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Title: Chapter 18: Sadness
| 10 Aug 2016
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Reviewer: girllavender (Signed)
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I just started reading this story after a year's absence...and I blew through it, wow, what a great story, characters sufficiently in character with room to realistically grow...very well written...I can't say it enough...WOW, WOW, WOW, can't wait for the next installment. Watch out for grammar errors and some sentence structure bloopers, but otherwise, GREAT JOB!!! Keep it coming!!!*
The professors no longer can scare Harry with talk of lost points, detentions or Quidditch suspensions. He's been beaten down for far too long, and he finally has reached his limit. Severus mentors, eventual guardian
Takes Place: 5th summer, 5th Year
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Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Out of Character Snape, Overly-protective Snape
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Injured!Harry, New Identity!Harry, Resorting, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Bullying, Character Bashing, Character Death, Neglect, Out of Character, Profanity, Rape, Romance/Het, Suicide Themes, Violence
Chapters: 7
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Completed: No
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Updated: 22 Nov 2018 / 18 Jun 2018
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 7: I Must Remember to Stay Calm
| 21 Jan 2019
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Reviewer: girllavender (Signed)
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i have already read this story several times on fanfiction and thought it was rich, imaginative, creative and of course daring. i am really looking forward to seeing it on this site and i encourage you to keep it up. subtlety is an art and i believe you are equal to it. if you have ever watched older movies you can see how the best actors were well versed in nuance and were able to let you know what was happening without being graphic when it came for restricted rating material. j.k. rowling did it as well. if you really pay attention to her wording you can see that harry's abuse was very serious physically as well as psychologically. don't give up. you are very talented and i know you can do it. i can't wait to see how the rest of the chapters come out. read you soon!
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