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Harry met Holly when she was two - abandoned in the park by her mother. Unable to leave her alone, he stayed behind to keep her safe. Over the years, they became as inseparable as brother and sister.
When Harry found out he was a wizard, he was happy to find that Holly was a witch too, and one day, she would enter his new world with him.

Finding out he was a father to a nine-year-old girl, Severus Snape didn't hesitate to bring her home. His daughter belonged by his side, after all. Finding his daughter preferred Harry Potter over him was a travesty the Potions Master was not going to tolerate.

Somehow, Severus had to make his daughter see Harry Potter as he did - worthless, useless, hopeless.

Takes Place: 5th summer, 5th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape's a Bully, Snape Comforts, Snape is Controlling, Snape is Kind, Snape is Mean, Snape is Stern
Tags: Abuse Recovery, Alternate Universe
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Emotional Abuse, Neglect
Chapters: 32 - Completed: No - Updated: 13 May 2024 / 10 Aug 2021
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 4: A Tumbleweed Moment 02 Oct 2021
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
    I love the last comment though this chapter is very sad

Title: No Bed of Roses 03 Dec 2021
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
    Both of their responses make sense. An engaging chapter

Title: Chapter 10: Lose Your Gourd 13 Jan 2022
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
    I love how you’re showing how Holly and Severus are similar while still making them individuals. Maybe hatred for Tobias is something they can agree on.

Title: Chapter 12: Easy as Falling off a Log 11 Jun 2022
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
    Another enjoyable chapter. I find myself anxious for Holly and Harry to get to have a brief visit together at least. It’s funny. I’m perfectly patient waiting for Severus and Holly to get on the same page though.Poor Draco, he can’t seem to get out of his own way!

Title: Chapter 17: Turf War 04 Nov 2022
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
    A strange punishment for an angry person. Leaving him isolated and alone with his thoughts. I would think that even as an adult Severus would find it difficult to know that Eileen left him with Tobias and went on to parent a different child, even if it was his daughter. Part of him would be grateful for Holly’s sake but the child within would wonder why not me? An interesting chapter. I’m wondering what’s in that album…

Title: Chapter 20: Oma's confession 13 Feb 2023
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
    I think Eileen is mostly powerless, poor, and recovering from abuse. Dumbledore is coming from a position of great power. For me, I’m more sympathetic toward Eileen’s situation than Albus’s.
    Your story continues to be fascinating and well written.

Title: Chapter 26: Mountain to Climb 02 Jan 2024
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
    Wow such a delightfully long chapter! Severus is stubbornly awful but totally in character.

    Author's Response: It'll be a while before Snape truly wakes up

Title: Chapter 28: Dead Air 03 Feb 2024
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
    A fascinating and riveting chapter! Nobody messes with Harry’s sister.

    Author's Response: Indeed - I want to see someone try again

When Harriet Potter starts Hogwarts, Severus Snape notices she is unusually quiet and withdrawn. Thinking that she might be sick, he takes her to Madam Pomfrey. What he learns is much more disturbing than a simple sickness. With the ever-optimistic Albus Dumbledore being no help whatsoever, Severus decides that desperate measures need to be taken.

On Halloween morning, Harriet Potter receives a letter from the Half-Blood Prince

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape
Tags: Girl!Harry, Incognito!Snape
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Healer Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: Emotional Abuse, Self-harm
Chapters: 11 - Completed: No - Updated: 08 Feb 2022 / 26 Sep 2021
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 27 Sep 2021
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
    Interesting start. It’s different from the usual story which makes me curious where you’re going with this.

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 09 Feb 2022
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
    An interesting take on the trio going for the stone. I loved how Snape noticed Dumbledore’s disappointment.


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