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Reviews For Harry Potter and the Ferratilis Potion
I really love the personality of your Snape he is so grumpy…and serious but still you manage to make him act caring in a way….every now and then… It was very funny that bit of teenage angst, I mean when Harry was naked and all that jeje. Oh I know its kind of a cliché but it would have been nice in the argument that arouse during breakfast, when Harry got very angry, to make him shake things as a consequence of a stream of uncontrolled wandless magic, or something of the sort. It wouldn’t be illogical to think of this kind of magic to be linked to emotions…and in your story he has done some… I was quiet surprise by rons reaction, very mature of him. I had a great time reading Harry and Snape´s conversation over the paper work, they have this special chemistry (I don’t have a better word to describe it, at least not in English…: ) between them. I find reassuring that Snape has been thinking ahead and is taking care of everything. Keep writing, so I can keep reading :) Lynx Lw
I expect him to have had serious troubles with the past couple of days; and, no matter how fond I am of Draco and Harry getting along, it's entirely possible that Draco will hate him more than ever, blaming him for everything. I hope, through the re-introduction of Draco, you at least partially allude to Lucius's change of heart. Funny, I thought your Ron wouldn't be so upset as the others concerning Snape's guardianship of Harry. After all, he's the one who's been bringing Harry to Snape all along, in the night - and, there was that time where he brought Harry down to the Gryffindor common room and Harry was swept up into Snape's arms. Ron, more than anybody save Harry and Snape themselves, has seen their true relationship firsthand. Up until now he has viewed it with relative equanimity. I think (hope?) that once he gets over his surprise, he will stop being disapproving. Also, Ron's relationship with Harry has turned distinctly big-brother-like, a shift that Ron seems to have enjoyed. I think Ron will continue to be very protective of Harry despite the fact that Harry has regained his age and height, and maybe this is why he had such a strong reaction to Harry not becoming a Weasley: he half *already* thought he had a little brother. It doesn't seem like he'll want to let go of that new role. So far this story is great! I hope you continue soon. -Kirinin Author's Response: Thanks for all the reviews. I really do enjoy reading them all. As for a couple of your questions/comments. Um the first, Ron's reaction- I wanted him to react as he did, because he'd just been preparing up a room for his "little" brother. He won't stay mad forever. Another of your comments, I did give Lucius a reason... and I know I haven't said it yet... perhaps it's well overdue. It's hard to juggle so many story elements, but I'll try to work it in the next chapter or so...
Author's Response: Yep... I don't plan to abandon the fic... but it may need to wait till I'm done with school. It's very hard (for me) to juggle both.
what I live in Poole in Dorset. Your right it is very pretty with lots of green fields and pretty quaint villages dotted through out the county. Large towns as well lots of history, and the sea just up the road including the harbour which is the second largest natural harbour in the world only to Sydney in Australia. Author's Response: Cool! It sounds awesome... I'm really excited to find someone from Dorset. I hope to do a lot of research on the county before I write any scenes in it. I look forward to your reviews... it would be wonderful if you could point out errors or something. I would hate to mess up the area completly.
Author's Response: Why thank you Jan! I always look forward to your reviews (almost as much as I look forward to muggleville ^_^ updates). This chapter was difficult for me to write and took a long time, so I'm glad that it turned out okay. Again, thanks for commenting.
Author's Response: Yeah, I didn't think about that. I mean the only two people who agree with Harry's decision are Harry and Snape... And one can't really describe Snape as "happy". |
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