Ravenclaw!
The summer after 5th year, Death Eaters find Harry abandoned in the Dursley house and bring him to Voldemort. Will one particular Death Eater give up his position and his hate to save his enemy's child? Eventual Snape mentors Harry fic.
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by DreamLuna
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Profanity, Rape, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 43 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 05 Nov 2007 / 23 Jul 2007
Series: Walk the Shadows - Challenges: None
Chapters: 43 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 05 Nov 2007 / 23 Jul 2007
Series: Walk the Shadows - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 | 22 Jan 2013 |
| Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) |
- I hope if Harry starts dealing with what's happened through his journals or talking to Severus soon.
| Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 | 22 Jan 2013 |
| Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) |
- "I mean that in the most non-points-taking way you can imagine", Snape was naturally giggly about dying, "Indeed." Snape's lip twitched again- I really don't know how you do it. You can bring humor into the most dire of situations. I also like that you show so much of what your characters are thinking rather than just showing the results of their thought processes.
| Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 | 22 Jan 2013 |
| Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) |
- Does Severus really think Harry hates him or that it was just a fit? The last scene was greta, thanks for another chapter.
| Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 | 22 Jan 2013 |
| Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) |
- I'm glad that Harry is at least moving forward but I hope that when he returns to school he'll have new confidence and not regress. Thank you for another great chapter :)
| Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 | 22 Jan 2013 |
| Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) |
- What! That is . . . wow. I like that Severus wants to get guardianship of Harry but I'm not sure that it's the right time to say so. I feel like Harry will think Severus is taking him in as a duty. I don't think Harry will react well to this statement, but you do always surprise me.
| Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 | 23 Jan 2013 |
| Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) |
- What is Severus taking points from when it's summer? I'm surprised that Severus just blurted out his intentions because I thought that he generally thinks out every possible scenario before saying anything. I'm also always surprised at how calm Harry becomes after having these episodes.
| Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 | 23 Jan 2013 |
| Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) |
- I don't know, I think that the '"I smell something foul, oh it's you, Potter" look' is my personal favorite. I can't wait to see how Harry will react when he has his first confrontation with Draco. By the way, is Draco for or against Voldemort and his father in this version? I hope he's against them and becomes an ally. Thank you for another chapter, I can't wait to read what's to come.
| Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 | 23 Jan 2013 |
| Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) |
- I don't understand, is it weird to have your fears act like a storm? Or is it that Harry is doing so well at Occlumency or has Harry always had his fears hidden away? I'm glad that Harry is doing so well but I can't wait until school starts.
| Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 | 23 Jan 2013 |
| Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) |
- That was an amazing pep talk, I'm not sure J.K Rowling could have written it better. I'm surprised that Harry is looking forward to talking to Remus because he had been avoiding pretty much everyone up to this point. I hope Harry reacts well to the attention.
| Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 | 23 Jan 2013 |
| Reviewer: DreamLuna (Signed) |
- It's awful how no one was ever really there for Harry, especially the people who said they were on his side, but why didn't the Weasley's check on Harry when they realized their care packages didn't get through?