Harry has managed to form friendships from within all houses & created a closer connection wiith his formidable head of house & guardian Severus...not something that anyone else has managed, hmm? Just what does Albus think about Harry, academically, his magical skills & his ability to fulfill the prophecy? 153 years old, long after the defeat of the greatest Dark lord of all times, Harry Potter divorcee is alone and depressed. Contemplating suicide his familiar finds a way for him to go back and fix what he regrets not doing the first place.
Takes Place: 1st summer before Hogwarts, 1st Year - Snape flavour: None Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Deaging, Resorting, Slytherin!Harry, Snape-meets-Dursleys, SuperPower! Harry, Time Travel Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 18 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 22 Nov 2012 / 09 Nov 2011 Series: None - Challenges: None
there still be an accident during the 1st yrs flying lesson involving Neville, or will Harry prevent it only to perhaps be hurt himself? So Harry's made tenantive friends with both Draco and Ron, but just who else will he extend his hand in friendship to? How exactly will Harry (with the aid of allies) be able t reduce to rivalry and tension between all 4 houses but instead to foster friendship betwen the houses as it should be? Perhaps by teaching those muggle-raised & muggleborn about the wizarding world and those things that wizard- born take for granted...wizard studies? Common/study rooms for each years regardless of houses... the introduction of more social clubs or sports activities (as quidditch only involves actively a very small % of the students) the other students need sports, as those improve physical stamina which is good for wizards magical training, yes? Cultural nights with elves introducing food from different cultures, the production of drama/play, talent nights...you know activities which will bring about a more community feel to the school, so that there is an activity or group for every student regardless if there into sports, playing chess or other muggle games, play instruments or dance! I also think that "all" of the staff are very overworked particularly the head of houses they all need deputy heads of house, or the staff at the very least needs an administration officer, perhaps also a peer counsellor (with the necessary guidance/training) to offer further support to students in particular the 1st yr students. The introduction of some of the more useful muggle items such as school work done in notebooks & the use of muggle ink pens instead of quills...little things like that! As you can tel this story has me thinking a lot about how the school actually works...which just shows how great this story is, otherwise I wouldn't been thinking about it so much!! Author's Response: Yes in the new Chapter I put up someone will get hurt but its different the before It wont be Neville, he'll be saved It was someone else he's close to though. I'm not sure who else, I havnt got that far yet lol. Although most of those questions will have to wait for later chapters lest I give something awayYou have some really good ideas though that I will def use if you dont mind.
I'll have to keep alot of what you said in mind, like I said there are some reeally great ideas..
call Harry 153yrs selfish in his reasons for going back. Despite how much good happened after the defeat of Voldemort, having a family...those deaths in the war never really left Harry. I think his soul remained wounded. But how will Harry handle seeing so many of his old friends both young & some alive again...will he be able to handle the emotional upset?
Harry does want Severus, Sirius & Remus to know the truth about him....but at the same time its also clear that he doesn't want to lose his second chance at having both a childhood but also a less troubled time at Hogwarts? At times its very easy to fall prey to either hating/or simply being very annoyed at Albus too-many-names Dumbledore who just can't seem to stop himself from meddling in others lives. But Harry does seem pretty determined that Severus won't spy anylonger & nor will he nor any of there friends die or be sacrificed in the war? Author's Response: It does doesnt it...he wants that chance at childhood..and honestly who can blame him? Albus will get better, because I loved him in the first 3 books, at the moment just be a bit annoyed, he will come to see Harry's way with time lol. I cant answer your last question without giving the story away..lol Third in the series Days We Learn From. In a darkening world where the war looms ahead, things couldn’t be more wrong. A new hand has been dealt out, and now Severus isn’t well, and this he knows. But what is it that is causing the fainting spells, and how long can he keep this a secret from his two adopted sons, Harry and Draco? More importantly, with the Dark Lord still furious over the discovery of Severus as a spy, how long can the little family continue to escape his clutches?
Takes Place: 6th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Loving Tags: Alternate Universe Categories: Misc > All written in Snape's POV, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Character Death, Romance/Het, Violence
Chapters: 28 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 19 Apr 2012 / 04 Dec 2011 Series: Days We Learn From - Challenges: None
Author's Response: Oh, read the first two stories! This is the third in the series! You can find it all out in Days We Learn From. On Harry's sixteenth birthday a potion wears off.
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: Girl!Harry, Slytherin!Harry Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Romance/Het
Chapters: 27 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 02 May 2012 / 05 Dec 2011 Series: None - Challenges: None
I especially can't wait to learn more about the truth behind Harry's past of just why Lily chose to hide her child's true gender...and why she'd risk giving her child such a potentially deadly potion? But also to learn how Severus and Harry will get on together once Harry has been told the truth about herself? Just what will Harry, decide to do about his past persona as "Harry James Potter" but also about her education....what name will she chose to be called? What will happen in regards to Dumbledore, her friends, the ministry, her "Potter" vaults?
Though enjoyed the blushing conversation between Severus and Bill, in Harry's presense about just what supplies needed to be got for the girl, including those for her menses...oh the blush from the guys, hehe! Perception can be everything. After the incident with the Philosopher's Stone and Voldemort, Harry falls into a magical slumber and wakes months later on August 31st as an entirely different boy who is about to begin his first year at Hogwarts. Sorted into Slytherin as someone else, Harry experiences Hogwarts in an entirely new way. He realises that there is more to Slytherin than it appears, and even more to their Head of House as well. Before long, acting as someone else isn't nearly as hard as fighting the need to reverse it, or at least find out what happened to “Harry Potter”.
Takes Place: 3rd summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: Resorting, Slytherin!Harry Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Neglect
Chapters: 4 - Completed: No - Updated: 18 Apr 2012 / 22 Dec 2011 Series: None - Challenges: None
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