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Totally love all types of Harry Potter stories; crossovers, mentor, guardian, apprentice, creature fics, romance, slash, deaging stories, manipulative Albus Dumbledore.

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After helping Draco Malfoy escape the custody of Sirius Black, Harry endures the wrath of his Godfather. When Snape comes looking for Draco, Harry tells him that Draco has run away, and that he won’t tell him where Draco is unless Snape takes Harry with him. **Note** I'm aware that some of you don't like bad!Sirius stories. Don't worry, Sirius isn't actually in the story much, however there is redemption in the end. It's not so much that he's just bad, more that he's fallen. This story is about how people fall, and how they can make it back out in the end, getting a second chance. It is NOT a character bashing story.

Takes Place: 6th summer, 6th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Mean, Snape is Stern
Tags: Addicted!Harry, Animagus!Harry, Azkaban Character, Hospitalization, Injured!Harry, Physical Impairment, Runaway
Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Drug use, Neglect, Physical Punishment Non-Spanking, Profanity, Romance/Het, Violence
Chapters: 30 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 28 Jul 2015 / 26 Feb 2012
Series: None - Challenges: Unforgivable Sirius
Title: Chapter 1: The One's We Trust 26 Oct 2013
Reviewer: Griffin Raven (Signed)
    Awesome beginning to this story. Though wonder why Severus didn't check Harry's story by reading his mind. But I suppose Severus's quite upset.

    Author's Response: Occlumency doesn't always play a part in stories on P and S, and it would have been rude for Severus to just break into Harry's mind I think.  I know some authors like to have him just look into Harry's mind, but I don't think it's always a good thing to have him do that.  Thanks for the review.

Title: Chapter 5: Made To Be Broken 26 Oct 2013
Reviewer: Griffin Raven (Signed)
    Just how will Severus prove or disprove the raving's of Sirius Black about Harry actually being Severus's son? If so why weren't Severus or Harry told - more importantly just who knew the truth yet kept it from them? Wonder how this will effect the war against Voldemort and his death eaters? Will anyone try to prevent Severus, taking custody of both Harry and Draco?

Title: Chapter 7: What Abides 26 Oct 2013
Reviewer: Griffin Raven (Signed)
    I think Harry could do with experience some of the summer as a little child - it might help him over his experience with what happened with Sirius and it would help Severus and Harry bond together (if they are truly father and son)? Plus I'd love to read about Severus handling a little Harry (along with Draco), hmm that would definitely be fun! Hope Sirius gets punished for what he did to both Draco and Harry?

Title: Chapter 9: Rattling Their Cages 26 Oct 2013
Reviewer: Griffin Raven (Signed)
    If Harry is Severus's son then why does he look like a clone of James Potter with Lily Potter's eyes?

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review.  So many stories say he's a clone, but mine never did, and I don't think mine mentions his eyes at all.


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