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Title: Chapter 12: Lent Day Eleven
| 04 Mar 2012
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Reviewer: Vanime (Signed)
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Just wanted to say, that in reviewing my review for the last chapter, I realized that it may be construed wrong. :( I was referring to the characters (going from bad to worse) not the story or where you are taking the story.
That being said, I am enjoying this very much - just wish that the two of them would come up with a project of some sort! Dumbledore is going to ask soon I bet, and that would be awkward for the both of them. :)
I hope your grandad does well and gets better soon!
Looking forward to seeing your next chapter when you get back.
Hugs and Love, Vanime
Author's Response: I knew exactly what you meant in your last review, and didn't take it that way at all. Don't worry. Thanks for all the reviews, I'm glad you're enjoying the story!
Title: Chapter 13: Lent Day Twelve
| 05 Mar 2012
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Reviewer: Vanime (Signed)
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Well, they certainly progressed in being civil towards one another - wonder when they will start calling each other "Harry" and "Dad". :D
Hugs and Love, Vanime
Title: Chapter 14: Lent Day Thirteen
| 13 Mar 2012
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Reviewer: Vanime (Signed)
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Oh dear...Poor Severus! I do have to agree with the previous reviewer - he did act/look like he was feeling hurt. He's trying to find common ground with Harry (mentioning favorite subjects/mother), and Harry just keeps giving him the bum's rush.
I really hope that Harry wakes up soon!
And what is their project??!! Dying to kow what it is, and why Albus hasn't bugged them in a while.
Hugs and Love, Vanime
PS Glad your grandfather is better! :)
Title: Chapter 15: Lent Day Fourteen
| 14 Mar 2012
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Reviewer: Vanime (Signed)
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Oh poor Severus! I feel really bad for him...what will it take for Harry to spent more time with Severus other than just the Lent?
Harry had better watch it though - as his father Severus can and will get the marks from the other teachers as to Harry's performance.
Looking forward to the next chapter! Hugs and Love, Vanime
Title: Chapter 17: Lent Day Sixteen
| 16 Mar 2012
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Reviewer: Vanime (Signed)
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This was a great chapter! I really liked how they were getting along. I also wish that they were having more convsations about "stuff" instead just about school....I'd love to be the fly on the wall for that one! :)
Regardless, I am enjoying how you are pacing this, so don't change just because I want this or that or the other to happen... :P
Hugs and Love, Vanime
Title: Chapter 18: Lent Day Seventeen
| 17 Mar 2012
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Reviewer: Vanime (Signed)
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I loved the small talk between Severus and Harry here! Thank you for that! :) And I would love to know that desert that Severus had...did he make it???
If he did, then I am jealous of Harry for the dessert! LOL
I wonder what will happen mid-morning??? Dying to know...
Hugs and Love, Vanime
Title: Chapter 20: Lent Day Nineteen
| 20 Mar 2012
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Reviewer: Vanime (Signed)
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Aww this was great! I loved the togetherness of Harry and Severus in this one. And I do have to agree with one reviewer - Harry should realize that his father is showing what love he can ie: cocoa and cookies.
Wouldn't it be something if he falls asleep and Severus takes him back to the tower? :P Can you imagine Ron and Hermione's reactions??? Actually, now that I say that - do they know that Severus is Harry's father?
Hugs and Love, Vanime
Title: Chapter 24: Lent Day Twenty Three
| 23 Mar 2012
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Reviewer: Vanime (Signed)
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Oh that's the plan!! Cool! :) I really like that they are getting warmed up to each other.
I did wonder just now, does the Professor know of the abuses Harry suffered at the Dursleys yet? Or did he know of them before the Lent started?
Hugs and Love, Vanime
Title: Chapter 26: Lent Day Twenty Five
| 25 Mar 2012
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Reviewer: Vanime (Signed)
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I am really enjoying the father and son moments here. It's definitely an AWWW moment. :)
Shouldn't Harry be able to ask questions by now, without fearing repucussions (sp)? Although, with the upbringing he had, I am not surprised by the fact that he doesn't want to make waves. Poor Harry! I hope Severus sees this soon, and I can't wait for the rooms to get in place! :D
Hugs and Love, Vanime
Title: Chapter 27: Lent Day Twenty Six
| 26 Mar 2012
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Reviewer: Vanime (Signed)
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It makes sense to me too that they would have a reading room in Snape's quarters. :) I really am enjoying how this story is coming along, and I wonder when and how Harry will start calling the Professor, "Dad". :D
Personally, I think the Lockhart books should be burned as the man was a fraud, as much as it pains me to say it, as I hate the notion of a book burning.
Maybe the next time they get together, as there is so much redecorating to be done at the Professors' (and now Harry's) home, the two of them could start making plans as to what they would like to do with the house. Surely the Professor could explain to Harry the layout of the roons and the general aspect of what they look like to get started?
Hugs and Love, Vanime
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