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| Member since: 04 Sep 2015
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Title: Chapter 5: endure
| 15 Feb 2020
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Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
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Glad to see Umbridge will be arrested and Snape is realizing what Harry has gone through.
Author's Response: im really glad you liked it! thank you for the review!!
After Dumbledore’s death, Hogwarts has to be evacuated to ensure a proper turnover of the wards. Accordingly, McGonagall announces that everyone must leave for the winter holidays. With Bellatrix still on the loose, Harry has little desire to endanger his friends by going home with them, so he resigns himself to a terrible holiday spent with the Dursleys. Thankfully for him, Severus has been on the alert ever since he had uncovered bits and pieces of Harry’s childhood. When he discovers where Harry has gone, he immediately sets about putting the situation to rights.
Takes Place: 6th Year
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Snape flavour: Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
| 18 Feb 2020
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Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
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Good start for the sequel
Author's Response: thanks
Title: Chapter 2: Sometimes Losing People... Is Worse
| 24 Feb 2020
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Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
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Sometimes Harry can be so frustrating. Good chapter
Author's Response: he can be, but he's also still a child so he doesn't rly know any better :/ thank you!
Title: Chapter 7: Severus Snape's Mellow Meditation
| 25 Apr 2020
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Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
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Aww they are both trying so hard. Enjoyable chapter.
Author's Response: they are trying! and thank you :')
Title: Chapter 8: Chores Are Bad, Actually
| 28 Apr 2020
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Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
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Enjoyed your update but Snape might think you’re being a dunderhead for procrastinating with your studying.
Title: Chapter 8: Chores Are Bad, Actually
| 28 Apr 2020
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Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
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Enjoyed your update but Snape might think you’re being a dunderhead for procrastinating with your studying.
Title: Chapter 8: Chores Are Bad, Actually
| 28 Apr 2020
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Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
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Sorry my computer is wonky. I didn’t mean to leave 5 of the same reviews.
Author's Response: haha that’s a mood! no worries though :)
Title: Chapter 1: Finding a Guardian
| 03 Mar 2020
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Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
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I’d be saying, “What?” too. I’ve always wondered why Albus doesn’t send the house elves to clean Spinners End. After all,he’s making Severus take Harry in. I don’t think I’d ask Severus, I’d just have them do it. That way it would be less depressing.
After the events at the Department of Mysteries in June—and all that came after—Harry finds himself once again stranded at Number Four Privet Drive. With only his own thoughts to keep him company, he takes to writing letters to the only person he thinks can help, if only he were still alive to do so. As it turns out, though, sometimes help can arrive in even the most unexpected of forms too.
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape Comforts
Tags: Snape-meets-Dursleys, Spying on Harry! Snape
Categories: Misc > No category on the site fits
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 1
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 22 Apr 2020 / 30 Mar 2020
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Where the Heart is
| 23 Apr 2020
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Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
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I love this one. You took some time to develop their relationship in a believable way.
Harry finds the book from the fifth year of the Half Blood Prince, and there's a co-author to it. He will discover who is the Half Blood Prince at all costs. After a few spells from his time at Hogwarts make a comeback, Severus Snape tries to reveal who exactly has his old book. Dolores Umbridge sees that once again, Harry Potter makes a mess at her school. She will find his mysterious partner, one Half Blood Prince, and punish him. Who will succeed on his quest?
Takes Place: 5th summer, 5th Year
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Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Stern
Tags: Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 19
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Completed: No
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Updated: 16 Jun 2020 / 10 Apr 2020
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 9: Boy
| 24 Apr 2020
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Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
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I’m enjoying your story a lot. I do think a beta would help you with some of the minor grammar issues. They distract from an otherwise interesting and well written story.
Author's Response: Hi, thank you. I'm actually looking for a beta since English isn't my first language, do you happen to know an available one?
If you'd like to point out what kind of mistakes have you seen, I'll try to improve :)
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