the Grey Cat
Slytherin!
A visit to The Burrow from a frustrated Arabella Figg brings about a series of events that causes a paradigm shift for both Harry Potter and Professor Severus Snape.
Takes Place: 3rd summer
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Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Stern
Tags: Abuse Recovery
Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by SaraviBoo
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Emotional Abuse, Neglect, Physical Abuse, Profanity
Chapters: 15 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 01 Aug 2021 / 08 May 2021
Series: None - Challenges: A day to remember
Chapters: 15 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 01 Aug 2021 / 08 May 2021
Series: None - Challenges: A day to remember
| Title: Chapter 15: Manna | 06 Sep 2022 |
| Reviewer: SaraviBoo (Signed) |
- This story has a lot of potential. Your writing is solid. However, it felt like you wrote the start of a much more complex story and then skipped all the interesting character growth and growing pains to present us with a tidy ending that felt decidedly disconnected from the first half of the story. I would love to see you fill in the gap and make this into a very fine piece of fiction. As it stands, it simply feels rather unfinished. Regardless, thank you for sharing your work and I will be watching for more. Your writing has excellent potential. Good luck.