the Phoenix
Ravenclaw!
SEQUEL to “The Last Will and Testament of Lily Evans” and “Lily’s Last Wish.” Harry is kidnapped and tortured, and Snape is left to try and pick up the pieces and prepare Harry for the final battle. This is the third story in the series.
Takes Place: 6th Year
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Snape flavour: Snape Comforts
Tags: Injured!Harry, Kidnapped!Harry
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Unofficially teaching Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by Lucinda Hindle
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Rape, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 34 - Completed: No - Updated: 26 Jun 2018 / 17 Aug 2017
Series: Lily's Boys - The Saga - Challenges: None
Chapters: 34 - Completed: No - Updated: 26 Jun 2018 / 17 Aug 2017
Series: Lily's Boys - The Saga - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 | 01 Oct 2017 |
| Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) |
- The sight to see singing is a sight to behold. Somehow, his singing reminded me of a verse from a poem. (Not compatible I know, but it reminded me so:)
Behold her, single in the field,
Yon solitary Highland Lass!
Reaping and singing by herself;
Stop here, or gently pass!
Yeah, I know nothing to do with the story but I am mad.
Ola! I was so happy to see the notification on my email that you have updated that I literally pushed my brother off the computer to read it.
Poor Harry. (I like a poor and suffering Harry)
Finally, took Snape long enough to find out that Harry is not like James.
Any idea ow long this story is? I want it to go on forever! But alas, every story has to stop somewhere. (Stories don't end, ever.)
This again reminded me of another verse. (Poem)
There is no such thing as a happy ending
Endings are the saddest part
So just give me a happy middle
and a very happy start.
I am feeling quite poetic today.
I don't like a happy middle, so I guess all the stories should be sad..................
Whatever, I liked this chapter. Sorry I didn't love it as nothing actually happened, it was just a kind of filler, but nonetheless, I liked it. Is there going to be more action? I guess you should just put up recovery an healing in this story and the vanquishing of the Dark Lord should be left for the next story in the series.
Though that is your wish, you story. I love it the way it is!
Author's Response: Is there going to be more action? Hmm... I'm not sure how to answer that. The recovery and the healing IS the action in this story. I have the ending written. I don't have the middle section complete.
| Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 | 29 Oct 2017 |
| Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) |
- Gosh, Severus's nightmare was horrible, but I guess Harry's nightmares were even more terrible. Is there something more to when Harry's fainted for a couple of seconds.
How was your HP festival? I wish there were such things in our country too..................
I had almost forgotten that they had had only four days in the safe house. It feels like months. Anyway, the next chapter in a week? Great. I will be waiting.
| Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 | 24 Sep 2017 |
| Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) |
- Hmm, do you know, I read it in half the speed as I usually do so that the chapter may last longer? Whatever, I am not criticising you.
Nice chapter. I wonder why Voldemort didn't do this before, surely he had had more time to do so?
Anyway, I liked this chapter. They didn't use any curse on Harry, did they? Just Muggle torture, right?
Oh, I was just curious, is there any possibility that you are going to continue any of your currently discontinued stories? I am getting tired of checking them every single week.
Author's Response: I do hope to continue/finish some of the other stories, but it will be awhile. The only one I am actively working on at present us Death Wish. The others are on hold. If you "follow" the story, you will receive an update when I post a new chapter.
| Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 | 04 Sep 2017 |
| Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) |
- The story is going pretty nice, I liked the plot. Well, it is quite nice that now Severus's cover is blown, he won't have to pretend to hate Harry in class anymore. Though I must say that I don't like a bald Harry, maybe you can do something about it, a hair growth spell perhaps?
| Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 | 04 Sep 2017 |
| Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) |
- Well, Snape better be sure that when Harry wakes, he is not alone in the new safe house, Snape might find him unconscious from a panic attack.
The story is quite nice. Harry is quite strong, I might have committed suicide by now. The story is going pretty nicely and the updates are fast. Keep it up. Waiting for the next chapter.
| Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 | 09 Sep 2017 |
| Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) |
- This chapter is mostly healing, but I like it nonetheless. I guess the people who stunned Poppy were either Draco, Crabbe, Goyle or some other Death Eaters. I am surprised they let her go after just stunning and obliviating her, I thought that they were going to torture her for information, but I am glad they didn't. You update pretty fast, keep it up but also try to increase the length a little.
| Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 | 13 Sep 2017 |
| Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) |
- Eeesh! That was some chapter. I hope that Severus understands that Harry has gone into a flashback, will help him in feeling less disturbed. He could have stunned Harry before applying the potion. Well, you had already stated that you like tortured heroes in your bio, the are one of my favourites too, so this chapter was good (main reason I read this story). I guess you will slowly reveal some things that happened to Harry in his captivity, right? You see, small flashbacks, memories, nightmares etc.
The story is going pretty nice and the updates are fast, love it till now!
| Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 | 13 Sep 2017 |
| Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) |
- Well, I am reading this chapter again, I love this one, one of my favourites till now. I would be delighted to see all this from Severus' perspective, I want to hear what would he be thinking of Harry's constant screaming and begging. reading it the second time proved to be more gruesome than the first. The way you described Harry's bones snapping made my heart ache with pity. A really nice work. (This is my second review on this chapter, just tells how much I love this story.)
| Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 | 19 Sep 2017 |
| Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) |
- Eesh, do you have a life ambition to leave of chapters in a cliff hanger? I was distantly happy and giddy that you had updated this chapter after so long, (Long for you, of course, usually you update within four days) All that giddiness vanished the moment I saw the cliff hanger. I can just hope that you post the new chapter faster than you did this one. Do you have the story already written and completed or are you going with the flow, if you are going with the flow, then I have no problem with the time lapse, but if you have it completed, then please try to set a proper time interval. Whatever, I loved this chapter too, the moment I saw a notification that a new chapter had been posted, I screamed in delight, so loud my brothers evening milk glass went flying with the force of gravity. (Luckily it was empty or I would have been in for it.)
Author's Response: Yes I try to end in a cliff hanger. Evil, I know. Keeps readers coming back for more. I slowed down updates on this one because I only have one more chapter completed. Mindscape was written in full in 3 weeks so that will continue fast updates. I am supposed to be crafting for a huge HP festival next month where I am a vendor. I also have two other HPSS stories that I am writing and several more ideas, but I won't post a new long story until Mindscape is completely up. I have posted several other HPSS stories on fanfiction.net (light slash) and AO3 (heavy slash), mostly all hurt-comfort of course, to tide you over if you can manage the romantic pairing.
| Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 | 04 Dec 2017 |
| Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) |
- No update this week? I am so disappointed. I have read the whole story again! Yay! Had forgotten a few things, but they are now quite fresh in my mind! Eagerly waiting! Keep writing!
I want to hear Snape sing! How wonderful would it be, wouldn't it? I love this so effing much! I love your story! I love this with all my heart!
Take your time, okay, just don't ever finish this story, i won't be able to bear it if you did. Also, I wonder what you have planned for Christmas. In the story.