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Title: Chapter 1: Ordinary
| 10 Jul 2014
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Reviewer: crotia (Signed)
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I really like you introduction at the beginning it's a really nice way to start of. I also find your plot really realistic so far. At least I myself start with stupid things that are somehow related before I can really say it. It makes it real and believable. And by stopping at this point you leave questions and things the reader really wants answers too so we will keep reading.It also tends to make us (or at least me) really impatient. And now I have to wait *sigh*
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
| 15 Jul 2014
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Reviewer: crotia (Signed)
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I can't wait for the next update
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
| 20 Jul 2014
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Reviewer: crotia (Signed)
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Ow, this isn't fair. I'm going on vacation tomorrow so I can't read on for at least 10 days if not more. So now I'm going to wonder the whole vacation about the rest of the story
Title: Chapter 2: Two: The Capture
| 17 Jul 2014
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Reviewer: crotia (Signed)
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I loved it. Salazar's accent especially cause I was waiting for him to say something in a royal manner and then you get that out of it.
Title: Chapter 4: Four: The Complaints
| 17 Jul 2014
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Reviewer: crotia (Signed)
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Ah, I really love this. And I totally agree with you about some people going overboard with spankings at every possible opportunity and really graphic and stuff. Yours was just perfect. A sound reason and a normal punishment
Title: Chapter 5: Five: The Comfort
| 18 Jul 2014
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Reviewer: crotia (Signed)
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Well, if you can bring yourself to write a sequel I'm sure I won't be the only person you'de make extremely happy.
When Dumbledore sees the welts upon Harry Potter, he removes him from his relative's care at once. His guardian for the summer is none other than Severus Snape. It is an unhappy arrangement-Snape is snarky and snide, making Harry do chores and never keeping him happy. But Harry realises that Snape is not as he seems. In fact, he is just what Harry had needed all along-a support. Warning: CP!
Takes Place: 2nd summer
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Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Controlling, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Mean, Overly-protective Snape, Snape is Stern
Tags: Adoption, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Title: Chapter 1: The Awful Arrangement
| 17 Jul 2014
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Reviewer: crotia (Signed)
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Yeah I know that feeling. I really want read more
Author's Response: Posted a new chapter. Enjoy!
Title: Chapter 2: Settling In with Snape and Hating It
| 18 Jul 2014
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Reviewer: crotia (Signed)
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Thanks for your amazing fast update
Title: Chapter 7: Of Punishment and Betrayal
| 13 Oct 2014
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Reviewer: crotia (Signed)
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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: An Unexpected Result
| 20 Jul 2014
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Reviewer: crotia (Signed)
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Snape deaf? Interesting I for one wouldn't have come up with that
Author's Response: haha, yeah it was kind of an errant thought, and then it just stuck and wouldn't leave me alone. This whole story was kind of like that, yet I've found myself already planning out a potential sequel... :-D We'll just have to see how far it takes me!
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