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Reviews by Severus Draconis Potter
Left with partial paralysis after being tortured by Voldemort, Severus is sent to Bell Point, a secure location on the seaside owned by the Order of the Phoenix. However, he is not the only one who will be there, for Harry, refusing to express his emotions regarding Sirius’ death, has unknowingly invoked an ancient kind of magic that will force him to deal with them. Deaged to four years old, he has to contend with a bitter and broken Snape, who, like Harry, is being forced to live in a body that does not work the way it used to. These two vastly different people have beat the odds many times over, and somehow prevailed in a world that has tried time and time again to destroy them. But the challenges they now face are nothing like they’ve ever seen before. Will they rise to the occasion, or become prisoners within themselves?
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: Deaging, Physical Impairment, Snape-meets-Dursleys Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Torture
Chapters: 28 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 19 Jul 2013 / 12 Jan 2013 Series: None - Challenges: None
Author's Response: Who says his magic is gone forever, hmm? There's always hope that he'll learn to wave a wand again! I am happy to hear that you think the story is adorable, and that you're liking how Snape is changing. Thanks for the review!
This story is already awesome and nothings really happened yet. I've been in the mood for a deaging Harry story with of course Severus so this is kinda perfect. I'm excited and I cannot wait to see where this story goes, and what this new ride will bring. It feels like there might be angst for the moment, so here's to hoping for comedic relief, either way I'm not leaving this story alone lol Until the next update, where I will read and always review :p Author's Response: Yes indeed, we meet again! I'll try not to write something makes you forget to breathe again, so there should be some comedic relief. I have tried to work in some here and there. I hope it's enough! Thanks so much for the review!
I don't have much to say this chapter, but next time I will. Good update, you were right it was setting the scene. Author's Response: Heck, I feel bad for Severus and I'm writing him. I am glad you enjoyed the update. Thank you for your feedback!
It was a really good chapter, I really hope Sev will be able to heal. The kind of person he is, he would hate it if he couldn't do what he used too. I can feel his frustrations though, doing something all these years and then not being able too. Its really sad... Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the comforting. Yeah, Harry did mess things up a little, didn't he? He's got a talent for complicating things. Thanks so much for the review! Hope it isn't too sad for you! :)
I feel like I'm saying that a lot lol Author's Response: Yes, true, quite true. Little steps and setbacks! Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: No problem Severus Draconis Potter. Thanks so much for dropping a line again. It's great to hear your opinion! And I too cannot wait to post what happens when Severus pieces the whole thing together about the Dursleys.
I really disliked Petunia, I hated how she treated them because she didn't have magic. This chapter was really good, though Albus is starting to irritate me. Please don't tell me that he knew all along but chose to let Harry suffer?? Author's Response: I'm not one for character bashing, so Dumbledore isn't going to be evil in this case. I guess you'll find out how it all fits soon enough. Glad you enjoyed the chapter!
It was a great Chapter ofcourse, I loved it. But like I said, a bit sad at parts. Author's Response: Yeah, it was sad in places. Ah, yes. Great Aunt Isobel is eeevil. I am glad you liked the chapter! Thank you for sharing your thoughts and reactions!
One more thing because I'm obviously slow today. In that one part where they're talking about Hermione's patronus..Severus said: "It's the people that make a h -" I know its a word but its annoying the heck out of me that I can't think of the word so I figured I'd just ask :) Author's Response: Home is the word! Sorry you were stuck on that! I totally get it, when the brain is just elsewhere and then it's driving you nuts what the word, or name or thing is! Maybe I'll add another letter to make it easier. I am glad you are enjoying the story, and I too am pretty sad that it's coming to a close. It's just been a good fic to write emotionally, you know? A good one to pour the soul into. Thanks so much for reviewing! "You're a freak. No one loves you, no one ever has, and no one ever will."
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None Tags: None Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Neglect, Self-harm, Suicide Themes, Violence
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 15 Jan 2013 / 14 Jan 2013 Series: None - Challenges: None
Excuse me while I go sob my eyes out into my bowl of ice cream. Ps...was good, but tragic... Author's Response: haha. im sorry i made you cry, but i DID warn you. thank you for reviewing. ennjoy your ice cream ;) |
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