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My Son by Terri starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 117]
Severitus - Snape knows he is Harry’s father, but his desperate attempts to gain custody fail. He vows that he will protect his son, by any means.

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Child fic, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape > Severitus Challenge
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 17 - Completed: No - Updated: 15 Apr 2020 / 04 Nov 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 17 Jan 2016
Reviewer: kakashi (Signed)
    finally! You are continuing this wonderful great story!
    Thank you so much.
    I really love it. As always wonderful written. I hope you will update soon again!

Whispers in the Dark by Victory-Starr starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 141]
In the summer before Harry's second year, it's discovered that Lily didn't die, but was instead held prisoner for several years.

Takes Place: 2nd summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Neglect, Profanity, Romance/Het
Chapters: 14 - Completed: No - Updated: 24 Feb 2014 / 02 Mar 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 11: Asphodel 07 May 2013
Reviewer: kakashi (Signed)
    I really like your story. I hope Harry can realize soon that Snape would be a great father figure. Of course Snape should realize too that this is his chance to have a family with Lily.
    Can't wait for the next chapter. I hope your update will be more regular :-)

    Author's Response: Thanks for such a nice comment, kakashi! Yes, there is a lot to figure out for everybody. I'm glad you're enjoying the story and I do plan on updating more regularly now.

Field of Broken Dreams by JAWorley starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 276]
After getting sixteen year old Harry out of jail over the summer, Severus Snape must deal with a number of things, including: trying to maintain a relationship with his future wife, building a relationship with his future step-son, and trying to figure out the ever-changing enigma that is Harry Potter.

Takes Place: 6th summer, 6th Year, 7th summer - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Controlling, Snape is Desperate, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Stern
Tags: Adoption, Hospitalization, Incognito!Harry, Injured!Harry, Injured!Snape, Runaway, Sibling Addition, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Physical Punishment Non-Spanking, Profanity, Romance/Het, Violence
Chapters: 20 - Completed: No - Updated: 30 Jun 2021 / 06 Jul 2012
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 12: Old Friends 20 Jul 2013
Reviewer: kakashi (Signed)
    Great chapter. I'm happy that you updated!
    I think you shouldn't rush the summer. Snape and Harry need bonding time and I'm not sure if this is possible at hogwarts. Now Harry can write him a little about his feelings. This is an important step in their relationship. Please do not rush. I would like to read more summer chapter in which Snape and Harry are bonding
    Hope you update soon.

Surprise! by MsHuntergrl starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 700]
What was Potter doing, showing up at Hogwarts looking like Snape’s son? Snape is not Happy to discover that his son Ian has an older clone in Harry Potter.

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Cruel
Tags: Sibling Addition
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Bashing, Neglect
Chapters: 46 - Completed: No - Updated: 14 Nov 2014 / 10 May 2013
Series: None - Challenges: Real Brother
Title: Chapter 7: Pushed out of the nest 02 Jul 2013
Reviewer: kakashi (Signed)
    Isn't Snape a little bit too cruel? Even for his standards? Even if he doesn't want to acknowledge Harry as his son, for a man who is a father he is too cold hearted. Sadly Ian is cruel to Harry too.
    If we compare Ian with his dad, than he should be definitely in Slytherin. He is like him and wouldn't even belong to gryffindor or any other houses in my eyes.
    The chapter was well written like the others. This story looks to be very dark and drama. I really like it. I hope that Snape has apparated them both to the dursleys because this would give this story more drama and because Snape doesn't deserve Harry as a son! At least for the moment :D
    Let Snape see Harry's true self at a later point. For now you should let Snape making bad mistakes like bringing his own son to his "nearly" own death :D
    Please...this review is not bashing! I love your story and I like to read more of it. I just wanted to give you some ideas :D
    Well done! Hope to read from you soon.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for your review! I don't see it as bashing at all, and I love the ideas! 

    I do think Snape is a bit cruel right now, but I plan on spreading some light over that sometime in the next few chapters.

    And I can tell you that at least one of the things that you suggested will happen (I have already written the chapter), so I hope you will like it!  


Not A Potter by LadyFreak starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 107]
Harry Potter was the younger brother to Henry Potter- the boy who lived. Neglected by his parents since he could remember, he still tries to make them proud. When the goblins perform their centennial vault inspection and students at Hogwarts are required to make an ancestry potion, what will be discovered?

Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Kidnapped, Resorting, Runaway
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Big Brother Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Character Bashing, Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect, Self-harm, Suicide Themes
Chapters: 9 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 03 Jun 2013 / 26 May 2013
Series: None - Challenges: Lost Brother
Title: Chapter 1: Meet Harry 27 May 2013
Reviewer: kakashi (Signed)
    This is a nice start. I really like it and hope to read the next chapter soon.

    I really can't understand why James did this and I'm wondering if dumbledore and lily knew this.
    I really hope that Severus wants his son in his life, after all Harry/Alexander is a prodigy in potions and they heave so many things in common.
    Thanks for this story. Hope to read from you soon again.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much for the note and review. I hope you continue to enjoy my take on the plot :)

Auld Lang Syne by sshpfanfiction starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 53]
After the events in 'Visions', Snape, Sirius and Harry have to figure what they mean to each other. Returning to a normal life may be more difficult than they expected, but they all need to get their act together before Voldemort gets the elixir of life.

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: Snape Comforts, Snape is Depressed, Snape is Kind
Tags: Adoption, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Godfather Snape, Parental Snape > Stepfather Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Violence
Chapters: 6 - Completed: No - Updated: 02 Apr 2016 / 26 Dec 2014
Series: May All Your Christmas' Be White - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 2: It Never Ends 25 Feb 2015
Reviewer: kakashi (Signed)
    Omg I'm so happy that you are continuing this story! After reading your "vision" I looked at other stories where Snape and James were friends. I loved your idea so much. Do you know any good stories?

    Can't wait how Sirius will help Severus! Please update soon.

Rough Edges by hootowl starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 27]
A cleared-of-all charges Sirius Black disowns Harry from the Potter and Black lines for acting in a un-Potter like fashion. (a response to the Disowned challenge)

Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape is Desperate, Snape is Kind, Out of Character Snape
Tags: New Identity!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Out of Character
Chapters: 2 - Completed: No - Updated: 25 Jun 2018 / 16 Jun 2018
Series: None - Challenges: Disowned
Title: Chapter 1: Cleared 18 Jun 2018
Reviewer: kakashi (Signed)
    Wow this idea is totally new and I like it very much! But I don’t understand how Sirius can disown harry as Potter heir? Because sieius is a black and not a direct Potter. So how can this happen?
    I hope you can update very soon. I really want to know what Snape will do.

    Author's Response: I realized when I started that I had to explain in some way how Sirius has the ability to perform such a detrimental action so I hope the next chapter will explain it enough.

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