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Totally love all types of Harry Potter stories; crossovers, mentor, guardian, apprentice, creature fics, romance, slash, deaging stories, manipulative Albus Dumbledore.

Trying to write my own story on FanFiction.Net, but haven't yet descided if I've managed or will do justice to the wonderful characters that were all allowed to play with even if we can't own them....sigh!

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What happens when a brain damaged Harry and a transgender Hermione both get sorted into Slytherin? Snape's not sure, but he thinks it's likely to be an interesting term. This story follows various first years through the trials of their first year

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 25 - Completed: No - Updated: 09 Jul 2017 / 31 Oct 2011
Series: None - Challenges: Minor Canon Character, Barrier to learning
Title: Chapter 7: Week 7 15 Feb 2012
Reviewer: Griffin Raven (Signed)
    I really, really do hope that at sometime Severus is forced to either write to/or call Lucius about his son Draco's behaviour because
    I'd really love to see how annoying little Draco would "try" to justify his unSlytherin/UnMalfoy behaviour to his father, hehe!

Title: Chapter 10: Week 10 15 Feb 2012
Reviewer: Griffin Raven (Signed)
    Hmm...I can't also help wondering just what little Harry would make of Remus Lupin with him being a werewolf and all? Will he be making
    any appearances or sending any
    letters to Harry?

    I did so enjoy the particular Harry
    way of dealing with the troll as it was certainly very different from any other story I have read so far which also featured that event!

Title: Chapter 11: Week 11 15 Feb 2012
Reviewer: Griffin Raven (Signed)
    Just how did Lucius Malfoy base his
    opinion of Harry's supposeded academic ability & that he might be
    hindering other students? Because
    if his biased opinion was only based upon information from his own son Draco, & the children of other death eaters....then he should have at the very least have
    gathered his "own" evidence with his own eyes rather than upon the
    testimony of uneducated, jealous
    children. Especially considering how
    much young Draco appears to actively dislike Harry, & his own failed attempt to cause him injury or worse which resulted in him making an apology to his house & detentions...wonder how Lucius would feel then?

    Whilst some might argue that Harry
    isn't a "sharp, intelligent" child like
    his peers, but he is, he's just wired
    & put together a little differently or perhaps his view of everyone & the world is totally unique! Yet Harry has managed to form friendships from within all houses & created a closer connection wiith his formidable head of house & guardian Severus...not something that anyone else has managed, hmm? Just what does Albus think
    about Harry, academically, his magical skills & his ability to fulfill
    the prophecy?

153 years old, long after the defeat of the greatest Dark lord of all times, Harry Potter divorcee is alone and depressed. Contemplating suicide his familiar finds a way for him to go back and fix what he regrets not doing the first place.

Takes Place: 1st summer before Hogwarts, 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Deaging, Resorting, Slytherin!Harry, Snape-meets-Dursleys, SuperPower! Harry, Time Travel
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 18 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 22 Nov 2012 / 09 Nov 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Return of the Sorting Hat 08 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Griffin Raven (Signed)
    I can hardly wait to see just what young/or rather old Harry will do next. Sometimes the more you change things the more some things stay the same...I mean will
    there still be an accident during the 1st yrs flying lesson involving
    Neville, or will Harry prevent it only to perhaps be hurt himself?

    So Harry's made tenantive friends with both Draco and Ron, but just who else will he extend his hand in friendship to? How exactly will Harry (with the aid of allies) be able t reduce to rivalry and tension between all 4 houses but instead to foster friendship betwen the houses as it should be? Perhaps by teaching those muggle-raised & muggleborn about the wizarding world and those things that wizard-
    born take for granted...wizard studies? Common/study rooms for each years regardless of houses...
    the introduction of more social clubs or sports activities (as quidditch only involves actively a very small % of the students) the other students need sports, as those improve physical stamina which is good for wizards magical training, yes? Cultural nights with elves introducing food from different cultures, the production of drama/play, talent nights...you know activities which will bring about a more community feel to the school, so that there is an activity or group for every student regardless if there into sports, playing chess or other muggle games, play instruments or dance!

    I also think that "all" of the staff are very overworked particularly the head of houses they all need deputy heads of house, or the staff at the very least needs an administration officer, perhaps also a peer counsellor (with the necessary guidance/training) to offer further support to students in particular the 1st yr students. The introduction of some of the more useful muggle items such as school work done in notebooks & the use of muggle ink pens instead of quills...little things like that! As you can tel this story has me thinking a lot about how the school actually works...which just shows how great this story is, otherwise I wouldn't been thinking about it so much!!

    Author's Response:

    Yes in the new Chapter I put up someone will get hurt but its different the before It wont be Neville, he'll be saved It was someone else he's close to though.

    I'm not sure who else, I havnt got that far yet lol. Although most of those questions will have to wait for later chapters lest I give something awayYou have some really good ideas though that I will def use if you dont mind.

     

    I'll have to keep alot of what you said in mind, like I said there are some reeally great ideas..


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Return to Diagon Alley 17 Feb 2012
Reviewer: Griffin Raven (Signed)
    Absolutely wicked story....and I don't think anyone could remotely
    call Harry 153yrs selfish in his reasons for going back.

    Despite how much good happened
    after the defeat of Voldemort, having a family...those deaths in the war never really left Harry. I think his soul remained wounded.

    But how will Harry handle seeing so
    many of his old friends both young
    & some alive again...will he be able
    to handle the emotional upset?

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Return of the Sorcerors Stone 17 Feb 2012
Reviewer: Griffin Raven (Signed)
    It almost seems that at times that
    Harry does want Severus, Sirius &
    Remus to know the truth about
    him....but at the same time its also
    clear that he doesn't want to lose
    his second chance at having both a
    childhood but also a less troubled
    time at Hogwarts?

    At times its very easy to fall prey to
    either hating/or simply being very
    annoyed at Albus too-many-names Dumbledore who just can't seem to stop himself from meddling in others lives. But Harry
    does seem pretty determined that
    Severus won't spy anylonger & nor
    will he nor any of there friends die
    or be sacrificed in the war?

    Author's Response:

    It does doesnt it...he wants that chance at childhood..and honestly who can blame him?

    Albus will get better, because I loved him in the first 3 books, at the moment just be a bit annoyed, he will come to see Harry's way with time lol.

     I cant answer your last question without giving the story away..lol


Third in the series Days We Learn From. In a darkening world where the war looms ahead, things couldn’t be more wrong. A new hand has been dealt out, and now Severus isn’t well, and this he knows. But what is it that is causing the fainting spells, and how long can he keep this a secret from his two adopted sons, Harry and Draco? More importantly, with the Dark Lord still furious over the discovery of Severus as a spy, how long can the little family continue to escape his clutches?

Takes Place: 6th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Loving
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Misc > All written in Snape's POV, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Character Death, Romance/Het, Violence
Chapters: 28 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 19 Apr 2012 / 04 Dec 2011
Series: Days We Learn From - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: The First Shadow 08 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Griffin Raven (Signed)
    I'm definitely very intrigued by this story. I can't help wondering just how and when Severus came to have both Harry and Draco as his wards/sons?

    Author's Response: Oh, read the first two stories! This is the third in the series! You can find it all out in Days We Learn From.

On Harry's sixteenth birthday a potion wears off.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Girl!Harry, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Romance/Het
Chapters: 27 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 02 May 2012 / 05 Dec 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 08 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Griffin Raven (Signed)
    Wow....what a truly awesome start to this story, for which I certainly want to read more!

    I especially can't wait to learn more
    about the truth behind Harry's past
    of just why Lily chose to hide her child's true gender...and why she'd risk giving her child such a potentially deadly potion? But also to learn how Severus and Harry will get on together once Harry has been told the truth about herself? Just what will Harry, decide to do about his past persona as "Harry James Potter" but also about her education....what name will she chose to be called? What will happen in regards to Dumbledore, her friends, the ministry, her "Potter" vaults?

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 10 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Griffin Raven (Signed)
    Wow...this story just keeps getting better and better! I can hardly wait to read about Bill and Harry's little shopping trip to Harrod's....hmm, Severus, Bill and Harry really do need to think of a "new name" for Harry? I mean you can't have a girl called "Harry", it's just asking to attract attention, which certainly is something they don't want to do!

    Though enjoyed the blushing conversation between Severus and Bill, in Harry's presense about just what supplies needed to be got for the girl, including those for her menses...oh the blush from the guys, hehe!

Perception can be everything. After the incident with the Philosopher's Stone and Voldemort, Harry falls into a magical slumber and wakes months later on August 31st as an entirely different boy who is about to begin his first year at Hogwarts. Sorted into Slytherin as someone else, Harry experiences Hogwarts in an entirely new way. He realises that there is more to Slytherin than it appears, and even more to their Head of House as well. Before long, acting as someone else isn't nearly as hard as fighting the need to reverse it, or at least find out what happened to “Harry Potter”.

Takes Place: 3rd summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Resorting, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Neglect
Chapters: 4 - Completed: No - Updated: 18 Apr 2012 / 22 Dec 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 4: Friendships 14 Oct 2013
Reviewer: Griffin Raven (Signed)
    I can't wait to see just what kind of reaction Jaden and Kevin will get when they go to meet Hagrid? Will Severus discover anything new about Jaden....will he learn the truth about Jaden use to be Harry Potter?


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