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Title: Chapter 37: Epilogue
| 28 Feb 2019
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Reviewer: wyvern65 (Signed)
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As always from you, awesome work. Thoroughly enjoyed this, having read and enjoyed the beginning many years ago. Loved the Moody/Snape interaction as well as the Snape/Harry. I always enjoy seeing different versions of the Golden trio/quartet and I particularly like the Teddy/Neville/Hermione group here and would like to see how Millicent meshes - she tends to be an underused character with regards to Harry.
I can only hope that at some point you'll be ready to come back to this particular universe and give us a sequel. Very intrigued to see how 2nd year might pan out without Dumbles in charge or, for that matter who might be running Hogwarts. Either Flitwick or McGonagall might make for interesting dynamics and of course since Lucius seems to be the same as usual, I can see the whole diary thing still happening. Oooh - dragon-Harry talking to Basilisk. Mmmm. Yeah, so much potential. Maybe, someday. ;)
Title: Chapter 26: A closer eye on him
| 28 Feb 2019
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Reviewer: wyvern65 (Signed)
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Brilliant. I normally dislike drabble or similar format, but condensing things like this works so well here to intensify both plot progression and emotions that it works really well. :)
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 6
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 28 May 2018 / 28 May 2018
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 6: I just want to live
| 28 Feb 2019
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Reviewer: wyvern65 (Signed)
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Really enjoyed this. It does feel like there are some loose ends, so I'm glad you may be planning on a sequel. I'm not sure why Harry might be willing to live with Voldemort since the Goblins have been looking after him so well and being with them keeps him both neutral and protected. I haven't noticed any hint towards him wanting revenge on Dumbles, but that would certainly explain it. In any case, a thoroughly enjoyable read. Thank you.
Title: Chapter 6: Yet to wake
| 28 Feb 2019
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Reviewer: wyvern65 (Signed)
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Arrgh!! Cliffhanger! Briliant job. You've carried on the same level intensity in these as the previous segment. I'm also loving the way all four House Heads are continuing to be involved and it looks like Hogwarts herself is now taking a hand. I can only hope this is something you feel the urge to come back to before too long. Very much enjoying, as always.
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