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The Pace of Change by Kai starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 66]
At sixteen you're supposed to worry about your favorite Quidditch team making it to the finals, not a baby. Harry Potter learns countless lessons from his Professors-about life, love, and adapting to change.

In response to the Fix This challenge posted by Nightshade Sydneylover150

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Master Snape > Apprentice Harry
Rated: T - Warnings: Profanity, Romance/Het
Chapters: 5 - Completed: No - Updated: 09 Aug 2014 / 27 Jun 2012
Series: None - Challenges: Fix This
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 10 Aug 2014
Reviewer: Phoenix Seeker (Signed)
    Wow, you're the master of suspense! I really want to know what actually happened between Harry and Ginny. Do you have the entire story planned out or are you making it up as you go?

The Kindred by quelyn starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
The summer after Harry's fourth year takes a very strange turn.

Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: Out of Character Snape
Tags: Injured!Harry
Categories: Misc > No category on the site fits
Rated: T - Warnings: Character Bashing
Chapters: 1 - Completed: No - Updated: 06 Aug 2014 / 06 Aug 2014
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 06 Aug 2014
Reviewer: Phoenix Seeker (Signed)
    Overall, good job! I enjoyed reading about the different healing potions and technicalities behind the HP universe you created and explained; however, the chapter was more informative, which tends to take away from the depth of characters and the situation. In your next chapters, try bringing out everyone's emotions, especially those of Harry and Snape. How do they feel about being stuck with each other in the cottage? It seems like Snape is quite courteous to Harry and vice versa, but is this typical in your story's universe? How does Harry feel about what happened to him? How does Annie see Harry, as the Boy-Who-Lived, a patient, or something else?

    I'm looking forward to what happens next.

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