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Title: Chapter 6: A Fresh Start
| 05 Jul 2011
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Reviewer: Natasi (Signed)
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Great chapter, I am really excited that Harry's tutoring is starting. I have been looking forward to learning more about Harry's ability, it is a really original idea!
Title: Chapter 17: The Child Under The Tree
| 07 Jul 2011
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Reviewer: Natasi (Signed)
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Holy sh!t snacks, thank you for not killing Harry!
I look forward to the next chapter, great job!
Author's Response: You're very welcome :)! To be honest, I don't much like deathfics, so I never really intended to kill him... but I like cliffhangers ;). Thank you very much for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
| 09 Jul 2011
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Reviewer: Natasi (Signed)
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For some reason, I did not want to read this story at first, but I am so glad I did! You writing is solid and you present an original storyline.
I look forward to seeing where you go with this. I am guessing that Harry did some major wish magic.
Author's Response: Well I'm glad you read it! :) Yep, Harry used his magic to get to Sev's. Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 2: the meeting
| 19 Jul 2011
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Reviewer: Natasi (Signed)
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For the love of goodness, spell check and beta, beta, beta
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: That's What He Was...
| 11 Jul 2011
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Reviewer: Natasi (Signed)
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Yes, definitely continue, the beginning is very promising and you can go a lot of different directions.
I am thinking that since voldemort is truly dead, Dumbledore will be quite unconcerned with Harry's welfare. He may even start to see him in a negative light being that he is in slytherin and will probably even be reminded of Tom riddle.
I like how you set Harry up with a very deeply ingrained negative self-perception. He apparently thinks that his relatives are right and he deserves to be treated harshly, I think you should really keep harry in that mindset for awhile. I foresee a lot of self-injury due to his internalized negativity. Ooh, a scene just popped in my head. Dumbledore mistakes Harry's self injurious behaviour as violence directed at others. For example, he sees a bit of blood on Harry's shirt and instead of realizing that it is Harry's, he assumes that it is either someone else's or that harry hurt an animal, thus fueling his future dark lord theory.
I don't know how I came up with all of that from a 980 word beginning, but for some reason, you caused my plot bunny to give birth to a litter of baby plot bunnies.
Author's Response: Oh, I LOVE that idea, you are brilliant...EVILLY brilliant. xD I never like when Harry realizes right off that what his relatives have been doing is wrong. :3 It seems too--I don't know, too fast. After all, he's been going through this for ten years, that kind of negativity and treatment sinks into you. I really like the idea of Dumbledore getting put off by him and unconcerned. Thank you for the review and the litter of rabid plot bunnies!
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: The Only Way Out is Down
| 17 Sep 2011
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Reviewer: Natasi (Signed)
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I'm so glad you updated, I look forward to the next chapter!
Title: Chapter 1: First Meetings
| 02 Nov 2011
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Reviewer: Natasi (Signed)
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Wow, I love this. I was skeptical about the interview format at first, but I ended up loving. I really can't wait to see where this goes!
Author's Response: Hey, me too! I've never tried writing something in this format before, but I think it's working out!
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