the Black Cat
Slytherin!
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Lily has survived the attack that Halloween night and Severus sees this as his opportunity to make things right with her. He would worry about the Potter brat later. If only it were that simple . . .
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11), 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Stepfather Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by Yondi
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Physical Punishment Spanking
Chapters: 12 - Completed: No - Updated: 24 Sep 2012 / 07 Apr 2012
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 12 - Completed: No - Updated: 24 Sep 2012 / 07 Apr 2012
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 | 10 Apr 2012 |
| Reviewer: Yondi (Signed) |
- You've made my day (:!
The turn at the end was quite the surprise - Lily being angry at Snape in such a strong way, now I actually feel bad for him... after all he tried to get along with Harry the last few days :(
I hope Snape's and Lily's relationship will not suffer to badly - I can imagine that Snape would take his anger out on Harry then.
Can't wait for the next one :D
Author's Response: Lily doesn't know that he tried to be nice to harry the last few days. I don't plan to break Lily and Snape up, but there's definitely going to be some hashing out of bad feelings and broken promises.
| Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 | 12 Apr 2012 |
| Reviewer: Yondi (Signed) |
- I've been hoping and I got it - a nice chapter...again!
I'm glad that Sev realizes what effect his actions have on Harry, now he's able to work on their relationship - if Harry starts to accept Sev's efforts.
Great work :D
Author's Response: I have a plan for Severus and Harry in the next chapter. Although the mindmender is supposed to be primarily focused on helping Harry deal with his recent trauma, I have a feeling Snape might get dragged into it against his will. Very excited to write the next chapter!
| Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 | 13 Apr 2012 |
| Reviewer: Yondi (Signed) |
- I think you handled the chapter very well - I liked to see both of them getting along although it was quite sad to know that those events took place such a long time ago... one can only hope for both of them, that they'll improve their relationship (and hopefully Severus realizes that Draco is not the lovely little boy he appears to be to some extent).
I'm really thrilled! Can't wait for an update ! :)
Author's Response: Thank you. I was excited for this chapter but actually had difficulty writing it. I'm glad to hear that it came across okay.
| Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 | 15 Apr 2012 |
| Reviewer: Yondi (Signed) |
- Nice chapter - even more because Snape finally punished Draco instead of asuming that the situation was wholly Harry's fault (well it is quite clear that Harry has done nothing bad at all but one can never know..)
I can not wait for the next chapter! I'm curious as to how Snape will handle Harry.
Like always: Keep up the good work :)
Author's Response: Thank you.
| Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 | 22 Apr 2012 |
| Reviewer: Yondi (Signed) |
- Aww a nice chapter once again Anesidora :) stupid lily making the situation worse but at least snape and harry get along somehow.
Please update soon :D
Unable to deal with the pain and loss he felt during the third task; Harry slowly startes to fall apart,the others around him oblivious to it all. The loneliness continues to eat him up until one day, Harry finally snaps. Who will be there save him now and help him pick up the pieces?
Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Resorting, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Resorting, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Neglect, Profanity, Self-harm, Suicide Themes, Violence
Chapters: 38 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 28 Jun 2014 / 11 May 2012
Series: None - Challenges: Pushed Too Far
Chapters: 38 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 28 Jun 2014 / 11 May 2012
Series: None - Challenges: Pushed Too Far
| Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Drowning in Pain | 13 May 2012 |
| Reviewer: Yondi (Signed) |
- Great chapter - can't wait for Harry to "break"... of course I feel sorry for him but maybe some people (his 'friends') will realize that the way they've treated Harry was just horrible and unjustified.
Or maybe I just want to see Harry using the gun... I am such an evil person x)
Author's Response:
Lol...I understand compleltely lol
Everyone will soon realize the errors of their ways.
| Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: I'm all Alone; who will Save me Now? | 16 May 2012 |
| Reviewer: Yondi (Signed) |
- After waking up I took a look on my smartphone and was so happy to see, that you already updated the story :)
I feel really sorry for Harry, he's suffering without having anyone to help him - it's nice to see that Sev is figuring out that something is not quite right though :)
Please update soon - I need more angst :D
Author's Response:
Lol..I knew they're were some angst lovers out there..and yes I'm about to update in a few moments :)
| Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The Plan | 17 May 2012 |
| Reviewer: Yondi (Signed) |
- I hope someone stops Harry before he'll do something he will regret afterwards - I have no sympathy left for Draco in this Story (he's an arse) but still I don't want Harry to become a murder.
Of course I don't want Severus killed but I think some injuries... those he would totally deserve - he himself had an awfull childhood but then he is acusing Harry of lying - a really bad idea.
Although I don't want Harry to hurt/kill himself, I think it would suit him the best - he's so desperate and just wants to get out of his stressful life - I still hope the best for him :)
Can't wait for the next chapter, it'll sweep us of our feet for sure :D
Thanks again for this nice story :)
Author's Response:
Draco will come around...but I agree hes a brat and he has to be scared if you will first.
Severus is in denial as usual...he will see reason I just hope it isnt too late for him
Im not sure on whether on not, hes gonna live or not.. The story is running away from me lol
This stpry has so much anticipation it has me on edge..but Im glad you guys like it
Nice story? I think not lol but Iget what you mean
| Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Freedom comes at a Price | 19 May 2012 |
| Reviewer: Yondi (Signed) |
- Don't get bothered by some users - it's your story and no matter who you want to die, we have to accept it.. a story can be good even though "important" character die as long as the story is being told in a good way and (in my opinion) you are doing great story-telling :)
You've made my day.. I couldn't believe those multiple updates - the first thing I did after coming home from work I've read through the latest chapters.
I really like the way you've made Snape approach Harry and (I'm an evil person, as you might know) I enjoyed Harry's "dark"side - really refreshing :D
Keep up the good work!b29;
Author's Response:
I was gonna kill him..but I was crying to much to actually write out everyone reactions lol and thanks for that.
Haha..I'm glad...and so do I...I love Harry's Slytherin side..lol
Lily Potter comes back to life after being trapped in a strange realm for ten years. What will be Sev's reaction? And how will Harry fit into the picture?
Takes Place: 3rd summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Takes Place: 3rd summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 6 - Completed: No - Updated: 05 Jan 2013 / 25 Jul 2012
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 6 - Completed: No - Updated: 05 Jan 2013 / 25 Jul 2012
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 | 29 Jul 2012 |
| Reviewer: Yondi (Signed) |
- Great story - can't wait for the next chapter!
I really enjoy reading story's featuring Lily coming back to life (and Severus) and thus all the struggles while becoming a family.
Keep up the good work :D
Author's Response: Thank you!