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| Ann Jinn [Contact]
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| Andrea Miller (female)
| Member since: 28 Feb 2012
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Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
| 11 Nov 2012
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Reviewer: Ann Jinn (Signed)
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Lovely, love a snarky Snape. The sick one was pretty good too.
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
| 11 Nov 2012
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Reviewer: Ann Jinn (Signed)
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I don't like to shop and thought Harry came up with a good suggestion. Really good job on the two personalities trying to mesh together. Uncle Sebastian.
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
| 06 Nov 2012
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Reviewer: Ann Jinn (Signed)
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A lovely story. Great twists
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you enjoyed
Title: Chapter 3: Diagon Alley
| 12 Nov 2012
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Reviewer: Ann Jinn (Signed)
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An amazing story. I like how you expanded Tom's character. Great job with Harry and the Dursleys.
Title: Chapter 1: He Understands
| 18 Nov 2012
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Reviewer: Ann Jinn (Signed)
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Wonderful work. It really is the small things in life that are so big. Understanding.
Title: Chapter 1: Always
| 18 Nov 2012
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Reviewer: Ann Jinn (Signed)
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I have always looked at Albus in canon as a guy who with friends like him, you don't need enemies. You caught that so well.
Title: Chapter 1: The Accident
| 18 Nov 2012
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Reviewer: Ann Jinn (Signed)
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Harry was the boy-who-lived, not Harry to most. Snape was Snape, and was alone too. So interesting to see how alike they were and how alone. You caught that well.
Title: Chapter 4: Distractions
| 20 Dec 2012
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Reviewer: Ann Jinn (Signed)
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The two together are doing well without the outside pressures. Interesting what they share and talk about. Great story.
Title: Chapter 1: What Now?
| 18 Nov 2012
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Reviewer: Ann Jinn (Signed)
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Amazing. Just how I actually pictured the wizarding world would treat Harry.
Do you want to come with me when I leave? fantastic. Harry had no real guidance, even Dumbledore and he desperately needs some.
Title: Chapter 3: Family & Familiars
| 27 Nov 2012
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Reviewer: Ann Jinn (Signed)
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I am thinking it might be better for his grandmother to adopt hi, but still leave Harry as godfather just in case. You still have that fear which can show up in odd ways.
Really good story.
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