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Lily's Lost Boys by chrmisha starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 125]
SEQUEL to “The Last Will and Testament of Lily Evans” and “Lily’s Last Wish.” Harry is kidnapped and tortured, and Snape is left to try and pick up the pieces and prepare Harry for the final battle. This is the third story in the series.

Takes Place: 6th Year - Snape flavour: Snape Comforts
Tags: Injured!Harry, Kidnapped!Harry
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Unofficially teaching Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Rape, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 34 - Completed: No - Updated: 26 Jun 2018 / 17 Aug 2017
Series: Lily's Boys - The Saga - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 16 Dec 2017
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed)
    So, after a few chapters of relative calm, you give us action in the form of a freezing Potter on the verge of sinking into oblivion due to a flashback which forced him to come out of the house in a cold snowy day.

    I hope Severus doesn't get irritated that Harry went out, after all, he does tend to jump on to conclusions.........

    Eagerly waiting for the next chapter! So happy that you are updating faster!

Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 22 Dec 2017
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed)
    Pale blue eyes. Uh, was that, that the muggle guy that had been tortured with Harry, or is it Sirius, no, I guess not, I don't know why Ron would stare at him with reproachful eyes.
    Uh, when I read about what Harry wanted, I kind of wanted to bang my head through the wall. But I managed not to, thanks for updating!!
    Those blue eyes are still a mystery, right, I am not forgetting something, or anything, right?

Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 05 Jan 2018
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed)
    A bloody good chapter! For a moment I thought that Christmas is gone, but alas, it hasn't.
    Glad the anger is gone from Snape.
    For a moment there I thought that Harry can sleep walk and ran off while sleeping and now Snape was looking for him, anyway, I am glad it was just a dream.
    For a moment I thought Snape would deny being afraid, but then he said, "Bloody terrified" and my heart swelled.
    Great chapter!
    At least this time you gave some closure........
    Lots of love, keep writing, and Happy New Year!! May you get lots of reviews!

Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 15 Jan 2018
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed)
    Awww, this was so sweet, I believe that the story is progressing very slowly, its been weeks since Christmas and it isn't even Christmas eve here yet, still, I love the idea of fairies, you look like you do a lot of research..... Hm?
    Waiting and waiting! But I loved the part where the Dungeon's Bat becomes Snake Eye!

Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 27 Jan 2018
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed)
    SOMETHING IS WRONG WITH IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WITH THE WEBSITE!!!!!! IT DIDN'T GIVE ME THE NOTIFICATION THAT THIS FIC HAS BEEN UPDATED!
    Well, thank god I checked the story today or I would have missed this wonderful update.
    Looks like my guess about those blue eyes was correct, wasn't it?
    I love dark chapters!
    And, I think, you should also confirm the fact that you are a writer and not a sadistic murderer, the way you describe the tortures.

Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 22 Feb 2018
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed)
    Awww, this was sweet, I am guessing another dark chapter is coming....? Cuz nothing good lasts long for Harry, does it?
    Anyway, I am still waiting when that potion will come to use, the one whose purpose became crystal clear, you said that it is important, right?

    Author's Response: I'm sorry if it wasn't clear! The potion they made was to sedate the fairies so they could bring them back for the Christmas tree. It's also used to keep them calm and provide nutrition. Do I need to make that clearer in the story? I'm sorry you were still waiting for it.

Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 24 Feb 2018
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed)
    (Reply to the review reply) No need to be sorry, just me being dumb, thanks for explaining though.

    Great chapter! Nice, the gift was awesome, all of them. Hermione and Ron can now communicate with Harry, that's so brilliant. Now, after this chapter, my already very big desire to skate has increased tenfold.
    Anyway, thanks for the update, nice chapter, loved it!
    Keep writing!

Snape's Promise by Melolcatsi starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 33]
When the Dursley home is found to be unsuitable for Harry, Dumbledore implores his Potions Master to take the boy in, for the sake of the promise he made to Lily. Another Snape-adopts-Harry story, set Pre-Hogwarts. Harry is 8. Pairings TBD. Dursley abuse is close to canon.

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Stern
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Child fic, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Bullying, Neglect, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 14 - Completed: No - Updated: 16 Jan 2018 / 12 Sep 2017
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 27 Sep 2017
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed)
    Awww, it has been almost a week since you last updated. A single chapter would suffice, please?

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 17 Sep 2017
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed)
    Oooh! Bellatrix, she is one of my favourite villians. I love a tortured Harry. You should add torture to your warning tags. Poor Harry, let Severus watch the torture for a while, I want to see his reaction. I was just reading this story in passing, but it is very well written and I have been enraptured. Hope you update it soon. I also want an explanation to how Bella escaped Azkaban?

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 19 Sep 2017
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed)
    Oh no, Harry isn't going to make breakfast, is he, to please Snape? It happens, a common idea...... though by no means, uninteresting.....
    Oh god, why can't Harry just do as asked, for once? Sod off, I don't care, I like the story!


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