When an Occlumency lesson goes wrong, Snape learns more about Harry’s past than he ever wanted to—and it changes everything. But change doesn’t come easily, especially for two who have spent five years loathing each other’s very existence. Can Snape and Harry come to a mutual understanding of sorts to defeat their greatest enemy—themselves? Spring of 5th year, A/U. Completely written and posted in chapter installments.
Takes Place: 5th Year
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Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Stern
Tags: Injured!Harry, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by HiraiBella
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect, Rape, Romance/Het, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 40 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 31 Oct 2017 / 26 May 2017
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 40 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 31 Oct 2017 / 26 May 2017
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 | 18 Nov 2018 |
| Reviewer: HiraiBella (Signed) |
- I loved this story. The way you write is captivating, despite some cringy aspects that bothered me. I don't know if it's just me, but it feels really annoying reading accent all the time, especially when english is not my first choice. And, of course, there is the misconception about Parseltongue being dangerous and dark. I've read so many good stories who fail exploring this trait only beacause it's "evil" when it's just a gift. If talking to horses or bunnies were a thing, Parseltongue wouldn't be frowned upon, I guess.
Those were the only aspects that I didn't like and I thought it was fair talking about them with you, but I REALLY LOVED your story and your writing, specially what was made of the Dursleys. Not all stories talk about it, they think thak Harry leaving them is good enough or that death should be good revenge. I'm glad you made it about justice.
Thanks for this story, I really loved. Bye.