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Title: Chapter 12: It comes in the darkness
| 06 Mar 2016
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Reviewer: ohmysnape (Signed)
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Sigh. Oh, Severus. I like how you have him slowly working through the reality of the situation, however painful it is to read. This story really is just lovely.
Title: Chapter 13: A bottle of clouds
| 08 Mar 2016
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Reviewer: ohmysnape (Signed)
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God, I can't wait for all the father/daughter feels.
Title: Chapter 15: A girl named Harry
| 15 Mar 2016
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Reviewer: ohmysnape (Signed)
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The SASS from Harry is A++++
Uh, is Dumbledore okay? Does he not realize the identity issues this poor girl will go through if he makes her go back to being a boy? God, I hope she goes to live with Snape.
Title: Chapter 16: Control
| 16 Mar 2016
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Reviewer: ohmysnape (Signed)
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WHAT WHAT EVEN WHAT
A RESORTING? Christ, what is this kid, a chess piece? I love Slytherin Harry, but I feel like that's a terrible decision. She WANTED to be in Gryffindor, and the Hat put her there. If they're so worried about keeping her identity a secret, wouldn't letting her be a girl AND in Slytherin solve the problem? What the hell, Dumbledore? UGH
I really can't wait for daughter/daddy feels. AGH.
Author's Response: Severus may be playing Dumbledore's game but in reality what he hopes to achieve is getting closer to her.
Title: Chapter 18: Night clouds
| 21 Mar 2016
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Reviewer: ohmysnape (Signed)
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I can feel Sev desperately trying not to like her and yet it's not working. Harry is SO sassy and snarky just like him I love it.
She SHOVED Dumbledore I'm crying
Title: Chapter 19: I will
| 24 Mar 2016
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Reviewer: ohmysnape (Signed)
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Oh poor Harry! Imagine finding out the man you thought was your father did something rather unforgivable, and the man who IS your father hates you...
I can only imagine all the shenanigans and feels Harry being moved to Snape's quarters will bring. Will they begin to call her Harriet again? I'm fearful for what being moved to Slytherin AND being revealed to be a girl will do to her... they're bound to be unkind an prey on the fact that everyone thought she was a boy for so long...
Title: Chapter 20: Who I am not
| 30 Mar 2016
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Reviewer: ohmysnape (Signed)
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Oh god, this poor girl. Her life is being torn to pieces and she can't do anything about it!
Title: Chapter 21: Misunderstandings
| 11 Apr 2016
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Reviewer: ohmysnape (Signed)
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This was great. "Mostly around the mouth" *Looks pointedly at Severus*
Author's Response: Hahaha! xD
Title: Chapter 22: Kitty's Creek
| 18 Apr 2016
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Reviewer: ohmysnape (Signed)
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This was just lovely, as always.
Someone's in trouble! I really love how sassy Harry is. There's a Slytherin-ness in her that reminds me of Severus. If he would only stop being so closed off, he'd see that his child is more like him than he thinks.
Title: Chapter 23: Never let the light die
| 25 Apr 2016
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Reviewer: ohmysnape (Signed)
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This is really great. I would right a lot more, but I just thought everything about this chapter was simply wonderful!
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