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Reviews by Kirinin
Post-OOTP, Snape must blow his cover as a spy to save Harry from Voldemort. Now they hate each other more than ever, but if their side is going to win, old enmities must be cast aside.
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: None Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Character Death, Torture
Chapters: 30 - Completed: No - Updated: 22 Apr 2010 / 22 Jan 2005 Series: None - Challenges: None
Wow! I'm really liking this so far. Great that you didn't magically transform the Dursleys into the Evil Dursleys - it's almost funny the way that they all show their 'concern' for Harry in this chapter. Good description of how Harry feels. I think it fits. :) You're Jocemum from ff-dot-net, eh? Glad to see another tale of yours after reading T&S and C&E. -K
Ah! Looks like this one's shaping up to be even better than your last (at least, the last one I read). A couple of lines stand out in their amazing-ness, lol: when "the last living Marauder looked back" I nearly started crying right then! Also, Petunia's statement about Lily, calling her "my sister" in such a context was really moving. Of course, when Vernon died, I nearly started crying, too... which just goes to show what good writing can do, because I didn't give a hoot for him before I read this story... likewise, your tactic of Harry taking the Dursleys through one at a time created a lot of tension and really tugged at the heartstrings. Good work! -K He didn't care about him anyway.
Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: None Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 25 Sep 2004 / 25 Sep 2004 Series: None - Challenges: None
Oh... don't I just wish Harry had woken. This is a great one-shot. Thanks! -K Harry needs help, and the one sent to the rescue is Snape. But what are Snape's true intentions? Help or Humiliation? Completed!
Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None Tags: None Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 19 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 12 Feb 2007 / 25 Jan 2005 Series: None - Challenges: None
This chapter is much better. You don't have Snape sweeping to Harry's rescue and immediately changing his opinion of Harry, which is what most do. And that is making me hit the 'next' button again. :) -K
You're managing to keep Snape inscrutable, which is all to the good. ;) -K
(While you, me, and the rest of the world's Snape fans are perfectly certain of his inherent goodness, Harry is not.) Nice job. :) -K
-K Author's Response: It's not veritaserum... just something Snape has that loosens one's inhibitions. :)
Then you came out with the line where you say that even if Harry asks, Snape isn't certain whether he will help him or not. That doesn't really seem consistent with everything else that's gone on. If Snape isn't willing to give help to an incredibly ill child who asks him for it, he's worthless as a human being and suddenly unpredictable as a character. Now, instead of Harry coming to the realization that Snape is a responsible adult who will care for him no matter how foolishly he acts, we have the dynamic that Harry must somehow *win* Severus's affection - and that Severus's affection is quite possibly conditional. -K Shortly before his fifteenth birthday, Harry receives a letter from the past that alters his entire life. Now it is up to him to reveal the truth to the other whom it concerns. But will he find the courage to do so or will he repeat his mother's mistake and wait until it's too late?
Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: None Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape > Severitus Challenge
Rated: T
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Warnings: Character Death
Chapters: 10 - Completed: No - Updated: 20 May 2007 / 29 Jan 2005 Series: None - Challenges: None
OMG! What I think about the story is that it's in one, unreadable mass! Please separate your work into paragraphs... -K At the end of Harry's fifth year everything changed. And when Snape answers a call for help during the summer afterward, everything changes again.
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: None Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 15 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 25 Nov 2005 / 06 Feb 2005 Series: Harry Potter and the Long Summer Series - Challenges: None
This looks intriguing so far! I am impressed. |
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