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When Harry finds an injured Snape on his doorstep and must hide him from the Dursleys, he has no idea that this very, very bad day will be the start of something good.

Harry and Snape are thrown together by annoying relatives, a series of strange dreams, and Voldemort's latest hunt for Harry, but their greatest challenge may well be surviving each other. This will be a long summer unless the two can find a way to work together. A slow-burn enemy-to-mentor story.

Alternate 6th summer (and part of the school year): post-OotP; ignores HBP and DH.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: Canon Snape
Tags: Injured!Harry, Injured!Snape, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Violence
Chapters: 61 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 08 Mar 2021 / 30 Apr 2007
Series: None - Challenges: Battered Snape for Breakfast
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Resolve 20 Sep 2019
Reviewer: rysbar55 (Signed)
    You have no idea how pleasantly surprised I am so see you've been posting. I'm down playing how excited this makes me. Every few years I some how end up rereading this fanfiction cause I love it so much. You have definitely not disappointed me! Loving the new chapters!

    Author's Response: Aw thank you for the kind words! It makes me so happy that you are still interested in this story after so many years. I really hope you like where it goes next! :)

Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Occlumency, Part 1 19 Oct 2019
Reviewer: rysbar55 (Signed)
    I promise you that this "boring occlumency stuff" is not at all boring. this is the most interested take on occlumency that I have EVER read. love it!

    Author's Response: Aw thank you! I had a few different ideas about how to do the Occlumency lesson, and this one was the one I thought I'd most want to read, so that's what I wrote. I'm so glad that you liked it!! Thanks for taking the time to let me know. :)

Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Occlumency, Part 1 09 Nov 2019
Reviewer: rysbar55 (Signed)
    Great chapter, as always. The occlumency stuff definitely isn't boring. I love the way you're doing this.

    Author's Response: Thank you!! I'm glad you are enjoying the Occlumency and hope you like the next bit of it too! :) (Sorry for the delayed response - the month got away from me.) 

Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - Grimmauld Place 28 Dec 2019
Reviewer: rysbar55 (Signed)
    I'm the worst at reviewing, but I check your fanfiction stkeadt 3 times a week to see if there is an update. It's my absolute favorite. Sorry I'm not better at reviewing!

    Author's Response:

    Aw, I'm so happy that you love it enough to check in on it! That makes me so happy. You're an awesome reviewer in my book! :) I hope you had a good New Year!


Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Boundaries 01 Feb 2020
Reviewer: rysbar55 (Signed)
    I can't stand it. This is literally everything I could ever want in a fanfiction. Your characterization is perfect. Everything is believable and realistic. You don't overdo the abuse or speed up the relationship building. It's just all so perfect. And new. Like it's not just the same thing everyone else has done. I love it.

    Author's Response: Oh my goodness, you're making me all sappy! Thank you for such a nice reivew! It is so so nice to hear that you are enjoying OME and what you like about it. It totally makes all the effort I've put into this story worth it. Thank you!! :)

Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - The Mental Arts 24 Jun 2020
Reviewer: rysbar55 (Signed)
    I'm rereading this for the thousanth time because I wanted to remember the progression of their relationship with all the new chapters lol. And now that I have with the new info I have noticed a lot of for shadowing that I never noticed before. i am curious if this was for shadowing on purpose:

    He was even pleasantly surprised to find that it wasn’t all drudgery. Once he got past the dull introductory chapters, there were quite a few fascinating facts about Occlumency and tactics an Occlumens could use. It wasn’t all about fending off attacks, he learned; it was also about mastering misdirection. When he got to the chapter about ways in which strong emotion could be tethered to specific memories, which could then be used to misdirect a Legilimens, he read the chapter twice through and marked it for future study.

    I just ask cause that's kind of what barru did with Voldemort. He used the emotion of love and those memories which really fucked with Voldemort s head. Idk if that was done on purpose. I already think your fucking brilliant and if it was done on purpose than that just shows even more brilliance than I realized lol but if not: don't worry. You're still brilliant

    Author's Response: Thanks so so much for the review! I love it when people pull out things that I put in the story, not sure if anybody would ever notice. :) Honestly, I do put seemingly inconsequential things in that I plan on being important later, but sometimes I also get inspired by past chapters to expound on things that weren't necessarily planned. This one was about half and half. I knew that I wanted Harry to use that bit of Occlumency and that it would tie into his battle with Voldemort, but I wasn't 100% certain yet exactly how it would play out. :)

Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Harry Potter's Heart 28 Jun 2020
Reviewer: rysbar55 (Signed)
    How do I get access to your marvel fic

    Author's Response: Alas, I haven't posted it yet! I stopped working on it in order to finish OME (I'm a one project at a time girl), but I plan to get back to it after OME is complete. :)

Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53 - Security Blanket 16 Oct 2020
Reviewer: rysbar55 (Signed)
    I can't believe it's already been over a year since you started posting again. And like what over 30 chapters later. Nuuuuuts. It's currently one of the biggest things helping me to survive life this year. So even though I don't always comment, I want you to know I always read and it's hugely impactful to me 😊

Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55 - Home Sweet Home 03 Nov 2020
Reviewer: rysbar55 (Signed)
    I Suddenly feeling horrified at the thought that this fanfiction may actually end soon. Like everything is coming together. Everyone's getting along. And are understanding each other. 😨 I do hope you give us like a warning to prepare for when that ends up happening 😂

    Regardless, once again, I adored the chapter

Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55 - Home Sweet Home 03 Nov 2020
Reviewer: rysbar55 (Signed)
    I Suddenly feeling horrified at the thought that this fanfiction may actually end soon. Like everything is coming together. Everyone's getting along. And are understanding each other. 😨 I do hope you give us like a warning to prepare for when that ends up happening 😂

    Regardless, once again, I adored the chapter

    Author's Response: Eek, sorry for ending it soon! But...you know, not sorry at the same time. ;) I feel so glad to be getting to a resolution point soon after all this time. I think the sense of accomplishment will be unreal! :) :) Thank you so so much for following along with it!!


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