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Harry doesn't know exactly what's happening, but something isn't right between him and Professor Lupin, and he's determined to find out why. Will Snape be able to help? Abuse, implied non-con, AU, HP&PA. The character death is NOT Severus or Harry.

Takes Place: 4th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Bashing, Character Death, Neglect, Profanity, Rape
Chapters: 31 - Completed: No - Updated: 18 Aug 2013 / 23 Sep 2012
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Denial 23 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Ann Jinn (Signed)
    Just came across your work. WOW! Good job on the abuse and also Harry's reasoning to go to Snape.

Title: Chapter 29: Dragon Around 23 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Ann Jinn (Signed)
    I could not stop reading your story. Great to see how Severus and Harry are starting to really understand they need each other. Loved James & Lily, and loved James as a ghost. Great to see Sirius and how he is getting a lesson on forgetting the past too. The two girls are a hoot.

    Author's Response:

    Glad you like the girls.  I have another reviewer over on FF.net that DESPISES them and goes to great lengths to explain to me just how psychotic and unlikely each is.  *huffs in indignation*

    But enough about me!

    Thanks for the two reviews and I hope to get a new chapter relatively soon (after I update Session Transcripts and Burnt).


Title: Chapter 31: Sirius Black 20 Aug 2013
Reviewer: Ann Jinn (Signed)
    The house is a hoot, love the descriptions of Petunia. Also, you did a good job showing how Dumbles works. Just suggestions and hints that people think are commands. His way out or power, have to think on that.

    I love Sirius and how you have portrayed him as a man is great. Now off to Croatia.

When Minerva finally gets permission to check on Little Harry potter she enlists Severus to help her they both get a shock at what they find when they employ Muggle Child Psychology

Takes Place: 8 - Post Hogwarts (young adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Child fic, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Misc
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 29 Sep 2012 / 28 Sep 2012
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 29 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Ann Jinn (Signed)
    A cute little story and interesting to see a compassionate Vernon.

    Author's Response: Thank you for the Review i am glad that you liked it and i am glad that you were ok with the new take on the abuse idea coming from Vernon rather than Petunia

When Harry receives a letter at the end of his second year, the effects change not only his life but the lives of two others. With secrets uncovered, perceptions altered and lives changing drastically, can a family form out of the chaos?

Takes Place: 3rd summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Rape
Chapters: 7 - Completed: No - Updated: 27 Feb 2013 / 10 Oct 2012
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 23 Dec 2012
Reviewer: Ann Jinn (Signed)
    A very good story. Two abused boys who have never been allowed to be honest and a potions master in the same straits. Interesting to see how they all come together.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much!

Severus thought he knew what to expect of the spawn of James Potter...until he walked into the Great Hall looking like Severus Snape.

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: None
Chapters: 10 - Completed: No - Updated: 29 Oct 2020 / 12 Oct 2012
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 27 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Ann Jinn (Signed)
    I love how you did Minerva. I can really picture her as I read your words. Love how he is keeping an eye out for Harry.

Just when Harry thought that things couldn't get any worse, they did. No one noticed that he isn't coping except two unlikely people, who will do everything to keep Harry from drowning in guilt and help him on his quest to destroy Voldemort.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Neglect, Self-harm
Chapters: 2 - Completed: No - Updated: 10 Nov 2012 / 13 Oct 2012
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Prologue 15 Oct 2012
Reviewer: Ann Jinn (Signed)
    An amazing start, can hardly wait for the next part.

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Blood 11 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Ann Jinn (Signed)
    Amazing, with just a few words, you are showing Harry coming apart. An interesting story and you are doing a great job.

    Author's Response:

    You made my morning with your kind words! I can't stop smiling!

     

    Thank you for your review! 


The painting was pointless. Not that Harry was particularly against the abstract, but this was just a load of splatters on canvas. Why would someone bother creating it? Why would it be on display? And why was his former potions teacher taking such an interest in it?

In which Harry and Snape are in an art gallery.

Takes Place: 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry) - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape is Kind
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Rated: K - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 21 Oct 2012 / 21 Oct 2012
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 21 Oct 2012
Reviewer: Ann Jinn (Signed)
    A beautiful story. I love Jackson's paintings and you did a great job of bringing not only them, but Harry;s life into focus. A very unique idea.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much! I've had this idea for a while but I never actually tried bringing it to life.

Snape never wanted anyone to know of his promise to Dumbledore, but has realised that he can protect Potter much better by taking a less passive role in the boy's training. Actually liking Harry Potter has never been part of his plan. mentor/guardian.

Takes Place: 3rd summer, 4th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Neglect, Profanity
Chapters: 17 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 14 Feb 2013 / 27 Oct 2012
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 28 Oct 2012
Reviewer: Ann Jinn (Signed)
    Great start. Like the idea of defense lessons. Always wondered why Dumbledore left Harry out to dry.


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