the Baby Dragon
Severus Snape was discovered as a spy mere days before the start of the school year. Thankfully, Albus had been working on a vague contingency plan for this possibility. It had been inspired by the question, “What would it take for Severus Snape to see that he was wrong about Harry Potter?”
The answer? Force Severus to go undercover as Alfonse “Eli” Hopkirk, a sixth year Gryffindor.
Takes Place: 6th Year
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Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape is Secretive
Tags: Alternate Universe, Deaged!Snape, Disguised!Snape, Gryffindor!Snape, Incognito!Snape, Injured!Harry
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by RaffaellaSnape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Romance/Het
Chapters: 24 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 02 Jan 2020 / 26 Sep 2019
Series: Forgiveness and Redemption - Challenges: None
Chapters: 24 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 02 Jan 2020 / 26 Sep 2019
Series: Forgiveness and Redemption - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 | 11 Nov 2019 |
| Reviewer: RaffaellaSnape (Signed) |
- I'm curious to read your next chapter
I hope you can update soon. Kisses from Raphael
Author's Response: thanks for the review!
| Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 | 15 Nov 2019 |
| Reviewer: RaffaellaSnape (Signed) |
- Nice chapter. I can't wait to read the continual of this story.
Author's Response: thank you!
| Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 | 18 Nov 2019 |
| Reviewer: RaffaellaSnape (Signed) |
- BeautifulI really appreciate the solution or rather the resolution that Snape and the others of the trio adopt to find Harry.
I can't wait to read the next chapter where I hope Eli or Snape interacts more with Harry
Anyway, congratulations.
Author's Response: Dobby to the rescue! And unfortunately it’ll be a little while longer before they get good one on one interaction but they’re the main characters so it’ll definitely happen! Thank you for the comment!!
| Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 | 19 Nov 2019 |
| Reviewer: RaffaellaSnape (Signed) |
- Interesting chapter.
I can't wait for you to update. I also don't deny that I'd like to see some extra interaction between sev and the golden trio or Harry. But I think there will be since we are in the first 14 chapters of this story.
Keep it up.
Author's Response: there probably will be but like we'll see how much i manage to cram in ldkfsfjdsl thank you for the review!
| Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 | 21 Nov 2019 |
| Reviewer: RaffaellaSnape (Signed) |
- Great chapter!!! I hope you update soon.
I understand Seamus' suspicion, but I'm afraid Eli might disapprove😉.
Author's Response: haha yeah i was picturing more bewilderment from snape than anything else but who knows, i don't think i cover his precise thoughts on that so feel free to interpret yourself :) thank you for the review!
| Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 | 22 Nov 2019 |
| Reviewer: RaffaellaSnape (Signed) |
- Interesting chapter.
When I read that the portrait, which interacts with Snape, was portrayed by an idiot I could not help but imagine Gilderoy Lockheart doing the spell and fail miseramen.
Can't wait to read your post
Kisses Raphael
Ps
Sorry if I made any mistakes but English is not my language.
Again a kiss from Naples (Italy).
Author's Response: I doubt Gilderoy Lockhart would even have the talent to paint a portrait in the first place let alone get to the point where he could attempt the spell!! But the image is definitely an amusing one! Your English is great and thank you so much for leaving a review in a language that's not yours!! it means a lot <3
| Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 | 27 Nov 2019 |
| Reviewer: RaffaellaSnape (Signed) |
- Great chapter. Poor Sev will have to wait to talk to Dumbledore. I can't wait to read the next chapter that you'll publish and
Kisses Raffaella 😉
Author's Response: he sure will have to wait! it'll be good for him tho ;) thank you for the review!!!
| Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 | 06 Dec 2019 |
| Reviewer: RaffaellaSnape (Signed) |
- The chapter is interesting. 😉😉😉
Author's Response: haha thanks, i thought so too :D
| Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 | 11 Dec 2019 |
| Reviewer: RaffaellaSnape (Signed) |
- Wow this chapter isn't bad 😉😉😉😉
The chapter was intriguing and I can't wait to read the Following.
And I don't deny that I'm curious about how Harry will react to discovering Eli's little secret.
Author's Response: thank you!! this chapter was really interesting to write tbh so I'm glad you thought it was interesting! And you'll have to wait to find out ;)
| Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 | 15 Dec 2019 |
| Reviewer: RaffaellaSnape (Signed) |
- The chapter is not bad and I can't wait to read the sequel. I believe that now that Eli is friends with Harry and then Severus begins to consider Harry different from his father Albus's plans will have to be reconsidered or he will have to find another Solution
Kisses from Raphael
Ps
I admit that the image of drunk Dumbledore singing Celine Dion was funny
Author's Response: thank you for commenting!