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Dudley and Harry flee Vernon - to Severus. A different Tom Riddle, Petunia is good. Lucius and Draco are helpful. Albus is a bit misguided. The twins are only a year older than Harry, so I can make them non-Gryffindor.

Takes Place: 1st summer before Hogwarts, 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Profanity
Chapters: 137 - Completed: No - Updated: 28 Sep 2014 / 28 Jun 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 23 Sep 2011
Reviewer: KarelaTheRedHawk (Signed)
    Ooh I look forward to non-Gryffindor twins and seeing the Weasley family's shock (and probable outrage) because of it! I generally like Bill and Charlie, but you made it easy to dislike generally likable characters, good job on that.

Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 23 Sep 2011
Reviewer: KarelaTheRedHawk (Signed)
    I'm glad that Severus isn't willing to give Harry up. I cannot wait for the conversation with Tom. Stupid Dobby trying to ruin things. I was very proud of Harry's reaction when Severus told him the truth.

Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 23 Sep 2011
Reviewer: KarelaTheRedHawk (Signed)
    Damn I really wish Albus would stop meddling. I'm proud of Tom for his reaction to what Lord Voldemort is, though it does make me wonder what exactly turned him evil. I'm looking forward to the boys meeting the Weasley family, I just know that Harry will probably be defending Severus (he is so adorable).

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 23 Sep 2011
Reviewer: KarelaTheRedHawk (Signed)
    Wow Dobby is crazy. I personally hope that he is not an important part to this story, but I know I'll be able to tolerate him if he is. I'm glad that Lucius and Severus were able to unbind Dudley's magic without Albus' help, that will look good for them and bad for Albus later. I hope Severus will be able to find a solution for the Horcrux at Harry's forehead, but I know that if he does, it probably won't be for awhile. The thing with Marge was hilarious, public nuisance indeed.

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 23 Sep 2011
Reviewer: KarelaTheRedHawk (Signed)
    They really found the perfect location to house the boys. I'm glad that Severus laid all the cards on the table for Director Chang to see and decide whether or not to support them. I really liked the scene with Marge, it was funny and I cannot wait to see her get hers.

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 23 Sep 2011
Reviewer: KarelaTheRedHawk (Signed)
    I am so glad that Lucius is making plans to rid himself of Narcissa, but I do hope that Draco won't feel too bad about it, she is still his mother. I am a bit surprised that Severus is being so forthcoming with Harry (and Dudley) about his past, but I can understand the reasoning. I wish Albus weren't so blind, there is no way that Severus is going to want to give up adorable little Harry.

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 23 Sep 2011
Reviewer: KarelaTheRedHawk (Signed)
    I'm really enjoying this story, and I really want to be the first person on this website to review every chapter, I'm determined! I can't wait until Harry and Dudley meet Draco. I liked the meeting between Albus and Severus, it was very informative. I love manipulation but I despise using it on an innocent child that cannot defend themselves. I am glad that Harry is out of Albus' grasp.

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 22 Sep 2011
Reviewer: KarelaTheRedHawk (Signed)
    Awww cunning little snake

Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 22 Sep 2011
Reviewer: KarelaTheRedHawk (Signed)
    Oh I can't wait for the meeting with Albus, it is sure to be entertaining! I know that Snape finds Harry to be just as adorable as I do ;)!

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 22 Sep 2011
Reviewer: KarelaTheRedHawk (Signed)
    Oh I think Harry is just adorable (you will probably hear this a lot from me)! I'm glad that Harry is cultivating allies, without being overly aware of it. I'm glad that the Healer they called was able to get a reading of past abuse so that they have legal records, I'm sure they will be very useful in the future. I can't wait until Harry and Dudley meet Draco and I hope to see some more Harry / Severus interaction, without, of course, neglecting or ignoring Dudley. I hope Petunia gets better.


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