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Hi, I'm pretty new to fic writing so I'm sorry if my style is a bit scratchy sometimes. I'm aso terrible at updating to a schedule so I could post a new chapter every day for a week and then nothing for a couple of months. I read almost exclusively P+S fics but I write whatever hits me so I'll probably be more prolific on ff.net [Report This]
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Uncle Vernon’s acting weird, and Snape has designs on making Harry the most obedient student Hogwarts has ever seen. Harry just wants a quiet summer to himself and to earn the money he needs for his school supplies, but he could only hope for something so simple. Entry into the Bingo Card Fic Fest.
Takes Place: 5th summer, 5th Year
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Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Controlling, Snape is Kind, Snape is Stern
Tags: Hospitalization, Injured!Snape, Runaway, Snape-meets-Dursleys, Werewolf!Harry, Werewolves
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Master Snape > Apprentice Harry, Fic Fests > Bingo! Fic Fest, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
| Title: Chapter 15: A Run Of Bad Luck
| 01 Mar 2023
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| Reviewer: thegoldenfirebolt (Signed)
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Eesh, good descriptions. Having umbridge as a pervading presence is good too, we can feel the frustration that she is around every corner
| Title: Chapter 16: Dragon’s Breath
| 01 Mar 2023
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| Reviewer: thegoldenfirebolt (Signed)
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I love the mushroom project! I’m really excited to be getting to that part again. That last section with the gloves, and Deans bit at the end are really heartwarming
I love the ghost story for halloween. Soren and Edric are fun as well. You havent mentioned Sirius in this, Id have expected harry to have thought about him at some point, but it does mean we focus more on harry and snape. I guess harry hasnt seen sirius in a good while too
I love the ghost story for halloween. Soren and Edric are fun as well. You havent mentioned Sirius in this, Id have expected harry to have thought about him at some point, but it does mean we focus more on harry and snape. I guess harry hasnt seen sirius in a good while too
Adore the mushroom den. Umbridge is such a delightfully awful person. Neville is fantastic in this story, you really give him a chance to shine in his element
| Title: Chapter 19: Conspiring Against Happiness
| 02 Mar 2023
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| Reviewer: thegoldenfirebolt (Signed)
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Its a shame the way snape keeps trying to help and getting it wrong. Its an interesting way to introduce conflicts without harry breaking Snape’s rules
The prefect details are good, people rarely go into that. I always wonder at this point if umbridge does have some sort of eavesdropping charm
To start, I wish we knew something about how arla got on at school- even if its only which house she got into!
I like the system in the takeaway, its a nice touch.
The way we see ron acting like ron even when its trhough snapes perspective is great.
And you handle snape finding out neatly too
The gathering is nice. I like the realisation thay isaac is just sarcastic. Interesting potions gift ideas too
| Title: Chapter 24: Mr. Diggory, The Quill, And Severus Snape
| 02 Mar 2023
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| Reviewer: thegoldenfirebolt (Signed)
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Nice chapter given the content is mostly harry getting in trouble and upsetting people. Everyone on his side shows their support in little ways though. Its interesting how removed dumbledore is in this- he only has a couple of appearances.
I like Draco’s peripheral role in this
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