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Harry gets caught sneaking around in the dungeons. Snape grounds him before realising he isn't one of his Slytherins. They are stuck with each other until the spell stops.
Takes Place: 4th Year
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Snape flavour: Canon Snape
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 14
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Completed: No
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Updated: 20 Dec 2020 / 06 Aug 2015
Series: None
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Challenges: Grounded!
Title: Chapter 7: Is This a School or a Schoal?
| 16 Jan 2016
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Reviewer: SHallow (Signed)
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Shoal by the way.... Not schoal, unless you were playing with the terms a school of fish and shoal as the accumulative of fish?
Title: Chapter 1: A Whole New World
| 31 Jan 2016
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Reviewer: SHallow (Signed)
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Excellent... Looking forward to more
Author's Response: Thanks
How different would things be if Snape went to pick up Harry instead of Hagrid? Snapshots of how things might have been through all seven years by season.
Takes Place: 1st summer before Hogwarts, 1st Year, 2nd summer, 2nd Year, 3rd summer, 3rd Year, 4th summer, 4th Year, 5th summer, 5th Year, 6th summer, 6th Year, 7th summer, 7th Year
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Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape is Loving, Snape is Stern
Tags: Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Title: Chapter 2: Summer 1991
| 18 Feb 2017
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Reviewer: SHallow (Signed)
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Much better than the last time. Will he be friends with Weasley? There are some parts where it needs depth while other parts where it doesnt - for example ""Awful," Harry said instantly. "Not all Muggles, just my aunt, and uncle." He went on to explain about living in the cupboard under the stairs, never having any pocket money, the fact he only got his first birthday presents this year from his future teachers" as an abused kid, he wouldnt open up that quickly with just his first encounter (not usually and if we are going by canon hardly at all)
as for more depth, the last paragraph. I think developing the emotions surrounding him would be better (he is eleven, eleven year olds perceive emotions around them very well)
There are poisons that blind you, and poisons that open your eyes. The pride of a Slytherin is in his resource and cunning, and in the serpent's discerning gaze. At Hogwarts, Harry Potter learns to value pride, loyalty, and poison over mercy. Slytherin!Harry, platonic H&Hr duo, shipping later. Featuring ambiguous heroes, equivocal villains, and original and canon characters alike.
Takes Place: 1st Year
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Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape is Mean, Snape is Stern
Tags: Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 20
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 07 Oct 2017 / 30 Sep 2017
Series: The Serpent's Gaze
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 6: Curiosities
| 04 Oct 2017
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Reviewer: SHallow (Signed)
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I like how he is sneaky and yet the same old helpful Harry who would do anything to make his friends feel better. Great work.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! :)
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