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Following the death of Sirius, Harry isn't sure what to make of the sudden appearance of a six-year-old boy. The pair form a bond, unaware they're half-brothers, and Harry decides to take the boy to Hogwarts and hide him there. To aide the boy's education, Harry anonymously exchanges letters with Snape.

A story of a how a young boy becomes a father-figure to another while their own father is oblivious of their biological existence. But can sixteen-year-old Harry give what he himself has not gained? Can he go an entire year without being discovered? Just how far will Severus go to find the writer of those letters...Or are some things best left unknown?

Takes Place: 6th summer, 6th Year, 7th summer, 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry) - Snape flavour: Canon Snape
Tags: Alternate Universe, Child fic, Kidnapped, Runaway, Sibling Addition, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Alcohol Use, Character Death, Neglect, Violence
Chapters: 33 - Completed: No - Updated: 06 Oct 2013 / 04 Mar 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 31: As the Father Sleeps 09 May 2012
Reviewer: Alozk (Signed)
    Hey!
    I found this story three days ago, I decided to give it a shot and couldn't stop reading until I get here haha. To be honest at first I didn't think I was going to like it because I usually don't like child fics because many are very unreal and don't have a plot. However your fic very well written I love how you phrase everything.
    I love the story and love the fact that is very different from what we're used to read in severitus challenge, the usual letter from Lily and the surprise, this is different because both parts have had time to know a little bit from the other and when they'll know the truth is not going to be such a big shock.
    I love this Severus I think he is mostly in character which is hard to achieve (I can't do it I must say haha), Toby is at the same time awesome and I don't like him haha, he's way too mature to be six years old but he's very cool and I loved his heroic crusade to save his daddy, it was very sweet.
    I can't wait to know what is going to happen next!! I'm eager to know about the conversation they'll be having and the memory!!!
    I hope to read you soon!!

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