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Reviews by Aeryun
Desperate to escape his guilt and nightmares after the third task, Harry transforms into a hawk by accident and ends up breaking both wings and suffering partial memory loss. He is found by Snape, and while the professor nurses him back to health discovers the truth about Severus and who are really his friends and enemies at Hogwarts.
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: Alternate Universe, Azkaban Character, Creature!fic Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Character Death, Profanity, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 34 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 18 May 2009 / 20 Mar 2009 Series: Broken Wings - Challenges: Animagus Accident
Wonderful chapter. I can't believe how quickly you update. I felt lucky if I could churn out a chapter a month, much less so many in a week. (please don't burn yourself out! I like you, and your story a lot!) *hugs* Aery Author's Response: Aww, well, this wasn't just a few letters, it was more like the whole paper. My eyes nearly crossed once because a student decided to write in "micro" letters--where you almost needed a magnifying glass to read it. Don't ask me why she chose to do that. Myabe it was a dare? When my Muse is screaming in my ear, I find it hard to ignore. It's almost compulsive. If I don't write, I can't sleep, or vice versa. I love writing, it's recreational therapy and fun for me, so i don;t think I'll ever get burnt out. But thank you for worrying. :) *hugs back*
Author's Response: Yes, I had fun writing this chapter. I always felt he got away with a bit too much in the original series. Nobody ever really called him on the awful way he behaved in canon. It kind of got shrugged off. That was not right, which is why that doesn't happen in my fic. More has been posted!
Author's Response: It's going to get even more intense next chapter. Get ready for a fight!
Author's Response: All right, more has been posted! Thanks for R & R ing!
Author's Response: Yes, two somebodies, in fact! Just wait and see! Severus is going to do something nasty!
Author's Response: Yes, I know. Harry needed to do that, both for himself and to prove to Albus that he was through being manipulated for the greater good of anything. I think Albus is now aware that he might have lost both harry and Sev by acting as he did and will try his best to make amends next time he sees them.
Author's Response: Well, they might and then again, they might not. Thanks for your review!
Author's Response: It's sort of both. Thanks as always for all your kind reviews! Sequel to Broken Wings! Harry & Severus quest for the remaining Horcruxes. Can they fulfill the prophecy of Two Hawks Hunting and destroy Voldemort forever? AU, pre-HBP, HBP/DH noncompliant! No slash, mentor/guardian fic!
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Azkaban Character, Creature!fic, Kidnapped Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Character Death, Profanity, Romance/Het, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 63 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 03 May 2010 / 22 May 2009 Series: Broken Wings - Challenges: None
The story is wonderful so far. I loved Harry's punishment, but do not like that Severus is putting off treatment for Harry's Clausterphobia until after Voldy is taken care of. If he truely cared about his ward, then his ward's well being would ALWAYS come first. That doesn't seem to be the case here. Also, at first you have it that Severus has to be in Hawk form to understand Hedwig, then half way through the chapter you switched over to him understand her like Harry can while being human too. Just a slight plot hole. :D Author's Response: You have to add it to your favorite stories list, then you should get the alerts. At least that's what another reviewer told me. Add to Favorites and you'll get updates everytime I post a new chapter. Severus really has no choice at this point. Finding the Horcruxes is a race against time and the DE who are trying to resurrect the scumbag, though I haven't shown it yet, chapter nine will reveal just what the bad guys have been doing while Sev and Harry are searching and they will find out that Sev betrayed them and hunt them down and plot to gather again and do the ritual to bring Voldy back--again--from the dead. Severus cares very much for Harry, but the plain truth is that this is a covert war and Harry needs weeks with a therapist and they just don't have time to do that and THEN find the Horcruxes. Each time Voldy is resurrected, he comes back stronger than before and harder to kill, and that is not something they want to happen. Harry knows that and he can handle the claustrophobia, since it is not acute, and Sev will do his best to make sure no one puts his ward in a small space or a locked room. A lot of things have to be put on hold, including some of Severus's own problems, he needs a good therapist too, he has a lot of pent up guilt and turmoil from his days as a spy and watching all those awful things the DE did, but it all has to wait till the Horcruxes are gotten rid of. Plus working with handicaps makes the characters more human, since they have to overcome trouble from without and within. Sev actually can't truly understand her, but he gets the gist of what she means, sorry if that were unclear. I know I talk to my animals as if I understand them sometimes and I don't, that was what Severus was doing. Eventually, the longer he spends in hawk form, he will gain the ability to understand bird speech. Thanks for reviewing! Harry comes to school missing one eye, and pratically mute. He is sorted into Slytherin. Severus Snape dislikes all things Potter. Can he get over his hatred to see the truth?
Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Physical Impairment, Slytherin!Harry, Snape-meets-Dursleys, SuperPower! Harry Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Profanity
Chapters: 24 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 29 May 2010 / 11 Sep 2009 Series: None - Challenges: More Than Meets the Eye
I really hope Severus can help Harry heal. Kids are resilent on their own...I can't help but think that when you add magic to that, just about anything not caused by dark magic should be able to be healed. Can't wait for more! These little bits are killing me. :D Author's Response: *snickers* I'll give you a little tid bit---we're almost done with this story. Don't worry about Luc. I may be mean, but I don't believe that this Lucius will turn on Sev. TftR. We'll see what happens next. |
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