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Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
| 23 Apr 2012
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Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed)
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I've re-read "Adventures in Babysitting" several times, and I was thrilled to see you're continuing the sequel! Good start so far - I particularly liked the introduction about Snape's people skills.
Title: Chapter 6: Invasion of the Sickies!
| 13 Sep 2010
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Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed)
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Severus is doing a great job with the kids... poor guy, no wonder he came down with the flu as well.
My favorite bit was Harry hiding under his bed and Snape coaxing him out.
Looking forward to the next!
Title: Chapter 7: With a Tug of the Heart
| 16 Sep 2010
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Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed)
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Very good chapter. Hermione's underpants made me laugh out loud. She's going to be mortified when she's re-aged!
I really enjoyed Sev's childhood memories, too. You showed that he wasn't the only one at fault that he and Lily drifted apart, because she simply refused to accept his honest apologies. I really liked that.
Looking forward to more!
Title: Chapter 2: The Fate of Severus Snape
| 17 Aug 2010
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Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed)
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Great chapter! I loved the bit about Rexy and Blanky (and of course Snape's hippogriff quilt, lol!). I'd love to see some more interaction with Ron, and maybe Malfoy?
Looking forward to the next update!
Title: Chapter 1: A Disaster in the Making
| 15 Aug 2010
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Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed)
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Sneaky Dumbledore! And poor Severus! Indeed, no way he is getting out of this one...
A great opening chapter, I loved Hermione's non-stop talking, and I think Snape's POV works really well.
Please update soon!
Title: Chapter 4: The Perfect Gift
| 30 Aug 2010
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Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed)
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Great chapter! Severus never stood a chance, did he?
Looking forward to the next update!
Title: Chapter 5: Revelations of the Granger Sort
| 04 Sep 2010
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Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed)
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Poor Hermione! I really liked how you described her reason for wanting to be good at everything she does.
Great chapter, looking forward to the next (Harry's going to get the flu, too, isn't he?)
Thanks for updating!
Title: Chapter 9: A Day With Draco
| 29 Sep 2010
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Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed)
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Very good chapter! It's always fun to see two Slytherins interacting. Snape going down "Suicide Ridge" was very well written and fun to read.
Sorry to hear about your dog.
Title: Chapter 15: Epilogue
| 31 Oct 2010
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Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed)
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What a great chapter to wrap things up! You did a wonderful job with this story, and I was looking forward to every new chapter (sorry I didn't review all of them, real life got kind of hectic...). I'm so glad Harry and the others remembered what Severus had done for them after they changed back; it would have been so sad if they re-aged only to hate him again! I loved your side-story about Draco and his interaction with the kids (he must really like Hermione to attend her tea party, though ;)...). I'll definitely be coming back to re-read this one, and I'm looking forward to seeing more from you! Thank you, and happy Halloween, Sita
When he finds out that Lockhart’s specialty is memory charms, he feels sick, even though he’s not sure why.
Takes Place: 6th summer, 3rd summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Rape
Chapters: 7
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Completed: No
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Updated: 02 Apr 2012 / 03 Oct 2010
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
| 12 Mar 2012
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Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed)
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This story is so intriguing. Snape is very much Snape - snarky, bitter, impatient - but it still makes sense that he would try all he can to help Harry.
Hope you update soon!
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