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Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
| 23 Dec 2019
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Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Signed)
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I like Severus' reaction to Harry.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Harry finds the book from the fifth year of the Half Blood Prince, and there's a co-author to it. He will discover who is the Half Blood Prince at all costs. After a few spells from his time at Hogwarts make a comeback, Severus Snape tries to reveal who exactly has his old book. Dolores Umbridge sees that once again, Harry Potter makes a mess at her school. She will find his mysterious partner, one Half Blood Prince, and punish him. Who will succeed on his quest?
Takes Place: 5th summer, 5th Year
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Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Stern
Tags: Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 19
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Completed: No
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Updated: 16 Jun 2020 / 10 Apr 2020
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 15: Gifts
| 06 May 2020
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Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Signed)
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I like the Jonathon Prince persona.
Author's Response: Sometimes I wonder whether the fanfic will be better without it. Glad to hear that :)
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: these ties that bind
| 20 Feb 2021
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Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Signed)
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Nicely written reconciliation. Now for the hard part of making it work in the long run.
Author's Response: Thank you! Ah, yes, Snape is in for a rollercoaster ride.
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
| 14 Dec 2020
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Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Signed)
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Nice depiction of the Severus-Sirius feud as well as of flashbacks.
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
| 14 Dec 2020
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Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Signed)
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Nice description of Harry's panic when he realizes Dumbledore has been thinking as a general rather than a father figure. I like how Harry is safe because the secret keeper is Alice.
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
| 15 Dec 2020
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Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Signed)
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Loved the plotting and how the four were able to come up with a plan despite the antagonism.
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
| 16 Dec 2020
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Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Signed)
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Nicely written portrayal of Harry's reaction as he sees Snape and then realizes who he really is and then again when he does see Snape.
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
| 17 Dec 2020
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Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Signed)
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Well written description of Harry's confused feelings over Snape's revelation.
Harry would never have guessed what moving to a new city with the Dursleys would mean. He also never would have guessed who his new neighbor would be, or that he was being watched... followed... stalked when he went out at night looking for food and safety. Written in response to the Neighbors challenge by Mellow Moon.
Takes Place: 5th summer, 5th Year
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Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Secretive, Snape is Stern
Tags: Adoption, Disguised!Snape, Incognito!Harry, Incognito!Snape, Injured!Harry, Runaway, Snape-meets-Dursleys, Spying on Harry! Snape
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Title: Chapter 4: Neighbor Next Door
| 29 Jan 2021
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Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Signed)
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I love the matter-of-fact way that Severus is taking care of Harry.
Title: Chapter 5: Family Matters
| 30 Jan 2021
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Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Signed)
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Harry will be shocked when he realized Severus told him the truth.
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