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Rather than allowing Harry to stay at Diagon Alley after he blew up Aunt Marge, the Ministry sends Harry back to the Dursleys. Harry returns to school after a terrible summer, to find that he's not the only one with this kind of secret. A student has been killed by his family. New screening measures are put into place by the Ministry: Every student must be given a medical exam and interview to look for child abuse. With Dumbledore facing an inquiry, Snape is entrusted with the task of making sure EVERYONE receives one.

Takes Place: 3rd Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Neglect, Self-harm, Suicide Themes, Violence
Chapters: 62 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 27 Nov 2014 / 24 Feb 2011
Series: None - Challenges: New Measures for Screening Abuse
Title: Chapter 39: Digging Deeper 02 Feb 2012
Reviewer: Con Moto (Signed)
    Wow. Just wow. I loved the Snape Harry interaction, it was so powerfull.

Title: Chapter 40: Trusting 02 Feb 2012
Reviewer: Con Moto (Signed)
    Yay another chapter! I liked how while nothing major happened, there still was the tension over Harry's attempt.
    Please update soon:)

Title: Chapter 41: Walking in the Rain 27 Feb 2012
Reviewer: Con Moto (Signed)
    Excellent as always.
    Of course Sev only had rain running down his face;)

Title: Chapter 42: Revelations 11 Mar 2012
Reviewer: Con Moto (Signed)
    Brilliant chapter as always:)
    I like how you thoroughly research topics that you include in your story. It makes it so much more believable.
    I'd say Remus needs a Muggle Studies class ASAP:)

Title: Chapter 43: Examining Shards 20 Apr 2012
Reviewer: Con Moto (Signed)
    Great chapter as always! I love how you make the chapters move somewhat slowly, because after Harry's and Severus' ordeal, I bet they wouldn't be feeling energetic.
    On another note, I wonder what's got Snuffles excited...?

Title: Chapter 44: Tea and Treasure 12 May 2012
Reviewer: Con Moto (Signed)
    You wrote Severus beautifully in this chapter. The part about the box nearly teared me up!
    What's with Mrs Cook? Why did she become unfocused? I guess we'll have to wait for the next chappie to find out:)

Title: Chapter 45: Under Layers 04 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Con Moto (Signed)
    Great chapter! I love that Harry is starting to open up, even though he was influenced by a truth potion.
    I really like the dialogue between Remus and Severus too:)

Title: Chapter 47: Up Against the Wall 23 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Con Moto (Signed)
    Argh, how could you leave us hanging like that?! Oh what a wonderful chapter! I could almost feel Harry's pain myself. Keep up the amazing work:)

Title: Chapter 52: Side effects 23 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Con Moto (Signed)
    Oh wow that was really intense, can't wait for the next chapter!

Title: Chapter 55: Tea With Lily 11 Mar 2013
Reviewer: Con Moto (Signed)
    Excellent chapter! Can't wait to see how the conversation with Harry goes!


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