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Harry finds the book from the fifth year of the Half Blood Prince, and there's a co-author to it. He will discover who is the Half Blood Prince at all costs.

After a few spells from his time at Hogwarts make a comeback, Severus Snape tries to reveal who exactly has his old book.

Dolores Umbridge sees that once again, Harry Potter makes a mess at her school. She will find his mysterious partner, one Half Blood Prince, and punish him.

Who will succeed on his quest?

Takes Place: 5th summer, 5th Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Stern
Tags: Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 19 - Completed: No - Updated: 16 Jun 2020 / 10 Apr 2020
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 10: Salute 25 Apr 2020
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
    I’m not sure how you find a beta either since I’m a reader and not a writer. I would guess that you can ask on the home page where it says shoutbox. Other people would be able to help you,

Title: Chapter 11: Tiniest 25 Apr 2020
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
    I love the comparison of Snape to a cat. The scene with Lily in the tree confused me.

    Author's Response: Snape's dreams are usually ambiguous in the beginning, we'll work this one out in the following chapters

Title: Chapter 12: Hunter 26 Apr 2020
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
    Good chapter. Curious for more

Title: Chapter 19: Inwardly 23 Jul 2020
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
    Yes I did enjoy it. Well done

A new virus threatens muggles and magical people alike. When it turns out the virus is most lethal for children under eleven, Severus remembers that there is this child he has vowed to protect ...

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: Snape is Desperate
Tags: Girl!Harry
Categories: Healer Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 3 - Completed: No - Updated: 01 May 2020 / 18 Apr 2020
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 19 Apr 2020
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
    Interesting start

"I know about Lily." said the girl. "That you loved her." 

Severus froze mid-footfall. He felt as though he’d had the wind knocked out of him. 

"She's my mum." her chin lifted, her eyes clear. "She wrote me that letter to tell me about you. You're the only person she really mentioned, but I guess that makes sense, since you're my father. Who else was she supposed to talk about?"

Takes Place: 1st summer before Hogwarts, 1st Year, 2nd summer, 2nd Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape
Tags: Alternate Universe, Girl!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape

Rated: T - Warnings: Alcohol Use, Bullying, Profanity, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 24 - Completed: No - Updated: 05 Nov 2023 / 24 Apr 2020
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: the kids aren't alright 24 Jul 2021
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
    I found Snape stalking them amusing. As a parent, I totally get his need to do this. Draco and Ariel’s bickering was totally in character.

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: girl 25 Apr 2020
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
    Interesting start. I can’t help thinking of the Little Mermaid if her name is Ariel.

    Author's Response: Ironically, I actually hate the Little Mermaid LOL. The movie plot always annoyed me for some reason.

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: letters from someone 01 May 2020
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
    I like your feisty Ariel.

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: for those below 04 Aug 2020
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
    I’ve caught up since I was a few chapters behind. You’ve done an excellent job portraying Snape as a bitter but passionate person. You can really feel his pain as well as his anger. Ariel’s curiosity and spunk also come across well.

    Author's Response: Thank you so much!! :) We love bitter Snape

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: weight of living 26 Jan 2021
Reviewer: Vadimmom (Signed)
    Poor Severus. His comfort zone has been annihilated!


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