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All other things being equal, what if Severus did not allow his hatred of James Potter to blind him?

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Profanity
Chapters: 21 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 25 Oct 2011 / 17 Sep 2011
Series: Harry Potter and the Different Path - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 21: Different End 25 Oct 2011
Reviewer: Vanime (Signed)
    LOL I loved the ending - I take that whenever the Dursleys go to those areas where Harry got abused - they will get that same abuse that he received right? :)

    Perfect! Looking forward to the sequel - just wish there were no spiders - I have arachnaphobia.

    Hugs and Love,
    Vanime

    Author's Response: Actually, the spell-power 'gathered' at those spots because that's where the most abuse happened, and the spell was figuring out what needed to be done to avenge Harry. The Dursleys will suffer the consequences, tit for tat, no matter where they are over the next decade. Every bit of unhappiness, every bruise, every broken bone Harry experienced at their hands will happen to them by some means (losing a job, or the house, or a car wreck, or what have you). Technically speaking, it's a Dark Arts spell, especially these days, but Severus doesn't exactly care ... and it's one of the few that cannot be broken or ended once cast. Not even Dumbledore will be able to undo it, which is why he chose this particular spell. And take heart. There may or may not be an excess of spiders in the sequel ... remember, things are happening a LOT differently at this point. *grin*

What happens when a brain damaged Harry and a transgender Hermione both get sorted into Slytherin? Snape's not sure, but he thinks it's likely to be an interesting term. This story follows various first years through the trials of their first year

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 25 - Completed: No - Updated: 09 Jul 2017 / 31 Oct 2011
Series: None - Challenges: Minor Canon Character, Barrier to learning
Title: Chapter 8: Week 8 06 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Vanime (Signed)
    Oh great chapter oh mighty writer! :P Loved this one so much - the interactions of the professors and students in the sessions, plus the notes the professors write to each other are priceless! It makes for such a great story, that I have a hard time waiting for the next chapter to come out! :D

    I also loved the explanation of the tree dancing - and that Snape has rhythms too. :))

    A couple favorites from this chappie:

    >Yes, I'm very proud of my smart little pup named Harry. H-A-R-R-Y, that spells proud. [He smiles gently].< Snape had me smiling and laughing here...

    And "Hermes" ROFL! I am happy that Hermione calls Harry a "brother" as her "family" - I wonder if Snape is part of that too, and she is hesitant to say so; it was looking that way to me for a minute there...and I did wonder - does Harry see her as a him, because she is so tough/tomboyish, or is it because he really doesn't know?

    Also enjoyed Ron helping Harry out too. Good for him!

    As ever, looking forward to more. :D
    Hugs and Love,
    Vanime

Title: Chapter 3: Week 3 05 Nov 2011
Reviewer: Vanime (Signed)
    Aww this so cute! LOVING THIS!! Great story! :)

    Hugs and Love,
    Vanime

Title: Chapter 1: First Meetings 02 Nov 2011
Reviewer: Vanime (Signed)
    LOL! I loved Snape's notes on the students - just pricless and I really hope the Dursley's get what's coming to them!

    Hugs and Love,
    Vanime

Title: Chapter 2: Week 2 05 Nov 2011
Reviewer: Vanime (Signed)
    Howl!! LOL Harry as Snape's pet bat! Aww too cute! I really hope that Hermione's family gets sorted out soon for Professor Snape - is she brainy in this story like she was in the books? You don't say...

    Looking forward to the next episode! :)

    Hugs and Love,
    Vanime

Title: Chapter 5: Week 5 15 Nov 2011
Reviewer: Vanime (Signed)
    Oh dear - Hermione being abused? Not sure what you are referring to... I see a very unhappy girl who is not allowed to be herself; ie: wearing pants instead of dresses, etc. But then, I don't have experience to know what to look for either, regardless that this is a story.

    And what does the essence of murtlap do for Harry? I must confess I have a hard time remembering that he is wearing blue dreadlocks, you make him so endearing that I tend to forget that part of his character.

    Very well written...can't wait for the next chapter!

    Hugs and Love,
    Vanime

    PS Love how Minerva wants Malfoy in exchange for the Weasleys. :) I also wonder if maybe Neville ought to be resorted - he really doesn't seem so Gryfindorish to me at all...

Title: Chapter 1: First Meetings 15 Nov 2011
Reviewer: Vanime (Signed)
    Oh I am an idiot! Essence of Murtlap helps with scar tissue! :) Just started rereading the story, whilst waiting for a new chapter. :D

    Hugs and Love,
    Vanime

Title: Chapter 3: Week 3 15 Nov 2011
Reviewer: Vanime (Signed)
    As I am rereading the story, I have to say that this by far is my favorite chapter.

    Right from where Harry says he plays duck and cover every time Neville blows his potions up to the last:
    'Did you know that I get my very own Harry?' I LOVE that line!

    Hugs and Love,
    Vanime

Title: Chapter 6: Week 6 26 Nov 2011
Reviewer: Vanime (Signed)
    Oh this was awesome! SQUUEEEE! I loved that Harry was able to change his hair to look like "his professor". :D And thank you for answering about his dreadlocks... I think that he and Tonks will get along fine! :P That is, if he meets Tonks later in this story or any sequel thereof... :D

    Will Harry now keep the long black hair? It's part of being Snape's little bat.

    Hugs and Love,
    Vanime

Title: Chapter 7: Week 7 01 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Vanime (Signed)
    This chapter was great! I wonder though will Dumbledore and the other professors see Harry dance with the tree again? And what made Harry do that anyway? :)

    I bet though, that if some of the students saw Harry doing that, they'd be less likely to pick on him, when they realize just how powerful he is.

    And poor Hermione! Maybe she'll get better soon tempermentally wise now that some of her treasured books are with her at Hogwarts. How mean her mother is! I'd be devestated if anyone ever did that to my books. :(

    Will Snape be Hermione's 'fessor too?
    I would love to see that! :P

    Hugs and Love,
    Vanime


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