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Harry is severely injured and Snape is in for a life changing event when he comes to retrieve Harry at the beginning of his first year at Hogwarts. This is a Snape adopts Harry story.

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Physical Impairment, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Neglect
Chapters: 24 - Completed: No - Updated: 14 Feb 2015 / 11 Feb 2012
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 06 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed)
    he can hear...he can hear...Yeah :D

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 07 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed)
    Heeeeeerrrrrres Remus

Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 07 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed)
    lets hope he does so he will be killed please oh please let that happen.

Based on the challenge "Punished." What if Minerva had chosen to punish Harry the day of the flying lesson, instead of reward him?

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 1 - Completed: No - Updated: 25 Feb 2012 / 25 Feb 2012
Series: None - Challenges: Punished
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 22 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed)
    I agree with your ending note.
    But, did you in fact have Snape give Malfoy the same punishment or did he get off with a slap on the wrist. I guess I will have to see in the next exciting chapter.

What if Harry hadn't chosen to return to the final battle after he "died"? What if he'd chosen to return to a different time altogether in hopes of making a difference?

Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Rated: K - Warnings: None
Chapters: 2 - Completed: No - Updated: 25 Oct 2012 / 24 Mar 2012
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 02 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed)
    I so not liked that little cliffhanger.
    I want to see Severus' and even Dumbledores reaction to what Harry said.
    I can see Snapes eyebrow rise and Albus asking him to explain or something like that.
    I read this chapter and was like MORE MORE MORRRRRRE and then I forgot where I read this story was it here or Fanfiction and then I was upset that I forgot to follow it that I was like grrr and almost in tears but then I found it and squealed with joy and tracked it instantly.
    Can't wait for more update as soon as you can please!!!!

The trio want an insight into what goes on at the Order meetings, but they end up gaining some new perspective about a man they never considered much beyond 'ugly, greasy git'... a few itty swear words, nothing too bad. Could be seen as AU.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Profanity
Chapters: 2 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 14 Feb 2014 / 21 Apr 2012
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Bezoar 20 Dec 2012
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed)
    I want another chapter its a ciffhanger man. It is very well written and it also kinda proves that not everyone cared what happened to Severus when they should have cared more like Harry does. Please write another chapter or at least that we know if he was ok and if he knows that Harry and the rest help save his life.

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Golpalott's Laws 14 Feb 2014
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed)
    yeah you chose to add one more chapter. I do wish Severus knew that the trio cared enough about him and probably saved his life. Stupid adults.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for your review!

    I think the point here is that they all care... despite first appearances.  They just needed to learn, that with Severus in particular, they needed to pay closer attention because he wouldn't necessarily ask for help when he needed it, or at least not as overtly as they might have exprected him to... because, of course, of the perception that he wasn't welcome among them.

    A part of me wants to explore the trio and Severus further... and if I do come up with a more tangible direction, I might add to this at some point.

    Thanks again.

    misundersnape... 


Unable to deal with the pain and loss he felt during the third task; Harry slowly startes to fall apart,the others around him oblivious to it all. The loneliness continues to eat him up until one day, Harry finally snaps. Who will be there save him now and help him pick up the pieces?

Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Resorting, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Neglect, Profanity, Self-harm, Suicide Themes, Violence
Chapters: 38 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 28 Jun 2014 / 11 May 2012
Series: None - Challenges: Pushed Too Far
Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36: I Trust you 18 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed)
    I hate you sometimes (in a good way though this I am no Flammer :P) I just ment that I had to take something for a headache for crying to much. I still don't have dry eyes. Harry notice to late that he was causing more pain and suffering.
    Please update soon I am addicted to your story.

Our place isn't always the right one, or the one we know. Perhaps we must walk a mile in another's shoes Entrant in the 2012 Prompt Fest. Prompts:Hit me I dare you, I spent a month there in one night.

Takes Place: 3rd summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Resorting
Categories: Fic Fests > #14 Prompt Fest 2012, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 24 May 2012 / 24 May 2012
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Trading Places 11 Feb 2014
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed)
    I just have one that to say or I guess do and that is.......LOL

When tragedy strikes, will the almost half finished green jumper ever be completed? Or will it always lay abandoned on the couch? One thing's for sure. Severus Snape will have to learn how to knit.

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: Snape is Kind
Tags: Alternate Universe, Child fic
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Character Death, Profanity
Chapters: 6 - Completed: No - Updated: 28 Jan 2014 / 17 Jun 2012
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 5: Light at the End of the Tunnel 07 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed)
    I think the visit from Lily will start making things better. They may not know this yet.
    I think the jumper will be forgotten then found one day when Sev is spring cleaning or something like that and bring back bad memoeries but will also get Sev determinded to finish were Lily left off and finish the jumper.
    Oh I know healer Moore will find a cure and it will save either Sev, Harry or Harry's childs life.
    I will stay tuned and wait with anticpation.

    Author's Response:

    Ooh some of your suggestions are quite accurate ;) I don't want to give too much away, but things are definitely staring to look up for them. Thanks for reading and reviewing! 



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