Ravenclaw!
Post-OOTP, Snape must blow his cover as a spy to save Harry from Voldemort. Now they hate each other more than ever, but if their side is going to win, old enmities must be cast aside.
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by SnapesYukuai
Rated: T
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Warnings: Character Death, Torture
Chapters: 30 - Completed: No - Updated: 22 Apr 2010 / 22 Jan 2005
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 30 - Completed: No - Updated: 22 Apr 2010 / 22 Jan 2005
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 20: Deeper and Darker | 29 May 2010 |
| Reviewer: SnapesYukuai (Signed) |
- Weew, I would have reviewed sooner, if I hadn't been so hellbent on reading your fic while frantically learning for my chemistry exam! ^^ I cannot even describe it with words! It is simpy and utterly awesome, so exciting and bloody well written and inventive and... Woah!!! I love it, really and untterly love your story (and I was very tempted to strangle anyone when I saw that there weren't any reviews for some chaps... I thought it would be swamped with them because, Merlin, your story is amazing...
Sorry for rambling and I have half (maybe three quarters) a mind to go back and review every other chap I haven't before but I fear that must wait until after my exam. ^^"
Yours happily, Melfis. (your story really made my day!!!)
| Title: Chapter 21: The Forest of Shadows | 30 May 2010 |
| Reviewer: SnapesYukuai (Signed) |
- Wow, God, the excitement's going to kill me. I sit on my chair rubbing my hands together all the time, half in glee and half to relieve the tension. Anyway, I could only say: "Oh, God." When I read the last sentence. I really, really hope for Harry that he will be able to actively DO something fast, because if he is played that way by Voldi much longer, unable to defend himself in anyway either excitement or frustration is going to kill me. ^, ^"
Anyway, I love your story and cannot wait for more Snape scenes. Will he be ever comforting Harry in any way? Well, I guess there's nothing to it but finding out. Go on, your story is great.
Your Melfis.
| Title: Chapter 22: Potter's Army | 30 May 2010 |
| Reviewer: SnapesYukuai (Signed) |
- Wow, I think Boom, Bang WOAH! describes it neatly. Wow, terrific chapter. I was bouncing (the whole time). The DA and Remus and Sev and Murdo were absolutely great!!
At the end of the chapter I noticed that it was exactly what Ron said to Harry that was bothering me for some time now. I have to congratulate you, you managed to make the reader feel exactly like the characters. That was quite a feat. ^___^ So, anyway, pleeeaaase, let Harry be able to fight!!
Love your story still, your Melfis.
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Sixth Year. Tensions are running high in Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. Everyone who knows anything knows something is about to happen. And it is in the midst of this that two unlikely people find a little more than a common ground...
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 5 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 09 Sep 2004 / 09 Sep 2004
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 5 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 09 Sep 2004 / 09 Sep 2004
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 5: Hope Can Be Found | 11 Aug 2006 |
| Reviewer: SnapesYukuai (Signed) |
YES!!!!!! Please!!!! This story is absolutely adorable!!! I love it!!! Please write a sequel to this wonderful piece of work!
Yours truly,
Melfdragon.
Harry has a tougher time than anyone thought. Not only is he caught up in the war between light and dark, but the on going battle between the realms of magic and science as well. What can a young boy and a tetchy Potions Master do to help one another? And what is said Potion Masters fathers’ role in this?
Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Master Snape > Apprentice Harry, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Master Snape > Apprentice Harry, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Violence
Chapters: 17 - Completed: No - Updated: 12 Oct 2007 / 26 May 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 17 - Completed: No - Updated: 12 Oct 2007 / 26 May 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: All aside in desperation | 30 May 2010 |
| Reviewer: SnapesYukuai (Signed) |
- Hi there, I think I like your story quite well so far and the prospect of Harry hopefully becoming Snape's apprentice makes me bounce in delightful anticipation. ^^
Anyway, one question: Was Snape injured and I didn't get it or is he is just resting in the hospital wing?
Your Melfis.
| Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Unexpected | 30 May 2010 |
| Reviewer: SnapesYukuai (Signed) |
- Wow, that was unexpected. But definitely interesting and in the end: CUTE! Well, keep going this sound increasingly intriguing (no clue if I spelled that word correct, sorry).
Your Melfis.
After the Dobby incident at the beginning of the second book, Harry runs away, and Snape kidnaps him. In an old-fashioned house with no comforts and a huge black dog, Harry finds himself at Snape's mercy as Snape plays mind games and makes Harry live through different scenarios. Though Snape seems crazy and psychotic, Harry begins to see reasons behind Snape's sporadic behavior.
There is corporal punishment, but it is different from what I've written before. This is a Mean!Snape story for the most part. If you're looking for a cuddly story, go elsewhere please.
Takes Place: 2nd summer - Snape flavour: Snape is Cruel, Snape is Mean
Tags: Kidnapped, Runaway
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
There is corporal punishment, but it is different from what I've written before. This is a Mean!Snape story for the most part. If you're looking for a cuddly story, go elsewhere please.
Takes Place: 2nd summer - Snape flavour: Snape is Cruel, Snape is Mean
Tags: Kidnapped, Runaway
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Physical Punishment Spanking, Violence
Chapters: 18 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 15 Apr 2009 / 08 Nov 2007
Series: The House Which Time Forgot - Challenges: None
Chapters: 18 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 15 Apr 2009 / 08 Nov 2007
Series: The House Which Time Forgot - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Cold | 06 Jun 2010 |
| Reviewer: SnapesYukuai (Signed) |
- Awe, the end was cute. I'm quite curious as to why Sev thought it clever to lock Harry in a cold cellar but at least in the end it became clear that he didn't want Harry to come to harm (well, despite his harsh exterior that's an intention of Snape I exclude anyway).
Great chap, your Melfis.
| Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Bed | 06 Jun 2010 |
| Reviewer: SnapesYukuai (Signed) |
- That was a wonderful chap! Snape taking care of Harry however gruffly he did it is simply adorable! ^____^ I like how you bring in snippets of Snape's past and general views. That gives some clue but also makes the story all the more exciting.
Your Melfis.
| Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Fathers | 06 Jun 2010 |
| Reviewer: SnapesYukuai (Signed) |
- It's so interesting to see them interact as "family" especially because their roles begin to be a little bit more equal. Oh, and before I forget it for the third time: I LOVE VAMPYR!! reminds me a little bit of the dog in Peter Pan... just more Snape like, so even more to my taste. ^^
OMG, the end was hilarious and the scene before a wonderful mix between funny and sad!
Your Melfis.
| Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - His Mother | 06 Jun 2010 |
| Reviewer: SnapesYukuai (Signed) |
- What can I say other than, I can't wait to read the next chap and owe, what a sad and cute end of the chap.
It's terific to see them slowly getting along with each other, I like very much. And I like the fact that in some situations it's simply trying it out for both of them. Snape clueless is adorable.. I'm starting to ramble, sorry.
Have a nice and sunny week, your Melfis.