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Sequel to Common Ground. After Halloween, Snape and Harry begin to bond even more as they discover some common interests. But will it stand the test of time... and can Sev protect Harry from the evil that stalks him? AU, Sev and Harry mentor/guardian story

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Kidnapped
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect, Profanity
Chapters: 50 - Completed: No - Updated: 27 Apr 2013 / 18 Oct 2010
Series: Something In Common - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 24: Stalker 05 Mar 2012
Reviewer: Con Moto (Signed)
    Ooh evil cliffie! Awesome chapter as always. I loved the suspense.

    I have no idea who the Fifth Marauder is... Narcissa, maybe? Or is it someone who hasn't been introduced yet...?

    Author's Response: It's soneone you haven't met.  But now you can see who it is as I've updated again. Thanks for your reviews

Title: Chapter 25: The Fifth Marauder 26 Mar 2012
Reviewer: Con Moto (Signed)
    I read this a few days ago, but didn't review. Marlene McKinnon, huh? Wasn't expecting that! Loved the backstory!

Title: Chapter 26: Skewed Perspective 11 Apr 2012
Reviewer: Con Moto (Signed)
    This chapter was great but I abhor Marlene! I did like the Slytherins attempting to save Harry. I thought it was really nice of them:)
    I hope Harry is rescued soon and Snape gets his revenge on Marlene!

Title: Chapter 27: Awakening 29 Apr 2012
Reviewer: Con Moto (Signed)
    This chappie was awesome even if you did put in an evil cliffhanger!

    I'm so happy Irma's awake. It looks like they are starting to solve the mystery. They better find Marlene soon. And speaking of Marlene, she better not do anything to Harry *growls menacingly at Marlene*

    You write beautifully.
    PS- best wishes to your mother:)

    Author's Response:

    Aww, thanks so much!

    Marlene's a nasty piece of work. just wait until you see what she tries next. 


Title: Chapter 28: Skating on the Edge of Disaster 12 May 2012
Reviewer: Con Moto (Signed)
    How do you make me hate Marlene more with each chapter? How dare she punish Harry like that?! He didn't do anything that bad. Oh please make Harry escape soon.
    I really liked the part about the book and how Harry can talk to it. Harry's letter to himself was an excellent way to keep his morale up too. Smart boy:)
    I look foward to the next update:)

Title: Chapter 29: Flight of the Raven 17 May 2012
Reviewer: Con Moto (Signed)
    This was exciting! I'm so happy Harry's okay now...or is he? :) I loved the description of Harry going into the between world. It was so vivid:)
    I love that Skull has returned too!

    Please don't make Severus kill Marlene. I hate Marlene in your story, but she's lost her family and is unhinged. Also, I don't really want to see Sev become a murderer.

    My best wishes to your mum, I hope she recovers soon. Thanks for this awesome chappie!

Title: Chapter 30: Crime and Punishment 01 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Con Moto (Signed)
    I really liked this chapter, especially the end with Sirius and Marlene. I wonder what the Society has in store for that crazy hag?
    I wish your mum a speedy recovery:)

Title: Chapter 31: The Justice of Ravens 10 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Con Moto (Signed)
    Ohh, that chapter was awesome! I can't believe what Marlene did to Lily though. Ugh she's horrible! Thank goodness we saw the end of her. And you brought Viv and her mum back too! Viv made me smile- she's adorable:) I really liked Isolde too.
    I love this story!

Title: Chapter 34: A Power He Knows Not 16 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Con Moto (Signed)
    Brilliant! That was so amazing, I felt like I was there watching the battle. You are a very talented author, that was just superb!
    So the revenant was Voldemort? Or was Voldemort possessing the revenant? Does that mean Voldemort will not return? I can't wait for the next chapter :)

    Author's Response:

    Thanks very much! I try and make my battle scenes realistic, since it's a major part of the story.  Yes, Voldy and the revenant were together, he wasn't possessing it so much as joined with it in a mutual symbiosis, if that makes sense.  Yes, he won't return. 

    The next chappie is up!


Title: Chapter 42: Adoption 16 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Con Moto (Signed)
    Yay! Harry's finally adopted! I'm sure Severus will be an excellent father to Harry, despite his own misgivings. And Ghost recalling Lily and James was a nice touch!


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