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A disabled Harry comes to Hogwarts story. Everyone expects him to be like his dad, but how can he be with such a different past? A Slytherin Harry takes on Hogwarts in an unusual way.

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Physical Impairment, Runaway, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Master Snape > Apprentice Harry
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Bashing, Neglect, Violence
Chapters: 37 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 21 Aug 2017 / 29 Mar 2011
Series: None - Challenges: More Than Meets the Eye, Hoarding Food
Title: Chapter 37: Epilogue 28 Feb 2019
Reviewer: wyvern65 (Signed)
    As always from you, awesome work. Thoroughly enjoyed this, having read and enjoyed the beginning many years ago. Loved the Moody/Snape interaction as well as the Snape/Harry. I always enjoy seeing different versions of the Golden trio/quartet and I particularly like the Teddy/Neville/Hermione group here and would like to see how Millicent meshes - she tends to be an underused character with regards to Harry.

    I can only hope that at some point you'll be ready to come back to this particular universe and give us a sequel. Very intrigued to see how 2nd year might pan out without Dumbles in charge or, for that matter who might be running Hogwarts. Either Flitwick or McGonagall might make for interesting dynamics and of course since Lucius seems to be the same as usual, I can see the whole diary thing still happening. Oooh - dragon-Harry talking to Basilisk. Mmmm. Yeah, so much potential. Maybe, someday. ;)

Harry wants what no one has thought to give him. Safety. Security. The ability to rely on someone else. And he's willing to go to any length to find it.

Takes Place: 2nd summer, 2nd Year - Snape flavour: Overly-protective Snape, Snape is Stern
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 26 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 19 Jun 2018 / 26 May 2018
Series: Wanted - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 26: A closer eye on him 28 Feb 2019
Reviewer: wyvern65 (Signed)
    Brilliant. I normally dislike drabble or similar format, but condensing things like this works so well here to intensify both plot progression and emotions that it works really well. :)

"What if, I don't want to be a murderer?"

Takes Place: 5th Year, 6th summer - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape is Secretive
Tags: Alternate Universe, New Identity!Harry
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 6 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 28 May 2018 / 28 May 2018
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 6: I just want to live 28 Feb 2019
Reviewer: wyvern65 (Signed)
    Really enjoyed this. It does feel like there are some loose ends, so I'm glad you may be planning on a sequel. I'm not sure why Harry might be willing to live with Voldemort since the Goblins have been looking after him so well and being with them keeps him both neutral and protected. I haven't noticed any hint towards him wanting revenge on Dumbles, but that would certainly explain it. In any case, a thoroughly enjoyable read. Thank you.

If Snape wants to insist that Harry's life is valuable, then he's going to have to show him. By hook or by crook.

Takes Place: 2nd Year - Snape flavour: Snape Comforts, Snape is Desperate, Snape is Kind
Tags: Alternate Universe, Injured!Harry
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 6 - Completed: No - Updated: 27 Jun 2018 / 20 Jun 2018
Series: Wanted - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 6: Yet to wake 28 Feb 2019
Reviewer: wyvern65 (Signed)
    Arrgh!! Cliffhanger! Briliant job. You've carried on the same level intensity in these as the previous segment. I'm also loving the way all four House Heads are continuing to be involved and it looks like Hogwarts herself is now taking a hand. I can only hope this is something you feel the urge to come back to before too long. Very much enjoying, as always.

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