What was Potter doing, showing up at Hogwarts looking like Snape’s son? Snape is not Happy to discover that his son Ian has an older clone in Harry Potter.
Takes Place: 1st Year
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Snape flavour: Snape is Cruel
Tags: Sibling Addition
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by ArielBoBariel
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Bashing, Neglect
Chapters: 46 - Completed: No - Updated: 14 Nov 2014 / 10 May 2013
Series: None - Challenges: Real Brother
Chapters: 46 - Completed: No - Updated: 14 Nov 2014 / 10 May 2013
Series: None - Challenges: Real Brother
| Title: Chapter 30: Harry's mysterious Christmas gift | 25 Nov 2013 |
| Reviewer: ArielBoBariel (Signed) |
- Wonderful story so far. Although i do believe youve made snape uncharactoristically slow at catching on that harry was in fact not a spoiled brat... Ever. Also i think harry should at some point question why snape treats Ian so well and him so poorly. After all its not his fault his mother made the decisions she did. He was only a baby afterall. Also wouldnt Ian come to realize Harry is his brother?
One a side note i think it would be interesting to see interaction between Snape and Lily. I realize there would have to be some kind of speacial circumstance because of how you explained the dream visit work. But i have a feeling she would very angrily whip severus into shape about his treatment of their son.
looking forward to the next chapter :)