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Reviews by bridgeportfox

"One of the incidents during Harry's time at Hogwarts causes him to become subject to a certain Hogwarts bylaw which requires him to be placed in another house."

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"From the HP Idea Story Generator ( http://hpideagen.blogspot.com/ ): Someone sits broken, In Hogsmeade, During Easter Break, While Having An Asthma Attack, [Genre: Action/Adventure]."

Takes Place: 2nd Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape
Tags: Hufflepuff!Harry, Injured!Snape, Resorting, Runaway
Categories: Fic Fests > #21 Springfest 2016, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Character Death, Violence
Chapters: 5 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 24 Jun 2016 / 24 Jun 2016
Series: XYZ Challenge - A Story for each Challenge - Challenges: Hogwarts Laws, Hogsmeade
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 25 Jun 2016
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed)
    That seems like an odd rule. Speaking to snakes doesn't seem like it would be a dark talent. Anyway, Harry is temporarily a Badger. I wonder how he will make reparations?

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 25 Jun 2016
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed)
    No wonder Harry decided to leave. I wonder why Sprout was so nasty? Did she really think that Harry had meant to attack Justin?

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 25 Jun 2016
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed)
    I wondered how Harry would be able to hold his own against adult wizards. It makes sense that the sword would know what to do. And its appearance for Harry is a Gryffindor action that may get him back into his original House. Shame about Minerva though.

Title: Chapter 5: Epilogue 25 Jun 2016
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed)
    Hahaha! Gryffindor won't be happy about that. I wonder who will take over Slytherin? That was an interesting story. I was glad you explained the history of the rule that Harry broke. And if you want to write more stories for the fest, I will be happy to read them! ;)

A spring fic answering the challenge ”Post Traumatic Stress” by Dream Painter. A melancholy story set directly after the war, not without hope. Mostly from Harry’s PoV. OOC Snape.

Takes Place: 7th Year - Snape flavour: Out of Character Snape
Tags: None
Categories: Fic Fests > #21 Springfest 2016, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: None
Chapters: 6 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 28 Jun 2016 / 25 Jun 2016
Series: Aftermath - Challenges: Post Traumatic Stress
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 30 Jun 2016
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed)
    I'm glad that Harry was able to use art to help him deal with his PTSD. I'm kind of puzzled by the numbness he is experiencing though. I worked with a psychotherapist who specialized in PTSD. Part of my job was interviewing the prospective patients and, while they had emotional numbness, I didn't interview anyone with those physical symptoms. Of course, those were Muggles and Harry's magical background and experiences probably are why his symptoms differ. ;)
    Anyway, I enjoyed the story and look forward to Severus' point of view. That sounds like it will be very interesting.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for reviewing! Interesting comment on the symptoms of PTSD. I never worked specifically with that kind of patients, so I only have a general idea about how the condition works. Naturally, I made Harry’s condition up as a separate entity of the magical world, but I still meant it to resemble the Muggle condition - there is the depression and the flash-backs (which took form in the paintings) that you’ll recognise. I did not want to make Harry very anguished, however, more sad and exhausted, if you see what I mean. I believe that usually there might be a substantial amount of anxiety involved in PTSD and with that also psychosomatic symptoms which can be very peculiar indeed, in my experience :-) Our bodies are experts in expressing what our minds refuse to acknowledge. Harry’s numbness has something of that and it is also an image of the emotional depletion that he suffers from. In my mind Harry is somehow beyond fear and anxiety, having lived through so much horror.


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 30 Jun 2016
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed)
    I'm glad you included an explanation of how Albus and Severus were revived. I had wondered about it. It was good to see that Dumbledore made some provision for Snape after all his spy had done.

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 26 Jun 2016
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed)
    Harry it sounds like he is floundering. Too bad that Madam Pomfrey didn't stay in the room for a bit. I was surprised that Ginny wasn't around more for Harry. I knew that her family was important but she was supposedly in love with Harry and would have thought he would have been her first priority.

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 26 Jun 2016
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed)
    It sounds like the old adage about the road to hell being paved with good intentions was correct in this case. Madam Pomfrey messed up big time. This can't have done Harry any good. One note, I noticed you wrote 'taught with anger' and used taught earlier in the chapter. The word you want is taut. Pronounced the same way but spelled differently and it means tight or to tighten.

    Author's Response: Rectified. Thanks a lot!

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 25 Jun 2016
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed)
    That was surprising. Looking forward to reading more.

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 25 Jun 2016
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed)
    Petunia turned up to see Harry? That must be the last thing he ever would have expected. Looking forward to finding out what she has to say.

    Author's Response:

    Check the newly posted chapters and you’ll learn what Petunia has to say to Harry! Thank you for reviewing!



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