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Past Featured Story Walk the Shadows by jharad17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 633]
The summer after 5th year, Death Eaters find Harry abandoned in the Dursley house and bring him to Voldemort. Will one particular Death Eater give up his position and his hate to save his enemy's child? Eventual Snape mentors Harry fic.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Profanity, Rape, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 43 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 05 Nov 2007 / 23 Jul 2007
Series: Walk the Shadows - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 20 Sep 2017
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed)
    Ha, very ha, in the second last paragraph I think 'admit'is the keyword, right? He already likes Harry, just doesn't admit it. You write such cool humor. I am really happy that I stumbled across this story. Thank you so much for writing it.

Past Featured Story Slave Child by Kristeh starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 1252]
A duel with Draco leads to drastic and permanent consequences for both Harry and Severus.

Takes Place: 6th Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe
Categories: Master Snape > Slave Harry
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Self-harm, Suicide Themes
Chapters: 79 - Completed: No - Updated: 17 Nov 2011 / 27 Jan 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 01 Oct 2017
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed)
    "I'll help you," Hermione, usually the voice of reason, promptly agreed.
    I completely love this chapter! So so so awesome. The way you have portrayed Ron and Hermione, they are a bit OOC but I like them like this too! I would have copied and pasted the entire conversation, but I settled for my favourite line. (Quite difficult to choose.)

    Author's Response: I've always loved Ron and Hermione!  Who wouldn't want to have such loyal friends who will always be there for you?  Harry was very fortunate to have the two of them. 

Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 01 Oct 2017
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed)
    Oh la la. I love this. At first I thought that Harry was going to slit his wrists. Though I liked that method better, this one was good too! Lets see Ron and Hermione's reactions too!
    You see, your Harry is quite realistic, who wouldn't want to die after all that Harry has suffered. I guess the only thing that kept Harry going on in the canon series is the need to destroy Voldemort. I guess after that Ginny was enough for him to have the will to live. He has suffered quite enough and the Dursleys had always made sure that he had a low self esteem. It was only logical that Harry tried suicide. The slavery spell just added to his list of thing to die for.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're still reading and enjoying the story.  Yes, I always thought it was a little unrealistic for Harry to be so resilient after all he had been through, so I wanted to show him being more affected emotionally.  Thankfully, he does have wonderful friends to help him through it all, and now he has Severus as well. 

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 23 Sep 2017
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed)
    This story gets better and better, I love it. I don't clearly know but I have a vague idea that I have read it before, whatever, I love it as much as the first time.
    I really like a guilt ridden Snape, because something happened to Harry, you will find a challenge named "Snape Rage" I guess you can add that too, you see, I want Harry to not have done anything but Snape blaming him and because of which it has drastic consequences. Your writing style too is really good, your sentence construction leaves little to be desired. If my guardian wasn't hovering over me like a hawk, I would have read the whole bloody night! But alas, everything can't happen as we want so I guess I would finish your story in about, um, 4 days? A really nice story by the way, though I think the Slave bond is a little slack, anyway, the less humiliating it is for Harry, the better, I read another story in which the Slavery spell was a lot more demanding,(Coals of Fire) *shudder*. Though that story was also good, I like this one better.
    Thanks for writing this story!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much for your kind compliments!  I'm glad you're enjoying my little monster of a story, lol.  I hope you will continue to read and enjoy!

Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 12 Oct 2017
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed)
    Huuuuhhh.. This chapter was so satisfying that it got a sigh out of me. It was so beautifully written.

    Author's Response: Thank you! 

Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 19 Oct 2017
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed)
    Things are moving a bit fast, but that is fine with me. Thsi story is brilliant. Even after getting as many reviews as 1000, you still like them, I suppose, me too, I love them, you know the quote, what comes around, goes around. So, I am hoping I will get some reviews on ff.net too. Whatever,I thought Severus knew about the cupboard, I never knew that Harry's favourite colours were red and gold, though mine is blue. That adoption, I thought that the slavery spell would be broken by the adoption as a son can't be your slave.

    Author's Response: Thank you for all the lovely reviews!  And yep, they're always nice to receive!  The slavery spell is resolved by the end of the story.

Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 19 Oct 2017
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed)
    Oh my, I had waited for so long for that apology, I thought that it would never come.
    Umm, I also don't see Harry leaving a note to Severus, is that just a typo or.............?

    Author's Response: No he didn't leave a note--bad Harry!

Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 19 Oct 2017
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed)
    Never mind, I got my answer to the previous review. Harumph, Harry overthinks a bit, doesn't he? He just forgot to leave a simple note, he even said sorry even then he thinks that Severus would leave him? Of course I know that he has a low self esteem, but of man, that was pretty pathetic, even for Harry, who seems to be an all time low in this story.

    Author's Response: Yes, Harry might be at an all time low, but hey, I had to try to keep some drama going, didn't I?

Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 19 Oct 2017
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed)
    There is too much fluff, don't you think? Like, Severus hugging Harry almost twice every day, my father hugs me maybe once every year, you know. But, well, I don't have much problem with it except for the fact that it looks OOC.

    Author's Response: Yea, I think you're right--a bit too much fluff, but oh well, the fluffier, the better, sometimes at least.

Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 19 Oct 2017
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed)
    Hm-Hm, this chapter was nice, well as I already said, the Slavery Spell is quite slack, but I didn't want it too hard either, I just like a Harry in pain, not a Harry humiliated, what ever, I know it is a bit strange.

    Author's Response: Thanks!  I was more interested in exploring the emotional aspects of the slavery spell.


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