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Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43
| 13 Oct 2021
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Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
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Wow. What a chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you enjoyed!
And now the story was repeating itself. With the same Shrieking Shack, the same werewolf, and the same Potter brat. In Severus’ opinion, James and Harry were the one person with the only difference – they belonged to different time lines.
Takes Place: 3rd Year
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Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape is Depressed, Snape is Kind, Out of Character Snape
Tags: Azkaban Character, Hospitalization, Injured!Harry, Snape-meets-Dursleys, Werewolves
Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 1
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 22 Jan 2021 / 20 Jan 2021
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: A Better Man
| 23 Jan 2021
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Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
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A sweet story.
Author's Response: Thanks! I appreciate your words.
Title: Chapter 1: The Chimney Sweep
| 23 Jan 2021
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Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
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Interesting start. The chimney sweep thing seems a little over the top. On the other hand, JKR makes the Dursleys over the top too. Curious for more.
Author's Response: I know, and I didn't originally plan on making Harry a chimney sweep, but it made for something very different. Thanks for reading!
Title: Chapter 9: Aunt Petunia
| 16 Jun 2021
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Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
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Wow Petunia is truly awful here and seems smarter than in canon. I don’t envy Snape here. What a difficult situation. The chapter was excellent.
Author's Response: Petunia is something else in this story. Thanks for reading and leaving a review! It is greatly appreciated.
Title: Chapter 11: Practice Trial
| 18 Jul 2021
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Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
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I’m not as confident as the lawyer. Harry believes he was treated well so you can’t count on his cross examination. Loved the chapter though.
Author's Response:
Title: Chapter 13: How Rainbows are Made
| 25 Sep 2021
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Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
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Another excellent chapter. What a melancholy ending to Severus’s story.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
Harry would never have guessed what moving to a new city with the Dursleys would mean. He also never would have guessed who his new neighbor would be, or that he was being watched... followed... stalked when he went out at night looking for food and safety. Written in response to the Neighbors challenge by Mellow Moon.
Takes Place: 5th summer, 5th Year
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Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Secretive, Snape is Stern
Tags: Adoption, Disguised!Snape, Incognito!Harry, Incognito!Snape, Injured!Harry, Runaway, Snape-meets-Dursleys, Spying on Harry! Snape
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Title: Chapter 3: A Real Orphan
| 27 Jan 2021
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Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
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I enjoyed this. I don’t understand why the orphanage worker didn’t take note of Harry’s repeated injuries. Isn’t that part of her job?
Title: Chapter 4: Neighbor Next Door
| 29 Jan 2021
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Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
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This has got to be so frustrating for Snape. He wants to help but Harry won’t open up. An excellent chapter
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2
| 12 Mar 2021
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Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
| 31 May 2021
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Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
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Love this depiction of Ron. He acts like he does in canon and comes across as Harry’s best mate, flaws and strengths.
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