the Phoenix
Ravenclaw!
SEQUEL to “The Last Will and Testament of Lily Evans” and “Lily’s Last Wish.” Harry is kidnapped and tortured, and Snape is left to try and pick up the pieces and prepare Harry for the final battle. This is the third story in the series.
Takes Place: 6th Year
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Snape flavour: Snape Comforts
Tags: Injured!Harry, Kidnapped!Harry
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Unofficially teaching Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by Lucinda Hindle
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Rape, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 34 - Completed: No - Updated: 26 Jun 2018 / 17 Aug 2017
Series: Lily's Boys - The Saga - Challenges: None
Chapters: 34 - Completed: No - Updated: 26 Jun 2018 / 17 Aug 2017
Series: Lily's Boys - The Saga - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 | 04 Dec 2017 |
| Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) |
- No update this week? I am so disappointed. I have read the whole story again! Yay! Had forgotten a few things, but they are now quite fresh in my mind! Eagerly waiting! Keep writing!
I want to hear Snape sing! How wonderful would it be, wouldn't it? I love this so effing much! I love your story! I love this with all my heart!
Take your time, okay, just don't ever finish this story, i won't be able to bear it if you did. Also, I wonder what you have planned for Christmas. In the story.
| Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 | 09 Oct 2017 |
| Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) |
- Harumph! Thai had been a long and agonising week, but of well, at last the chapter is up, now you have also said that the chapters would be updated once a week, so I guess that is reasonable enough.
Centipedes! Urgh! I hate them, they make me shiver and want to vomit and gag. *Shudder*. I did not need the visuals........... Arrrrggghehheh!!!! I hate it!
But you have already said that this is dark, maybe you can add gross to it too?
At first I hadn't thought that Muggle torture could have been effective, after all, Wizards have the Cruciatus curse, though I don't really know how that feels (Not that I want to.) but reading what you have written, I ma eating up my words.
Poor Harry, the trauma is so great, and written so beautifully.
Keep writing, loving it!
Centipedes......... *moans*
| Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 | 15 Oct 2017 |
| Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) |
- Poor poor Harry, No wonder he would prefer death than going back to them. A hand. *shudder* Gosh.
Thank God you grew Harry's hair, even when his head was shaved, I never imagined him bald. (but he was handsome)
I hope you have fun in the HP festival.
I will be waiting for the new chapter.
I like the way Harry mentions some of the torture day by day, I can't believe that it had been just a few days since the rescue. I wonder what is happening in the Wizarding World?
Lets see! Thanks for the extra long chapter, as a writer I know how difficult they are.
| Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 | 06 Nov 2017 |
| Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) |
- Aww, you wrote Dobby's character so well!!
I can't wait for the next chapter, but still, get well soon!!
I recently got sick, and believe me, I won't wish that on anyone. Maybe except Voldemort. And Bellatrix. And Umbridge.
Anyway, I hope you get well soon!! I was about to start writing when I got a notification and then Boom! and Clash!! Everything down, start reading. A bit small chapter, but I love it.
Seriously though,no one is going to come, right? Harry is just being paranoid, right?
| Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 | 13 Nov 2017 |
| Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) |
- Harry seems so (pathetic) sad. I pity him very much, I don't know how Severus is getting annoyed at the boy. He was tortured for Merlin's Sake!
Severus! You should be more considerate, its not about trust, the fact that he is not safe any where was TORTURED into him, of course it will take some time to sway him from that notion!
Let him be, you are making him study for, what? 5 hours? I don't study for more than 3 hours a day! And, if I were in harry's place, I won't be able to function properly let alone study. I might already be dead by the rate we are going, Harry is quite strong if I must say. (suicide, life would be too difficult.)
A lovely chapter, waiting for the next one.
PS: Would Voldemort be defeated in this story? Or will there be another sequel?
| Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 | 18 Nov 2017 |
| Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) |
- Awww, you had to end the chapter on a bad note AND a cliffhanger??
What do you have against readers?
Whatever, to tell the truth, the moment I saw the notification that you have updated a chapter, I literally cried out with surprise and delight. I was expecting the chapter on Moday, like you had posted earlier, nevertheless, I was pleasantly delighted!! Oh lalalalala! I love you!!
I was practically giddy with joy throughout the chapter just because you updated, this is absolutely my favourite in process fanfiction!1
Couple it with a cup of hot chocolate.... Mummmmmmmmhmmmhhhmmm.....
Anyway, I am an Indian and have never celebrated a full on christmas, and it looks just so much fun!!!!!! I wanna cut down a tree too!! Gosh, it doesn't even snow in the place we live, can life get any more boring?
*sigh* I will have to make a do with reading then.
You seem to know a aweful lot about setting up christmas trees, I have decorated them, but only very small about two feet tall? Artificial ones, they were not as much fun as this seems to be.
Anyway, I will be so eagerly waiting for an update!
So, there is gonna be a sequel, right? After all, you said that Harry's healing was the climax of this story, so Voldemort's defeat should be the focus of the sequel. And don't you dare answer me with a denial!
| Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 | 25 Nov 2017 |
| Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) |
- Harry is just so, just so broken............
I almost sobbed in despair for Harry, poor Harry.
Don't read further if you are of a faint heart.
Lets hear what I will do if I ever get the chance to torture the Death Eaters who tortured Harry. I'll chain them first, then use the Cruciatus Curse until they either lost consciousness or their voices broke. Then I would take a bucket full of maggots and force feed it to them. Slowly, I will cut of their toes and fingers before feeding that to them too. After that, I will take a candle and burn the stubs of there toes and fingers. After that, I will use the Cruciatus curse again, then I will take a bucketful of centipedes and cockroach and dump it on them. Then I will drown them, you know, keep on spraying water on their faces so that they can't breath. After that, I will take a belt and whip them raw. Before cutting of their remaining hands and feets and burning there stumps too. The Cruciatus curse again, before I make jagged cuts all across their body and spraying lemon juice on them. I will continue this routine until there is nothing left to cut and then burn them alive!! Muahahahaha! That felt good to write.
Such a great chapter! A bit smaller than the last, but great nonetheless. Poor poor HArry, I want to see Snape doing something to them, really.
| Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 | 04 Dec 2017 |
| Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) |
- Okay, at last a sweet chapter that doesn't end in Harry or us crying!
I love you, this was sufficiently long! Eagerly waiting!
I want more angst! I love it, we don't get the value of a thing until we lose it, this chapter was missing angst, so I missed it, anyway, I like some good days too, when Harry can just sit back and relax.
| Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 | 09 Dec 2017 |
| Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) |
- That, um, that ended very abruptly, so, christmas is coming!!!!
Oh yeah! You must be so so so excited! I was just so happy to know that you updated today!
I loved this chapter, the last one and this one had been quite light, something that I think both Harry and us readers needed. Keep writing!
| Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 | 13 Dec 2017 |
| Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) |
- Not a very good thought to have while falling asleep Harry.
Also, was that potion important? Or did you just add it to the story, because you didn't mention what became crystal clear. Gosh, the tree sounds just too beautiful!
And did I tell you that I love you for updating the story earlier?
Author's Response: The use for the potion will become "crystal clear" soon ;-).